The White Knight

[mario_sunny]

Usually I start long stories and post them little by little as I update it, but here is a small short story you may find to your liking.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

For a year, David, the white knight had been in love with the beautiful princess of white knight castle. David waited for the right moment, and then asked the lovely princess if she would marry him. This startled the princess at first, but she accepted, under one condition. She asked if he would bring her a beautiful crown with diamonds, dragonstone, and onyx embedded in pure gold. So david set out to seek a crown of which his future-wife askedÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The white knight thought to himself: Now where am I going to get a crown like that?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

He thought and thought and finnaly came up with an answer. He would ask his dwarf friend Boris if he could make this beautiful crown, for dwarfs are skilled smithing and mining. So he talked to Boris and he made the crown and even supplied all the jewels and gold. But before boris handed David the crown, he requested that he bring him the best red-berry pie in all the land. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅHmmmÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâædavid thought, now where am I going to get a pie with the richest taste in Runescape? He asked Boris, and he told him to pick them from the glowing redberry bush in the lvl 55 wilderness. There was only one problem, the redberries were gaurded by a fire-breathing dragon that was impossible to get past!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And so the brave white knight traveled to the dungeon in which the dragon lived. He prepared his weapon and armor to slay the dragon, but to his astonistment he found the mighty beast sobbing. He asked what was wrong and the dragon replied: ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅMy eggs! My babies! They have been stolen by a nasty pker!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

[Justin742]

Pretty funny. Reminds me of One Small Favour. Pretty well written also, good job Mario!

[issy2]

Nice storyline, it's amusing and slightly comical.

 

 

 

There's quite alot of spelling and grammar mistakes. I'd be happy to correct them for you. Including '10k' should be ten-thousand.

 

 

 

The style of the writing doesn't flow 100% well but I think it works. Maybe replace the word 'pk' with warrior, or wilderness-hunter, or something like that.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You could try adding more description and of course there's mistakes, but I liked it.

[mario_sunny]

This is actually supposed to be a fast paced story, so I'm sort of leaving out some descriptions. I wrote this story before I ever heard of the One Small Favor quest, so I didn't steal an idea.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'd be happy for you to edit it :)

[mario_sunny]

Darn you page two!

[Guest]

I like it! It lacked a lot of descriptive language, but I still enjoyed reading it.

[Deiophobus]

Pretty cool Mario. I like your writings, and the concept is pretty funny.

 

 

 

It would be funny if the Oracle said "Ok, I have healed the cat, you must not do me one.." and then David stabbed him.

 

 

 

Yeah, in writting is should be 10,000.