1/10

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

first one

1/10 no shading that is fairly visible and its to big and people look stupid, and my first was better and to much gore

1/10

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Bad shading

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Blood and Gore is bad (read sticky)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Why the hell is there a dragon med in the middle of nowhere?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

WAY too big to be a sig

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Beard is growing off the side of his face (beards grow downward)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Clouds arent supposed to be circles...

i give it goof points

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

were u really thinking it was cool?>

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

very goofy and not like a sig shuld be at all soz

Hey hey, people. Don't be so harsh. I say 4/10 for your first one.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Next time make it at the most 300X150.

 

 

 

You attempted shading, looks ok, could use some more contrast.

 

 

 

Your characters are looking like they've just been through a famine.

 

 

 

Try and stay away from pre-shapes (the clouds? in the sky).

 

 

 

And also limit the blood. A little bit is okay, but I think that's a bit too much.

 

 

 

Try and add some detail to the area.

 

 

 

Get your location right. There are no greaters near the rune rocks and there is no grass there.

 

 

 

The cape looks like rags.

 

 

 

Your line work pretty good. Just practice a bit more and look at other peoples to see how they did things (shading etc) but don't copy/rip.

Sorry but i dont give extra points for being his first try.

this was my first and it wasnt that bad

this was my first and it wasnt that bad

 

 

 

Actually it was...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

3/10, too much blood, the magic arrow special doesnt have that little green around it, the greater demon is ok, the guys knee looks bad, make it rounder, try more shading, more detailed background, and putting more weight on the guys, the worst thing to see is "warriors" that are way too skinny. The best way to Improve is to look at the good sig makers sigs, like misterxman, your mother, axeraide, shaw, TJ, so on...That's how I got through when I was stuck. But dont rip or copy, just look at how they do it and get ideas from there.

carlos....mine wasnt even near like his

carlos....mine wasnt even near like his

 

 

 

I still never got it...Oh well, good luck on getting better!