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I think the ground and sky are too basicly shaded. Pretty good proportions on the bodies. Not bad.

 

 

 

EDIT: dont copy and paste the girls. Make a diff one you lazy bum

 

 

 

they have different hair... :anxious:

 

 

 

hmm, looks quite like mxm's work...

 

 

 

i do like that moon i must say.

 

 

 

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they have different hair... :anxious:

 

 

 

hmm, looks quite like mxm's work...

 

 

 

i do like that moon i must say.

 

 

 

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Yeah well their hair is like 30 pixels total each...so not much of a change.

 

 

 

Mxm's has more detail. The faces and armor are slightly shaded but not near to the extent that mxms is. Moon is nice :-$

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I will say that the girls heads are from mxm's i just couldnt get them to proportion(that took about a week before i did that)- but apart from that the rest is mine

 

 

 

 

 

Edit:Thanks for saying about the moon, I going to get everything detailed to thats extent, ill keep going back to it everytime im not doing something.

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I'd suggest you to remove that picture before misterxman sees it. he throws rippers of any kind in to a eternal pit of fire, flames and all nasty things.

 

 

 

or at least do those heads again - for your own sake (if they are ripped)

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The moon just looks cut, not shrowded by clouds or darkness. :? Try and make a softer fade to the moon.

 

Dither the ground and add more to it. Something like rocks or dead trees. (Assuming this is the wildy).

 

Lightning looks weird, perhaps a flash/glow of light from it? It looks like a yellow twig at the moment.

 

Sign looks very weird, the stake points one direction and the actual sign the opposite. I think it should just all lean to the left.

 

Instead of having the "Respect it's all in the Look" over the moon, move the chars (and possibly the sign) to the left slightly and have it over the ground. You have nothing over the ground and you cover up the very good moon. (Speaking of the text; It should be "Respect, it's all in the look". You have a random capital L and it needs a comma or semi-colon)

 

Text on the sign looks distorted.

 

His arms. They're floating off of his body. Looks very weird.

 

 

 

Sorry if that sounds a lot, I just like to be precise. :-$

 

 

 

One question though; why is the moon and chars really detailed, and then the ground and clouds... not? A signature looks better if it is consisted through and through.

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There's some ripped work in there from mine, one being same face as guy with shark here:

 

 

 

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Leg armor:

 

 

 

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Whip resized from this:

 

 

 

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Ripping will not be tolerated, do not take someone's work as your own because people will always find out, no matter how small or big a rip is. :shame:

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