there it is hope you guys like it

Heheh like parenthesis...but it needs detail you think eh? you're still working on it right?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(Boring house, why are they in a house anyway :P, and prospective seems off)

His armor looks like sleeves. :shock: It doesn't really seem like he's in the house, but outside of a house without a fourth wall. I like what you're getting at with the sword and all, but have him holding up the sword so that everyone can tell what he's holding. As for detail, I would only had a bit of pillow shading, since you are calling it a cartoon drawing. :wink:

along with all that, cartoons are supposed to be a lil... well smooth

 

 

 

i can see the jagged sides in urs

 

 

 

if u AA it, it will look smoother