blazer Posted October 16, 2004 Share Posted October 16, 2004 I just made it today on a whim when I was bored. Rate it and give c/c please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Jeppoz Posted October 16, 2004 Share Posted October 16, 2004 Pretty nice overall i'd say. Here comes the C&C : - Sky has a strange color and looks a bit flat/empty - Linework is on average very nice but needs work on the main char, expecialy the arms to chest zone. - Your color choice looks pretty psychedelic, maybe desaturate the whole sig a bit ? - Add some more detail in the lands - The three base is slimmer than the top part ??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blazer Posted October 16, 2004 Author Share Posted October 16, 2004 Pretty nice overall i'd say. Here comes the C&C : - Sky has a strange color and looks a bit flat/empty - Linework is on average very nice but needs work on the main char, expecialy the arms to chest zone. - Your color choice looks pretty psychedelic, maybe desaturate the whole sig a bit ? - Add some more detail in the lands - The three base is slimmer than the top part ???Yeah. It is pretty psychadelic. How would I desaturate? And what is the three base? And what is a good colour for the sky? RS doesn't have a sky, so.... Thanks for the comments. I'm just gonna work on drawing characters for awhile now to hopefully get better at that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Allice Posted October 16, 2004 Share Posted October 16, 2004 good job, i dont really do C&C's but i give a 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vladmoney Posted October 16, 2004 Share Posted October 16, 2004 I agree with TJ its pretty nice. I like: the small trees in the background, nice touch bunny!!! just whole background i dont think the sky is to bad I dont like: the front guy needs work (his face really) the tree thats knocked down is weird, first it should get biiger -> smaller, and its getting smaller ->bigger. And its a bit to big compared to the other trees in the pic which is weird Visit my DeviantArt Page at http://vladmoney.deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
djscoobsta Posted October 16, 2004 Share Posted October 16, 2004 i think its pritty kewl 8 /10 i like da tree on teh left 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blazer Posted October 16, 2004 Author Share Posted October 16, 2004 I dont like: the front guy needs work (his face really) the tree thats knocked down is weird, first it should get biiger -> smaller, and its getting smaller ->bigger. And its a bit to big compared to the other trees in the pic which is weirdlol, I didn't notice the log. And about the face.... hmmm. I'ma gonna get out my bro's "How to Draw Like Marvel" book and see if I can apply that to pixeling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lemad11 Posted October 16, 2004 Share Posted October 16, 2004 not bad ;) his arm is a littleweird though . .where his shoulder area .. aroudn there. . looks sorta weird how its conncected .. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shaw Posted October 16, 2004 Share Posted October 16, 2004 Nobody mentioned that he looks really buck-toothed... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blazer Posted October 16, 2004 Author Share Posted October 16, 2004 Nobody mentioned that he looks really buck-toothed...He does? I didn't think so. I just couldn't fit the teeth in there cause it's too small an area. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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