issy2 Posted January 1, 2007 Share Posted January 1, 2007 Edited Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeeLee Posted January 2, 2007 Share Posted January 2, 2007 :thumbsup: its really good issy. I love the sentence structure and metaphors particularly the one about the hopscotch square. could need editing in some places but other than that great. best thing: variety and rhyming. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
issy2 Posted January 2, 2007 Author Share Posted January 2, 2007 :thumbsup: its really good issy. I love the sentence structure and metaphors particularly the one about the hopscotch square. could need editing in some places but other than that great. best thing: variety and rhyming. \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ off/topic - do you like the sig? :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andufusthebronze Posted January 3, 2007 Share Posted January 3, 2007 I like it. it flows well and rymes, it seems to have a metephorical meaning which I picked up on so, if thats intended well done :thumbsup: and I mean this Issy, your definatly improving! :thumbsup: you might not know me, but you post on my threads and Ive seen you wanting sigs in the gallery and talking in off topic so. I know you :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowarcher Posted January 3, 2007 Share Posted January 3, 2007 I think you are a great writer! I checked this place out and your work is great, and i've seen the order you posted them and your definatly improving! and andufus you never told me you write! Hi, I'm new to Tip. It but far from a noob. I know my runescape stuff! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeeLee Posted January 5, 2007 Share Posted January 5, 2007 :D :D :D :D :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: Its even better than the first version issy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! promise me you'll never give up poetry i think it would be a great loss to everyone with good taste, seriously. My mum says to tell you its "fabulous darling". =D> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
warri0r45 Posted January 15, 2007 Share Posted January 15, 2007 That's a good poem. Nice structure, flows well and the end is good. Maybee it's a bit to much to ask, but do you think you could post the subject matter? I was never the best at interpreting metaphors and other poetic techniques. Well done anyway. =D> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xewleer Posted January 15, 2007 Share Posted January 15, 2007 Very nice, I'm relatively new to the Varrock library, but this is very fine poetry. =D> I'll show you how terrifying a true Christian can be!It's Xewleer: ZEW le ar, got it memorized?Hermit of the Varrock Library and its proud guard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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