issy2 Posted December 17, 2006 Share Posted December 17, 2006 Edited Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FuBai Posted December 17, 2006 Share Posted December 17, 2006 It does seem slightly confused. The overal effect was quite good though - However it did make me feel that the smile was not a good thing, or something to take particular joy in, but rather an extant object, intrinsic in human life, but in some way sinister. perhaps it was the webs and random imagery that did that. Anyway, read and comment on the poem in my sig - the one that just says "poetry" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kelem_ryu Posted December 18, 2006 Share Posted December 18, 2006 Hehe. Liked that one. Reminds me on fairies and children. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rushrock Posted December 30, 2006 Share Posted December 30, 2006 I love it! The only thing I'll say is to stick with the topic you're writing on. I couldn't understand some of the parts. =D> Nice job!!! =D> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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