Ok well... I can't belive you spent what did you say... 2-3 hours on this...Why? Its great that you want to impove that much but jeesh just read a few tutorials and spend half that time to make somthing thats just as good...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway onto C\C

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Face color... eww change it

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hat- square on the dudes head...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hands and arms - so your character like to have on a straight jaket... what the duece??

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Feet- oh my... holding feet sideways like that must freaking hurt... :shock: :cry: poor guy

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Scarf- no dept at all... it looks like part of the shirt...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Cape- no detail and its pretty much straight lineses

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Highlights - a few but waaaaayyyy too similar to the color you are useing to fill the guys top+legs

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Shadeing - what??? what's shadeing... I don't understand :roll:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Dithering and AA'ing - same as above ^^

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Background - plain

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Bg moutains - one color

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Bg sky- one color no clouds

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Bg ground- what ground? Hey you forget it man I can wield the fill tool and make my ground all grey... beat that! woo! I pity the fool- but i do suggest ways in which he may better himself!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ahh... hmm thats all the C\C i see atm... of course i have drank about a half jug of the dew and been up for over 14 hours staight, played a basketball game, and then went to a college game... :shock: So i'm pretty freaking buzzed atm... Ill probably have some more stuff when I wake up around 12... Omg get the fruit! - I can't there's a ghost there!! :ohnoes:

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I tried to do a edit and show you how much better it will look with basic shading and a few fixes

 

 

 

old

 

 

 

 

 

 

new

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

some things i did:

 

 

 

removed black lines

 

 

 

made mountions look less like iso triangles and made less of them

 

 

 

changed colors of mountions and added grass

 

 

 

added basic shading

 

 

 

made person loose weight

 

 

 

added border

 

 

 

changed width of feet

 

 

 

of rid of jpg crap

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Also if you have a windows os you wont get a virus inless you do stuff like download software on a peer 2 peer connection. Apples don't suck that bad either, mostly just compatibility issues that adnoy me.(no good games/some soft has no mac version) Windows will pwn Apple when vista comes out though, and it even has better security features then xp.

 

This took me 3-4 hours, and I still see things wrong.

 

 

 

I don't have a Windows, I have a Mac.

 

 

 

Hmmm... well that explains a LOT! :XD:

 

 

 

Oh god, be quiet.

 

 

 

Does it even matter how much time I spent on this?

 

 

 

I had some problems with layers, because I did everything on that background layer, just thinking that I would play around.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyways, back on topic. Forget about my Mac.

 

 

 

Nazgul, If you count how much time I actually worked on making progress with this thing, it comes down to about an hour.

 

 

 

I'm not good with face color, face it. (yes, pun intended)

 

 

 

I like my hat, get over it.

 

 

 

Look at Umega's art, thats the style that I'm working towards.

 

 

 

I like the scarf to.

 

 

 

Yeah, I didn't mess around with those things, I just tried to get the basic body shape.

 

 

 

I haven't tried shading yet.

 

 

 

I already said 3 times I don't give a care about the background.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And yeah, I notice that you have been... out.Lol, just kidding. I just finished homework, so I'm like really tired...

i fink its gud

Ok...

Thanks everyone!

 

 

 

I'll post an updated version once I get around to it after finishing my Science Fair project. :ohnoes:

Thanks everyone!

 

 

 

I'll post an updated version once I get around to it after finishing my Science Fair project. :ohnoes:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Good luck with that project. :wink:

 

Thanks everyone!

 

 

 

I'll post an updated version once I get around to it after finishing my Science Fair project. :ohnoes:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Good luck with that project. :wink:

 

 

 

Thanks, I finished it but now I gotta go to school... :ohnoes:

lol "I only used photoshop! :? " well... put a sock in it. that won't make it bad! I use photoshop my self (version 5) and its fine. lol I'm surprised V2 can't save in PNG cause we use V3 at school (and freakin apple computers ... laag...) have a look at the pixel thats titled

 

 

 

"mountain help (pixel)" it shows how he did his mountains. also a question

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Do you know what shading is?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

no?

I like it. :thumbsup:

 

i got bord so i edited it a little

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

you like?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

why dont you use paint?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

you can use it if you want

 

 

 

I'll take a look. :D

 

 

 

And I don't use Paint because I don't have a Windows, I have a Mac.

 

 

 

I don't like viruses/keyloggers/hackers/dumb Windows stuff.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

If you have a mac with PS 2.0 I highly sugest upgrading if you have OS X Tiger, I have Mac OS X 10.4 Tiger with photoshop elements 3, a kinda cut down version of ps CS...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

@dkjestrup, the only real good apple computers are the imacs :D.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway, I myself think it looks really good, keep up the good work!