Because I really wanna share the artworks I do and get suggestions on how to become better.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

fair enough...so i'll give you suggestions

 

 

 

you need SHADING. Shading gives perspective and makes the object you are drawing look far more realistic.(which most of your stuff doesn't)

 

 

 

also ANATOMY that groudon looks like...well never mind what it looks like. It just doesn't look any thing like a Groudon

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

compare your groudon to my googled groudon

 

 

 

 

 

 

They don't look alike do they? No one expects you to make it look THAT good(well most of us) but it needs to look at least decently similar

 

 

 

Shading is what made this^^ groudon look realistic.

 

 

 

oekay thar yoo go

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Besides I've seen many pictures on this forum that took few seconds.

 

 

 

but that doesn't necesarily mean that they are good right

 

If you didn't put any effort into your work, why post them then?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Because I really wanna share the artworks I do and get suggestions on how to become better.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Besides I've seen many pictures on this forum that took few seconds.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

well you shouldn't there is a sticky about posting your first work/bad work up there at the top of the page... it clearly states that if

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A. you don't think it looks good

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

or

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

B. its your first attempt

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Think about it before you post... maybe think "hey if i post this is there any specific needs in my work that i need to be aware of" because basically what you have shown us so far is that you can' draw a straight line and like gaudy colors...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Most people post here to get some C\C for their next work... or post wip's so that they can implement the C\C into the work they are doing at that point in time...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The work you posted needs so much help its quite obvious that you didn't even think when you were drawing... Your newer ones i expect to be much improved but that doesn't excuse you for wasteing peoples time with posting (don't mean to be mean just telling the truth as i see it) terrible colors on white bg...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway, as you seem insistant to say that you can do better and make a nice piece of work then go do it!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Don't say you can, proove it

Al right, I will use that sticky. Please close this thread, I will pm a mod then I'm finished making artwork that took me at least an hour.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edit: I also am worried to get banned from Tip.it forums for posting this thread, I really hope that's not gonna happen.

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