Oneshot, first time fanfic writing. Vivi talks with Dagger while staying at Eikos house, and Dagger confesses something important.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Vivi was tossing around in bed. Nothing too unusual, as he didnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t sleep too well without his grandpas bedtime stories, majestic things they were. They generally talked about a little boy who grew up without parents and felt different than everyone else, but found a princess and saved a world.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

He smiled, reminiscing their comfort. They made him feel warm at night, when his dark skin failed to absorb the light of day, and light blue wizard robes were thrown off..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Vivi suddenly turned in the direction of the clock, and was thrown aback. He thought it had only been twenty minutes since he had gone to bed, but the clock struck twelve and he rushed out of bed. His note to Dagger had told the brunette to meet him at 12:05, outside Eikos house.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

He realized the noise he was making might scare Zidane awake. On his tip toes, he tossed his robes on and quietly shut the door.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Dagger was already there, her brown hair flying across in the wind. She shivered and held her arms across her chest, mumbling something about boys being unreliable.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Vivi stood there for a second, admiring her trust and faith in everyone. He was late and instead of going back inside, she decided to give him the benefit of a doubt and wait. What a great girl.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅUmm . . . Dagger?ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

I really liked that story. Is there going to be more?

I seriously don't know what that has to do with Runescape, but I guess it was alright. I'm a big FF fan, but...Like I said, it was alright...

I really liked that story. Is there going to be more?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks, I'm considering writing another. I really like Garnet/Vivi idea.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Please, please show me where it says you must have your story about RuneScape. The best stories I know aren't about RS. This is not a totally RS board.

I really liked it! A few things you could change in the first few paragraphs (tiptoes is one word, you repeat the word 'bed' alot, 12.05 seems a bit of a conicidental time, why not make it 12 or 1?) but otherwise I really enjoyed it, and I was left wanting to read more. Maybe you could describe Dagegr a bit more (personally I've never played FF so I've no idea who everyone is) I like the implicitness of the last few paragraphs and it's ended really nicely. =D> =D>

That story was really awesome because it was Final Fantasy and the conversation part was really good.

I really liked it! A few things you could change in the first few paragraphs (tiptoes is one word, you repeat the word 'bed' alot, 12.05 seems a bit of a conicidental time, why not make it 12 or 1?) but otherwise I really enjoyed it, and I was left wanting to read more. Maybe you could describe Dagegr a bit more (personally I've never played FF so I've no idea who everyone is) I like the implicitness of the last few paragraphs and it's ended really nicely. =D> =D>

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks Issy! I'll try that out!

I never said it had to be about RS, it would just make sense if it was about RS because your kinda in.....A RS forum. What I found kind of strange was you wrote the stroy about Vivi instead of someone cooler like Sephiroth or Cloud, maybe someone from FFX, or the new FFXII... Thats mostly why I didn't like it, and the fact that it reminded me of the actual game...So calm down... -.-

I never said it had to be about RS, it would just make sense if it was about RS because your kinda in.....A RS forum. What I found kind of strange was you wrote the stroy about Vivi instead of someone cooler like Sephiroth or Cloud, maybe someone from FFX, or the new FFXII... Thats mostly why I didn't like it, and the fact that it reminded me of the actual game...So calm down... -.-

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I am calm. You, my friend, are the stereotypical fanboy. You're too wrapped up in overrated games like FFVII and FFX (they are fun, but they don't deserve the attention they've received). 'Like z0mg Sephy is so bishie' and 'ZOMG aerith came back and made babiues with cloud!' fics are annoying. And do you really think I can get FFXII so close to Christmas?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Good things for you to do:

 

 

 

-Go to Off Topic, the BUSIEST part of the forum, despite being non-RuneScape related.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Play Final Fantasy Tactics Advanced and IX.

:thumbsup: Nice. Well, actually, I'm nothing close to what you say I am. I don't give a damn about any of that. What does Zomg mean, anyway? (Well, the Z part, anyway). I could seriously care less about any of it. I agree, Runscape stories tend to be boring, and I write almost all of my stuff about other things. But when you said I'm a steriotypical type of person you went a little too far. Steriotype, by the way, is like saying a Mexican is a W-back. Or saying French people are [kitties]. I should know, I get racially steriotyped all of the time, and I do not duplicate other people's actions.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Kudos. I agree with you 100% of the way that I was a little mad and not calm. Not only that, but despite that stuff, you inspired me to write my next story, but has nothing to do with Runescape. More of a FF3-FFX and KH mix.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway, sorry of any offense I may have inflicted. I'm actually glad of the inspiration. Again, Kudos. =D>

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

P.S. In the good things for me to do section, I played those games.

 

 

 

AND when you said Cloud and Sephiroth and the other popular/Famous characters of FF shouldn't have deserved the attention...Well, they did. Although square did focus on the characters, they focused more on the game. Thus, the characters became popular becuase of their actions during the storyline.