I thumbnailed it for a reason... (click for full)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

opinions?

You made that? :shock: Including the characters, of which I'm not sure the language? Chinese?

You made that? :shock: Including the characters, of which I'm not sure the language? Chinese?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

language is japaneese mirrored and the character model was extracted and retextured by me.

What are the little spots of red and such down near the bottom?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Try and get rid of that fringe around Conker.

 

 

 

-Try and get rid of any non-hue of green. It looks bad.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Other than that, I think its okay.

It's not really all that great. :?

 

 

 

• [*:3a4wb9l7]Colours.
   
   
   
  Should be all green; no red, no blue.
   
   
   
  [*:3a4wb9l7]Render.
   
   
   
  Not very well cropped.
   
   
   
  [*:3a4wb9l7]The text over conker.
   
   
   
  It's not very good and quite visually distracting. You should've stuck with the Chinese characters.
   
   
   
  [*:3a4wb9l7]Background.
   
   
   
  It's just quite... random. There's no focal point, it just goes from one corner to the next.

 

 

 

The mirrored Chinese was a good touch though.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Overall it just looks like a bad take of the Matrix. You should generally work on smaller pieces, get better and then do wallpapers. I personally don't like to do wallpapers because you either need to fill the canvas, or be simple and minimalistic with it.

The green is a bit bright to me, it's irritating my headache. DEFINATELY work on your cropping. The random blue and red everywhere is a bit distracting, much like the text streaming over your render. Darken the green a bit so that some of us can save our aspirin for another day, and get rid of that text in the middle. I personally don't like it, because

 

 

 

1) I don't like conker or whatever his name is

 

 

 

2) I absolutely hate neon (-ish) green

 

 

 

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3) The whole matrix thing going on is lame in my opinion.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(^that is just my opinion, so no one flame me for it. I don't know how I would get flamed for it, but I'm sure someone would find a way. Trust me, this week is chock-full of finals, I don't want unwanted stress in any shape or form..)