I going to add a house behind him and then work on the sky.

 

 

 

BTW... the purple and the red sun will not be in the final signature. I am just using the red sun as a reference for my lighting and the purple so it is easier to see when I draw.

nice detailing with grass.

 

Main character looks good but the pose is bit unoriginal IMO. good shading with hair.

 

 

 

Fence looks kinda... flat.

 

Looks good so far.

Not bad - seems a bit....boring though?

Well, I am still working on it so this is probably the best time for CC.

 

 

 

Hm.. For the stance, I couldn't think of much. There is just only so much I could do that would be realistic enough. Seriously, why would we want to break the mimes back or tear off his head? :lol:

 

 

 

Forgot about fences not being flat. :shock: I'll fix that. :)

 

 

 

After I get that fixed up, I am going to start working on the building that will be behind the mime (kind of Ardougne style kind of homes). The door will be open and goodies will be inside including a darth vader helmet XD sinces I am a Star Wars fan. The building will be close to the mime. From the build, there will be a path that goes under the mime. Next to the path infront of the fence will be a mail box displaying APRZ on the side which stands for me pretty much. Then I will begin making hills behind the grass and maybe some further away houses and farms. After that, I will work on the sky and be pretty much done.

 

 

 

If you have any suggestions, throw 'em now before it becomes impossible for me to use 'em. :)

His shoulders are too broad it's not his stance. :wink:

Bad points = Person, fence, sun border. A little more detail please?

 

 

 

Good points = None

 

 

 

GREAT points = THE GRASS! Lovely work there, liking that style there, very realistic. =D> :thumbsup: \

Sounds like I am finally starting to get grass down. My attempts before this wasn't so good people thought. :\

 

 

 

You mentioned sun? The sun is not going to be there in the end, just representing where my light is coming from.

 

 

 

Aw.. borders bad? :( I've been doing borders like that for awhile now.

 

 

 

At least I am getting more practice out of this. :P

border needs to be a darker brown and a deeper gold. the guys arms seem to be jutting out of the body, may want to fix that. the grass is going to be a lighter color as it neers the sun, so i sugest you sketch out where the sun is, and change the grass so it fades into the sky more.

 

 

 

edit: also, hope you dont mind if i use your border style for something, if you do mind, post here or pm me.