L337 xmas pixel [update #5]- bg linework almost done

[Darrel104]

The sidewalk should be a right angle from the street.

[dark_shadow]

fixed up all the perspectives, thanks for the sidewalk comment darrel, helped me figure out what the perspectives should actually look like :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

still nowhere near finished the linework.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ideas on how to effectivly merge the mountains with the back of the houses is appreciated!

[Talset65]

wow that's awsome :D

[Wisp]

quite ghood. i like the shading on santa

[Kinslayer777]

I like it, very fuzzy, not much dimension though, but I can see you're working on that + sort of there's little that can be done without restarting.

[dark_shadow]

thanks for the comments :) im probably gonna be bad and slack off and just leave the perspective. i know its still wrong, but its 'close enough'; ive played with it for ages, if i keep trying to fix it ill get sick of this pixel and scrap it, and i dont wanna do that...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

as you can see i kinda did the sky, though might add an animated shooting star later, and i did one of the bins.. lol. this pixel is going to take forever :shock:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ok, every time i do pixels and post on tip it, i seem to have 2 versions of the same pixel at some stage. so heres the two versions again. "A" has the original santa, sleigh and reindeers that i pixelled, "B" has a darkened, higher contrasted version of santa, the sleigh and the deer. which do you prefer, remembering its going to be a dark night? should i re do "B" and lessen the contrast of the colours?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

"A"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

"B"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[Darrel104]

Maybe you can merge the hills and the houses by a simple fence. I like the darker version better but it would look bad with such dark grass like that. Maybe make you moon brighter, it looks quite dual for a moon right now. Anther thing that might need to be redone is your garbage can handle. The mail box that is closest shouldnt be facing the same way as the one to the right. You might want to get rid of your black lines on closest chimney and fix the perspective on the farther ones, you should only have 4 diffrent angles on each on them.