October 10, 200619 yr http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/41155022/ Crap.... *see above* http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/41155382/ *read description... i could have done WAY better on both of them but time restraints in school prevented so... Crits, heavy ones please... especially on the first one.
October 10, 200619 yr I really like the secound one, more my type of art. Only suggetion I can make is have someone cheat for you on your matting. :
October 10, 200619 yr I dont know if this is just the scanner doing this, but on the first one- its too dark around the edges and too light around the dolls waist area also i think the edges of the doll are too blurred in with the background, its quite hard to tell whats doll and what isnt overall its pretty good i like it
October 10, 200619 yr Quite nice, though the anatomy on the second one looks a little strange. He seems to be leanding to one side, whilst walking straight.... :-k The first one.... too dark. Also, I can't really make out what it is... A person in the middle, then what? Strange, but nice. Total..... :-k 8.5/10 Writing in colour was fun while it lasted...The Tip.It. Furry! :D
October 10, 200619 yr Author I dont know if this is just the scanner doing this, but on the first one- its too dark around the edges and too light around the dolls waist area also i think the edges of the doll are too blurred in with the background, its quite hard to tell whats doll and what isnt overall its pretty good i like it Didnt scan - took pic with a digital camera + flash, so what ur seeing, im guessing, i the flash reflecting off of the paper. Also the blurring is either my cameras fault, or crop/resize fault... in real life it its easily distinguised but my camera is quite old and ive been known to have shaky hands which may be the cause. Also i re-sized it from a much larger size and i didnt sharpen it after doing so, so it may also have been blurred slightly from that. Quite nice, though the anatomy on the second one looks a little strange. He seems to be leanding to one side, whilst walking straight.... :-k The first one.... too dark. Also, I can't really make out what it is... A person in the middle, then what? Strange, but nice. Total..... :-k 8.5/10 http://parsec-santa.com/art/images/vincent.jpg Original by Vincent Van Gogh. as you can see i tried to depict the same pose. As for "The first one.... too dark. Also, I can't really make out what it is... A person in the middle, then what? Strange, but nice." It is a person in the middle, although i advise you to read the title of the work ;) Thanks for the crits everyone.
October 11, 200619 yr Loving the second one. :D ___ kuroi do u wow?Cassiius|Level 70 Night Elf Preist|RunetotemSambora|Level 37 Tauren Shaman|BurningLegion
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