Aprz Posted October 6, 2006 Share Posted October 6, 2006 I going to add a house behind him and then work on the sky. BTW... the purple and the red sun will not be in the final signature. I am just using the red sun as a reference for my lighting and the purple so it is easier to see when I draw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runemetsa Posted October 6, 2006 Share Posted October 6, 2006 nice detailing with grass. Main character looks good but the pose is bit unoriginal IMO. good shading with hair. Fence looks kinda... flat. Looks good so far. [Star Wreck][PM me][My gallery][DeviantArt][Cool T-shirts!][iron Sky - Trailer is now out!] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
operationfl Posted October 6, 2006 Share Posted October 6, 2006 Not bad - seems a bit....boring though? -o- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aprz Posted October 8, 2006 Author Share Posted October 8, 2006 Well, I am still working on it so this is probably the best time for CC. Hm.. For the stance, I couldn't think of much. There is just only so much I could do that would be realistic enough. Seriously, why would we want to break the mimes back or tear off his head? :lol: Forgot about fences not being flat. :shock: I'll fix that. :) After I get that fixed up, I am going to start working on the building that will be behind the mime (kind of Ardougne style kind of homes). The door will be open and goodies will be inside including a darth vader helmet XD sinces I am a Star Wars fan. The building will be close to the mime. From the build, there will be a path that goes under the mime. Next to the path infront of the fence will be a mail box displaying APRZ on the side which stands for me pretty much. Then I will begin making hills behind the grass and maybe some further away houses and farms. After that, I will work on the sky and be pretty much done. If you have any suggestions, throw 'em now before it becomes impossible for me to use 'em. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rose_2_Pure Posted October 8, 2006 Share Posted October 8, 2006 His shoulders are too broad it's not his stance. :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fortress2000 Posted October 8, 2006 Share Posted October 8, 2006 Bad points = Person, fence, sun border. A little more detail please? Good points = None GREAT points = THE GRASS! Lovely work there, liking that style there, very realistic. =D> :thumbsup: \ Writing in colour was fun while it lasted...The Tip.It. Furry! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aprz Posted October 8, 2006 Author Share Posted October 8, 2006 Sounds like I am finally starting to get grass down. My attempts before this wasn't so good people thought. :\ You mentioned sun? The sun is not going to be there in the end, just representing where my light is coming from. Aw.. borders bad? :( I've been doing borders like that for awhile now. At least I am getting more practice out of this. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eckered Posted October 8, 2006 Share Posted October 8, 2006 border needs to be a darker brown and a deeper gold. the guys arms seem to be jutting out of the body, may want to fix that. the grass is going to be a lighter color as it neers the sun, so i sugest you sketch out where the sun is, and change the grass so it fades into the sky more. edit: also, hope you dont mind if i use your border style for something, if you do mind, post here or pm me. wop wop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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