Terraspace - WIP

[No_OnE]

So this time I'm trying things a little bit differently. It's another Terraspace but it's definitely not finished. I'm just posting for tonight and I'll use whatever tips I recieve tomorrow when I start again. I plan on adding a large planet thats kind of setting half way behind the mountains in the horizon with a ring around the planet that is at a 90 degree angle to the ground. I'll probably also add another, smaller planet towards the top of the piece. I'm not sure what else I'll put in.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[rik]

sky is way to long, the sky isn't dark enough, to much white sky just above the mountains, the sun doesn't light up a area in the sky that big, u can ealely see there is a sort of gradient from the blue sky to the white sky,most of the times u don't see stars on a bright day with such a bright sun :-s and i know u propobly are going to adjust this but the water in the background looks like it is going to fall off the edge of the earth -.-

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

that was some of my c/c but before i give more i wanna see if u just don't are going to chance it yourself :P

[Nadril]

The landscape has a ton of problems, I'm going to point out some of them:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Mountains almost never hit the water like that in real life, they slope off onto a beach.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- You can litteraly see the edge of your "world". Incredibly unrealistic.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- The texture needs a lot of work. It looks like you wanted something snowy but the snow is incredibly random and the water, IMO, looks too warm to host snow. I don't like the brownish rock texture you want to use as well on the mountains.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- The atmosphere is pretty plain, really bright and nearly the entire "sky" for the space scene is a gradient.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Transition is fine, but doesn't leave much up to imagination at all. IMO its a really boring transition from landscape to space scene.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Just a couple of things I wanted to point out. This needs a lot of work.

[pryomancer]

The mountains are too generic, try diversify them to make it interesting.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

By Terra standards it's pretty boring.

[No_OnE]

Thanks for all the c/c. I'd love to make the transition interesting with some nice, doom-impending clouds but I'm still horrible at transitions. I think I may start practicing with terragen and space scenes seperately and when I get better at them both, I'll work on putting them together. I may or may not try to finish this one, I'm not sure yet.

[Nadril]

Thanks for all the c/c. I'd love to make the transition interesting with some nice, doom-impending clouds but I'm still horrible at transitions. I think I may start practicing with terragen and space scenes seperately and when I get better at them both, I'll work on putting them together. I may or may not try to finish this one, I'm not sure yet.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thats probaly a good idea to do.