k this is my first story so dont flame but i always accept complements lol

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Along with my fellow Knights of Fallador I stood, awaiting death as the warships came closer. Death is only the beginning. The cold slithering voice of Iban entered my mind, the Black Knights had sacrificed their wealth in order to keep him on their side. I tried my best to concentrate on the war that lied minutes ahead of me as I finally shook the voice aside. Thus, I slung my Magic Bow and 600 Rune Arrows.

 

 

 

ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¹ÃâThis is the end of Port Sarim and soon all of AsgarniaÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ I thought as the ships crashed into the docks of Sarim. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¹ÃâOf course, they crashed with speed into the docks because they wouldnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t be leavingÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ the second chilling thought ran through my head. Out jumped the Black Knight Titan signaling the other war ships to descend. With my instincts I knew the right thing to do would be to shoot but the fear was eating me. Both me and my fearÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s mistake was to make me pull the string. With intense speed the arrow hit the very helm of the Black Knight Titan. His eyes closed but then opened half a minute later and worst of all his pupils disappeared. A big mistake to shoot what I am now. Again fear struck me as hard as any slap could feel. Thoughts racing, heart pounding, I had begun the war with the shot of my bow. All hell broke loose and I knew it that was my death signal.

 

 

 

Arrows fired at me as but I countered by hiding under the protection of my Dragon Square Shield which took me years to find as well as knowing it would save my life multiple times. A Black Knight ran at me as I ducked his blow and swung my Dragon Battle Axe with all my might into his ribs never making a movement again. Three more Black Knights ran at me but only to meet the same fait as their own comrade. The Black Knights let loose two enslaved Red Dragons as they headed towards the battlefield turning everything to flames. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅHelp, the beast is crushing my bones to dust!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

This story was pretty good for your first one. I encourage you to make more.

Nice story, especially for oyur first, lookin forward to seeing more. :)

Not bad.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A few spelling mistakes but they aint to hard to fix.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Keep Writing

very nicely done, especially for yer first story. good job, and i hope to see more of your stories.

very nice for your first story better than mine i think. these stories dont hve to be rs related do they?

im not finished with it il write the next part 2morrow and sup alix long time no see

Well,? GET ON WITH IT! Sorry. But it's been more then 3 weeks.

I was ready to accept death but it had not come and I realized I was lucky enough to discover that it wouldnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t at least not for now. My eyes opened as I saw smoke around me, as well as the dock, and buildings burning around me with the flames of hell eating their way towards the small town of Rimmington. I hid behind the broken down bar as I watched the Black Knights and their enslaved beasts head towards Draynor Village in which they will head counterclockwise until every city in Asgarnia and Misthalin would be looted and destroyed.

 

 

 

When the Black Knights were out of sight I limped my way to Falador, the town in which I was born and raised. After I got to Falador I made my way to the bank and took the remaining amount of money that I had and headed towards King Armik Varza the former Leader of the White Knights and the current King of Asgarnia.

 

 

 

ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅYour Highness, the Black Knights have defeated us and are making their way around These two kingdoms to destroy them both!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

well done. But i wanna hear about the battle in the wilderness.

Very well done story. I could picture everything in my mind.

 

 

 

I cant wait for more. :)

;p;

lol

Not a bad try (in fact quite good) for your first story! :D

I like it.

 

 

 

A lot.

 

 

 

I encourage you to keep writing. It's good for you.

that was class keep writing bring part 3 out soon