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The font is wierd but other than that i LUV it. Great job on the backround and that picture of him looks cool and stands out. I Think that you should maybe change the text to white and make a white border that matches the text. And maybe have an animation like this:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(Text) fade in,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and then: (text) fade out.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And then: Fade in (Slain in resident,)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And then Fade out,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And then: Fade in (Slain in real life.)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And then: fade out.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But without the: ().

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

If you can make the animation go slow.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

D3M0NX 0ut

first thing i noticed was that the bg looks like it was cloned. also, change the font and add a border.

ur improving =D> , mabye try to start blending some of your renders :-k

first thing i noticed was that the bg looks like it was cloned. also, change the font and add a border.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yeah for some reason it looks fishy. I can almost tell a trace of a 3D image in it, but I'm going to be on the other side and asume its a brush.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyways, your.. improving but the cloned background just doesn't cut it.

Text is too small, and sig is too small, and character/render is not like background, meaby add grey color to background?