Constructive criticism needed please

 

 

 

made in bryce and ps7

Looks really nice except that the white glow on the right seems really out of place.

It's not a pixel, so it's cool in my book.

Looks really nice except that the white glow on the right seems really out of place.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

yeah same, looks nice, white dot is way outa place :D gj m8.

As others have said, the white glow doesn't fit at all, and the 80+ Combat looks a little blurry. Other than that, I really like it. Nice colors, good render, and the linework works very well. Nice job. :)

It's not a pixel, so it's cool in my book.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Dang that's constructive :lol:

 

 

 

The sig looks nice, love teh blu-ish-ness... Nice render, but yeh, the randomly placed white flash is a bit yeh...

lol its not ramdomly placed was part of the render but wen i overlayed a solid plue piece it went bright

remove the big glow if you can.

 

 

 

lower the opacity on the grid if you can.

 

 

 

and fix the 80+ combat text.

 

 

 

then it will be pretty spiffy.

 

 

 

the linework reminds me of dementedhero's

remove the big glow if you can.

 

 

 

lower the opacity on the grid if you can.

 

 

 

and fix the 80+ combat text.

 

 

 

then it will be pretty spiffy.

 

 

 

the linework reminds me of dementedhero's

 

 

 

hehe umm the line with diagnol cuts is based off demented.. but thats all rest was off various dev art pieces.. just combined a few different sources

Bump.. common need more feedback on wat 2 improve.. linework enough? and so on

the white glow's bad, but many ppl has already mentioned that... also, the grid is kinda odd, as it destroy the quality the sig... try sharpening it too :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

also, change the text to one that's clearer and easier to be seen... and what's the 20?? text in the background anyway? :?