Comment on anything I should fix up, and what you think of it so far,

 

 

 

Your advise and comments are much appreciated. :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

PS: THIS WASN'T MADE BY ME, JUST A MATE OF MINE WHO'S PRETTY GOOD WITH DRAWING SO THOUGHT HE'D TRY OUT PIXELING, SO THE ADVISE IS TO HIM NOT ME.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Is this finished or a WIP? Also, you're only supposed to post your work, not someone elses..

Is this finished or a WIP? Also, you're only supposed to post your work, not someone elses..

 

 

 

+1

 

 

 

Anyhow

 

 

 

it was enlarged, and that ruins it, theres messed up lines everywhere now.

 

 

 

no shading really.\

 

 

 

it might be able to be good if you:

 

 

 

Kill the black lines, add something of the sam color there bordering, only slightly darker.

 

 

 

Anti alias

 

 

 

SHADE!

Is this finished or a WIP? Also, you're only supposed to post your work, not someone elses..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yeah it's a WIP, and he made the picture on my computer and considering he doesn't have a computer yet or the internet, well yeah I just posted it for him so he could understand his mistakes.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hehe yup I'll get him to shade and AA, thanks for the tips so far, when he fixes all that up I'll see if he wants to post it or something. Thanks Dooms

No prob.

this is pretty good considering he's never done pixel art before, I dont think stretching bigger was a good idea because the pixels have lost their original shapes (should be equally patterned squares).. The proportions of this is pretty good and he's actually made decent armouring for the character. Its just the use of colour that would have been an issue, theres no real lightsource and the armour doesn't look metalic. It is a wip though but I really dont think its usable at its current state.