issy2 Posted February 5, 2007 Share Posted February 5, 2007 Hiya, I thought it would be fun to have a thread where everyone can contribute to not just a story, but a poem. Don't bother posting on this thread if - You haven't spell checked it (excusing artistic license) Thought it out Put some effort into it (And by that I mean, don't just type up the first thing that comes into your head.) It would also be nice if the verses had a good rhythm, but that's not compulsory Rules - Spell check!!!!!!!! :XD: 1 verse per post only 1 verse consists of 4 normal-ish length lines Try and keep it connected to what other people have written Don't even think about changing anyone else's verse. If you really think it doesn't fit then you can PM them, and politely ask them about it. Copy and pastaaaa all the verses so far into your post so you have all of it then add yours at the bottom. Feel free to make it more specific, turn it into a story, etc. As I'm the first and I have no idea what to write about I'll start reasonably abstract. Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature, all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andufusthebronze Posted February 5, 2007 Share Posted February 5, 2007 Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature, all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
issy2 Posted February 5, 2007 Author Share Posted February 5, 2007 Whooo nice, that was great!! \ Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature, all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FuBai Posted February 5, 2007 Share Posted February 5, 2007 Whooo nice, that was great!! \ Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature, all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
issy2 Posted February 5, 2007 Author Share Posted February 5, 2007 Nice one FuBai, just a reminder though, can we stick to 4 lines please? Thanks! :) Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature, all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andufusthebronze Posted February 5, 2007 Share Posted February 5, 2007 FuBia's didn't really fit in with the mood, so I have 1/2 normal type and 1/2 FuBia type Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature, all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeeLee Posted February 6, 2007 Share Posted February 6, 2007 really great sooooooooo far. I hope i can match up to the mastership of the previous poets. Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature, all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head as you should instead of turning her away!!!!!!!!!!!! sorry my contribution is a little strange. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andufusthebronze Posted February 6, 2007 Share Posted February 6, 2007 Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature, all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head She giggles, she groans She whines, and moans! But soon she falls, asleep on your shoulder As the fire in the grate, begins to smoulder. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeeLee Posted February 6, 2007 Share Posted February 6, 2007 Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature, all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head She giggles, she groans She whines, and moans! But soon she falls, asleep on your shoulder As the fire in the grate, begins to smoulder. flames flicker and ashes fall your eyes wonder from ceiling to wall its coming to the end of a very long day you close your eyes, goodnight I say Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andufusthebronze Posted February 6, 2007 Share Posted February 6, 2007 with a horse, the prince does ride. as of this, the evil does hide. a charming place, a light gleam. but, now you know, its a fantasy dream. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
issy2 Posted February 7, 2007 Author Share Posted February 7, 2007 Archimage you're just being stupid now. Stop correcting other people's work! I'm just gonna ignore you until you just leave it. Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head She giggles, she groans She whines, and moans! But soon she falls, asleep on your shoulder As the fire in the grate, begins to smoulder. flames flicker and ashes fall your eyes wonder from ceiling to wall its coming to the end of a very long day you close your eyes, goodnight I say Dreams flicker, reality stays You're watching, you're waiting, counting the days A moment, a second, could change your life, It just takes time to keep your dreams at bay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeeLee Posted February 7, 2007 Share Posted February 7, 2007 Smiling kid, fluttering tree. Waving flower, buzzing bee. Delight in nature. All around. Doesn't take much. To be able. To see. Crashing waterfall. Soaring bird. Floating lily. Magic word. Powerful feeling. Connect us two. What emotions, are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain. Sitting here. Watching the gentle moon wane. Sitting here. Watching the sun say goodnight. Sitting here. Watching the world without light. Take out the packet. The happiness. In twisted plastic. Credit card forward. do