No_OnE Posted January 15, 2007 Share Posted January 15, 2007 This is my first terraspace so it's definitely not perfect. After seeing Metroid's piece, I thought it was cool so I started to browse deviantArt for terraspace pieces. I decided to try one myself. I think my biggest problem was getting the transition from the sky to space looking good. I spent a long time trying to fix the transition and this was the best I could get it. Anyway, I created everything in this. The bright thing at the top started out as a nebula but I couldn't get it to work out right. It turned out like it did and I thought it looked kind of cool so I left it. I've definitely spent more time on this piece than anything else I've done. It took me 4-5 hours plus about an hour to create the planet. Umm, c/c is greatly appreciated. Without further ado: Click Here for Fullsized Version Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kinslayer777 Posted January 15, 2007 Share Posted January 15, 2007 Totally cool earth + rings, but it seems odd to have a terraview with such little depth in the bottom. Of the terras I've seen (erm...4~5), they're more sort of flattened globe imagines, not a conjoined bottom with a nightsky view of the space. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tripsis Posted January 15, 2007 Share Posted January 15, 2007 Well I've only had one experience with Terraspace, so I'm not an expert.. But it looks pretty good for your first go :) The only thing I don't really like is the [sun?]. I don't like how it appears to just shine down (if you know what I mean). I think it would be better if the sun shined all around it, and and the lightness of the sun could just gradually fade into the sky... If that makes sense at all :-k I don't really know how to explain it. Also the [thing] in the upper left hand corner (you can probably tell how great I am with astronomy and all that) stands out a bit too much I think. I think it'd look better if it were maybe faded a bit more, to make it look more far away, I guess. Looks pretty cool though :) Nice job :thumbsup: - 99 fletching | 99 thieving | 99 construction | 99 herblore | 99 smithing | 99 woodcutting - - 99 runecrafting - 99 prayer - 125 combat - 95 farming - - Blog - DeviantART - Book Reviews & Blog Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metroid Posted January 15, 2007 Share Posted January 15, 2007 The planet is just... O.o Make the planet red instead! Purple is the same color as most of the landscape, I know.. but there is some red too, so red would work just as good. The sun looks wierd.. it sticks out way too much. Try lowering it to show half of it, and the other half hidden under the landscape. Also the flow of the space scene doesn't do it for me.. there's just not enough detail. Protect the Light... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No_OnE Posted January 15, 2007 Author Share Posted January 15, 2007 Thanks for the c/c everyone. I don't know if I'll make any edits to this one or not since it's my first. I may just keep all of the c/c in mind and start a new one. Anyway, thanks again! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxxShade Posted January 15, 2007 Share Posted January 15, 2007 That looks so sweet, I think I might take a go at it someday. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kinslayer777 Posted January 15, 2007 Share Posted January 15, 2007 Contrary to metroid I like the planet. If you make it red, it wouldn't look like a crazy earth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Viktorkrum77 Posted January 15, 2007 Share Posted January 15, 2007 I wouldn't put your full name on an internet forum. :-$ Me doing staff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metroid Posted January 15, 2007 Share Posted January 15, 2007 That is ridiculous. Who on TIF Who has a account Who checked the gallery And looked at this post And is a.. 'crazy person' And is going to take the time to search for the name "Jason Spotts" (and probably find hundreds of people with that name), pick a random person, and what do you know.. it happens to be No_OnE aswell. -.- Protect the Light... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No_OnE Posted January 15, 2007 Author Share Posted January 15, 2007 I wouldn't put your full name on an internet forum. :-$ I'm not too worried about it. I don't think there's much people can do with my name and if they can do something, then there probably good enough to find my name some other way anyhow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eckered Posted January 15, 2007 Share Posted January 15, 2007 That is ridiculous. Who on TIF Who has a account Who checked the gallery And looked at this post And is a.. 'crazy person' And is going to take the time to search for the name "Jason Spotts" (and probably find hundreds of people with that name), pick a random person, and what do you know.. it happens to be No_OnE aswell. -.- then what are they going to do? who has the hookups to travel halfway aorund the world to find him whohas the skillz to get around all the cops who are lookingfor him at the airports who will get to him wihtout being cought whowill manage to meet up with no one who will lure him away from his guardians, and kidnap him who, after no one punches his face in, will still try to kidnap him and then no one will kick his balls in, and walk back home. nice terraspace btw :thumbsup: :thumbsup: : wop wop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metroid Posted January 15, 2007 Share Posted January 15, 2007 rofl.. I like your version better, eck. :P Protect the Light... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dietokill2 Posted January 15, 2007 Share Posted January 15, 2007 l like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maxidataxi Posted January 15, 2007 Share Posted January 15, 2007 my real name is jenifer lopez. Join the movement^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junction Posted January 15, 2007 Share Posted January 15, 2007 my real name is jenifer lopez. hey cool so is mine i really dig the piece man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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