The idea:

 

 

 

It's going to be a character ("santa") parachuting down into a town, i wanted a more "happy" cartoon feeling and the whip is for after christmass so i can still use it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

C&C:

 

 

 

None yet. :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Updates:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

So Help is very much appriciated and ideas on the pixel are well taken in.

 

 

 

Guys i hope to come back to tip.it now, maybey give you better pixels.

 

 

 

Anyways thats all. Thank you. :P

hehe first of all cool idea, really like it...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

some C&C

 

 

 

- fix his left arm. the connection from the upper part of the arm to the lower part is strange

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- the santa doesn't realy seem to fit.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- his waste looks 2d try to put some thinkness there

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- the wip seems like he's holding it with only his upper two fingers...

 

 

 

show alittle part of it comming beneet the pinky.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- rest is pretty basic not that much to comment on beside the line work

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- ow and I always dit the border last. But don't realy seem much harm in it now:p

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

just a quick sketch of what i mean far from perfect of course but just to show in case u don't understand my english which is verry bad xD

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thanks alot b2d, that really helped!

 

 

 

Mind if i just use those updates rather then redoing it?

 

 

 

i really hate feet.

 

 

 

If not ill try them.

 

 

 

Thanks again :P

sure u can use it

Thanks b2d, i really apprciate it :) .

 

 

 

That will be my christmas present O:) lmao.

It is good start, his chest looks a bit flat, but when you get down to shading you will probably fix that. Leg looks weird

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

That being said, I have to admit you really should do a lot more work than that before posting. Its kinda pointless looking for comments when all you put in is like 1/50 of the sigs work, dont you think?

Thanks vlad, your right it is a little early to start showing.

 

 

 

But i want to make it as good as possible so i thought getting a 2nd maybey a 3rd opinion would help :)

Update added :D !

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Great wonderful!

 

 

 

but i can't see the body....

 

 

 

those colors blend together well...

thanks bees.

 

 

 

I want to fix the waist/body so im going to work on that.

 

 

 

Have i improved?

 

 

 

I believe im getting better at it .

Update!

 

 

 

Mostly finished just need to fix little things and stuff to make it better :D .

 

 

 

How does it look?