Ahh the wonders of bordum, jsut decided to draw Naruto, no reference used.....C/C please? sadly...the shading was pretty much lost and the quality was lost a bit in the scanning :cry: but you can still see what it is...so C/C please...agian :oops:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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OMG that is kinda freaky since today I have been wanting to do a Naruto pixel :o

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway the legs/chest/arms are great but there is an issue with the face, you should rub it out and re do it. Make the whole face shape bigger and move the bandana thingy up, looks like you drew the face then squashed the features in and the subject being anime the face is the main thing, so just redo that and it will be greeeeat, and do more shading!

ok, thanks :)

made some changes from LG's suggestions, added alot more dark shading so it would survive scanning, and messed around with the face, still not sure if i got anywhere..anyways...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

redoo the shading on the face, it looks terrible.

The eyes ---> :shock:

The eyes ---> :shock:

 

 

 

yeah i tohuhgt that too......

First time I've seen a hand-drawn pic on the forums, it's pretty good.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Things you need to fix:

 

 

 

1. The eyes :shock:

 

 

 

2. The mouth is a bit crooked

 

 

 

3. The right hand is a bit.. weird.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

If you can fix those things, it'll be a masterpiece to me. Keep it up! :thumbsup:

First time I've seen a hand-drawn pic on the forums, it's pretty good.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Things you need to fix:

 

 

 

1. The eyes :shock:

 

 

 

2. The mouth is a bit crooked

 

 

 

3. The right hand is a bit.. weird.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

If you can fix those things, it'll be a masterpiece to me. Keep it up! :thumbsup:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I was not very happy with the hand, or the eyes.......I didnt notice the mouth though, so thanks :)

It's pretty good but i have to say the shading was a little overdone, sometimes less is more.

The shading is MUCH better, just a bit messed up on the face, just make the eyes whiter and more anime shaped and its perfect =D>