Is it any good? i tried a different style, as usually when i try for pixel style they aren't that good, is this any good? Also give some C/C if you can and ideas for it, thanks.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

UPDATED!

 

 

 

Fixed leg, changed waves coming in, changed ROCK (not turd lol) will be changing foot and making sand look wet where its come in (thanks qwality) mega, im not shading it cause i was going more for cartoon than pixel, dunno what to do with sand i dont mind it as it is to be honest

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

FINISHED!

Mmk...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sand- you need to work on making it look more like sand... yours just looks like yellow with some back dots thrown in there

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Shells - nice touch but the white shells look a bit plain...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

No crabs??

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ocean- you need to have more ripples+wave effects on the shore.. the water isn't just stagnent... it is moving and flowing across the sand..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Feet- you need to work on the placement of the feet... the far one is fine but the one that sticks straight out looks a bit off... where did his ankle go?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Leg- the far leg needs a bit of a touch up looks a bit too thin...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Whats he lying against? a pile of dung...if not why is a it grey...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Border- good least you added that in there!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Farther out the white dots get closer together- is this sopposed to show that ocean getting deeper? or perhaps the sun relecting off the ocean... It needs a but of clearing uo...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Overall not terrible... you need to work on the sand... and the short waves... also your shadeing doesn't have ANY dithering in it... you need dithering... need it bad... :D

shade it, and thats really all, i actually like it :thumbsup:

shouldn't there be a small amount of space wet from when the waves come in and out? (if it's an ocean of course), and the sand needs to have some different colors in it, it looks weird all the same

add some more texture to the sand, after all sand is not all flat.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Maybe some foot prints or something

Aye, you do beink needink to shade the saaaand, yaaaa? :wink: The ditherink............it no be working.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I have a wonderful sand tutorial; Here

Eh, it's alright. I could see more shading in a way like more colours chaing the colour...so basically not such a big transition of colours.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Make it like a little bit lighter then a little bit then a little more, not just dark, light.

bump

Still way over-dithered. Makes my computer screen wavy.

I still don't see any shading.... :shock:

I still don't see any shading.... :shock:

 

 

 

yeah i dont wanna shade it like a normal pixel sig i tried but it looked rubbish so i just left im happy with him like that

 

I still don't see any shading.... :shock:

 

 

 

yeah i dont wanna shade it like a normal pixel sig i tried but it looked rubbish so i just left im happy with him like that

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

may i attempt shading on him?

 

 

I still don't see any shading.... :shock:

 

 

 

yeah i dont wanna shade it like a normal pixel sig i tried but it looked rubbish so i just left im happy with him like that

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

may i attempt shading on him?

 

 

 

sure thing :D