Eh, I was practicing a coloring technique, and decided to make this for fun.....took 15 minutes total...... C/C please

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:oops:

Pretty good for such a short amount of time. But the head looks very strange to me. :? It almost looks as if you cut off a baby's head and sewed it to the body of a warrior :shock: Hope it doesn't sound too harsh, but that's what it looks like to me. Maybe try making the head a bit smaller and getting rid of the red on his neck?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

As for the armour, it looks pretty cool! Although I must say, it does look a bit like he's wearing women's underwear :ohnoes:

Ok here... this is a quick edit I did for your characters shield and hair...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You need to dither more and stop placeing random dots everywhere... Or at least digipaint it sorta with useing colors that closely relate so a person can't see the change from one color to another...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

That turned out good for 15 minutes. Maybe make the rune less grainy looking, but the shading's nice and shiny like a metal should be.

That turned out good for 15 minutes. Maybe make the rune less grainy looking, but the shading's nice and shiny like a metal should be.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

how can it be grainy and shiney at the same time?? :?

 

That turned out good for 15 minutes. Maybe make the rune less grainy looking, but the shading's nice and shiny like a metal should be.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

how can it be grainy and shiney at the same time?? :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Shiny = nice contrasting highlights

 

 

 

Grainy = not fading very well, pixels look randomly scattered

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

? :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A bit contradicting I suppose, but that's how I interpreted it :P

Ah, ok I read that and I was like... Wha...???

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I suppose so then

 

That turned out good for 15 minutes. Maybe make the rune less grainy looking, but the shading's nice and shiny like a metal should be.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

how can it be grainy and shiney at the same time?? :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Well sand is grainy but shiny when the sun hits it really brightly.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Probably what I ment to say was, try to stay away from pillowshading metal armor.

grainy as in the texture

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

shiny as in the color choice

the reason it looks grainy is because of the dithering, if that wasnt there it would look nice and shiny.

yeah, I might remove the dithering, but I dont really care that much, thats for a crtis guys, and I have a bad habbit of pillow shaidng metal :x