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What's my signature missing...?


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Like the title says, what do you think is missing from my sig? I notice I need something on the left. And i'm going to add in a bit of detail (coins lying on the ground and that). But in your personal opinion what's missing. :?

 

 

 

 

 

first thing is that the gold looks like a mountain out of 1 rock and not like a moutain out of a million rocks so go shade it better and not only use 2 colors.

 

also the ground and the wall can use better shading that that 3 line shading.

 

 

 

last thing than; have fun with makin it

 

 

 

Thanks to rik's comment i updated the sig to:

 

 

 

*UPDATED*

 

 

 

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Does the floor look better :-k and also i cleaned up SOME ligns.

 

 

 

 

 

*UPDATED AGAIN*

 

 

 

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Added a new background in the doorframe thing...And a new boarder.

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first thing is that the gold looks like a mountain out of 1 rock and not like a moutain out of a million rocks :? so go shade it better and not only use 2 colors.

 

also the ground and the wall can use better shading that that 3 line shading.

 

 

 

last thing than; have fun with makin it ::'

 

 

 

~rik

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what it lacks is:

 

 

 

~an original idea... (saw this and was like zmg another terly wanabe.... cad just said it first>.<)

 

~bigger rares

 

~your floor is from rsc, and the piles look like something outta rsc too...

 

~shade the coins...

 

~add a light source

 

~why is there a volcano on your front porch?

 

~why is the door so small?

 

~why is the outline to the door black?

 

~why is the sky RED???

 

~why am i waisting my time typing all this out? lol.

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what it lacks is:

 

 

 

~an original idea... (saw this and was like zmg another terly wanabe.... cad just said it first>.<)

 

~bigger rares

 

~your floor is from rsc, and the piles look like something outta rsc too...

 

~shade the coins...

 

~add a light source

 

~why is there a volcano on your front porch?

 

~why is the door so small?

 

~why is the outline to the door black?

 

~why is the sky RED???

 

~why am i waisting my time typing all this out? lol.

 

 

 

Well this is my second pixel...My first one was plain horrible and i was pretty much just doodling so i don't think it should count...? But ok here's what i'm planning to do...

 

~I'm going to re do the rares and make them bigger.

 

~Actually my planks on the ground is from Tip.It's forum background "Chronicles" and i just used a peice and Ctrl C and Ctrl V'd it onto MSpaint. Impossible since i don't play rsc...? Or have never played. And the coin piles i just used the spray can...

 

~I don't get how you shade coins? I just used the spraycan thing.

 

~It's supposed to be the wilderness outside on my porch, but i'm going to make the door closed with one of those things you twist to open...

 

~I'll make the door a bit bigger....

 

~What's wrong with a black outline of the door?

 

~The sky is red because i wanted the wilderness look, but i'll take it out.

 

~Funny quote there...Lol.

 

 

 

Anyways, those comments helped, a lot. I'll edit it as soon as i can.

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