the cutting. I'm spastic. Desperate escape. That hyper manic state. Tube up the note. And take the bait. Why bother? With the long wait. You'll never feel alone. Again. Mate. Yeah. Never alone. With the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment. You're trying to find, it's gone forever. Now you've taken the short cut. You may be dying inside. But it's a chance. To unwind... And now. Under the stars. I sleep. Whilst the dying moon, does weep. My phone credit. it's running low. So to top it up, I go! A knock on the door. Followed by a creak. Its your little sister. Come for a peek. Invite her in. To your soft, warm bed. Then tuck the covers. Round the sleepy head. She giggles. She groans. She whines. And she moans! But soon she falls. Asleep on your shoulder. As the fire in the grate. Begins to smoulder. Flames flicker. Ashes fall. Your eyes wonder. From ceiling to wall. Its coming to the end. Of a very long day. You close your eyes. Goodnight. I say. You drift off now. A boat turned free. To drift on. This yellow-green sea. A castle awaits. A charming prince. Lean forwards. As his crown glints. With a horse. The prince does ride. As of this. The evil does hide. A charming place. It's light gleam. But. Now you know. It's a fantasy. Dream. And so your tears tingle with sweet lies. You take a chance. Open your eyes. Just for a glance. Dreams flicker. Reality stays. You're watching. You're waiting. Counting the days. A moment. A second. Could change your life. It just takes time. To keep your dreams. At bay. A hawk. Sores overhead. An eye. In the sky. Watching over the bed. A mole. In the ground. Like love. And dreams. Flows down. happy king, smiling queen remnents of a long lost dream a hope that fades like a flame in a fire as your imagination begins to tire Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andufusthebronze Posted February 7, 2007 Share Posted February 7, 2007 Smiling kid, fluttering tree. Waving flower, buzzing bee. Delight in nature. All around. Doesn't take much. To be able. To see. Crashing waterfall. Soaring bird. Floating lily. Magic word. Powerful feeling. Connect us two. What emotions, are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain. Sitting here. Watching the gentle moon wane. Sitting here. Watching the sun say goodnight. Sitting here. Watching the world without light. Take out the packet. The happiness. In twisted plastic. Credit card forward. do the cutting. I'm spastic. Desperate escape. That hyper manic state. Tube up the note. And take the bait. Why bother? With the long wait. You'll never feel alone. Again. Mate. Yeah. Never alone. With the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment. You're trying to find, it's gone forever. Now you've taken the short cut. You may be dying inside. But it's a chance. To unwind... And now. Under the stars. I sleep. Whilst the dying moon, does weep. My phone credit. it's running low. So to top it up, I go! A knock on the door. Followed by a creak. Its your little sister. Come for a peek. Invite her in. To your soft, warm bed. Then tuck the covers. Round the sleepy head. She giggles. She groans. She whines. And she moans! But soon she falls. Asleep on your shoulder. As the fire in the grate. Begins to smoulder. Flames flicker. Ashes fall. Your eyes wonder. From ceiling to wall. Its coming to the end. Of a very long day. You close your eyes. Goodnight. I say. You drift off now. A boat turned free. To drift on. This yellow-green sea. A castle awaits. A charming prince. Lean forwards. As his crown glints. With a horse. The prince does ride. As of this. The evil does hide. A charming place. It's light gleam. But. Now you know. It's a fantasy. Dream. And so your tears tingle with sweet lies. You take a chance. Open your eyes. Just for a glance. Dreams flicker. Reality stays. You're watching. You're waiting. Counting the days. A moment. A second. Could change your life. It just takes time. To keep your dreams. At bay. A hawk. Sores overhead. An eye. In the sky. Watching over the bed. A mole. In the ground. Like love. And dreams. Flows down. happy king, smiling queen remnents of a long lost dream a hope that fades like a flame in a fire as your imagination begins to tire As you feel, soon the dream will end. As your creativity is about to bend, With a lot of luck, and pixie dust. If one doesnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t work the other must Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andufusthebronze Posted February 7, 2007 Share Posted February 7, 2007 Smiling kid, fluttering tree. Waving flower, buzzing bee. Delight in nature. All around. Doesn't take much. To be able. To see. Crashing waterfall. Soaring bird. Floating lily. Magic word. Powerful feeling. Connect us two. What emotions, are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain. Sitting here. Watching the gentle moon wane. Sitting here. Watching the sun say goodnight. Sitting here. Watching the world without light. Take out the packet. The happiness. In twisted plastic. Credit card forward. do the cutting. I'm spastic. Desperate escape. That hyper manic state. Tube up the note. And take the bait. Why bother? With the long wait. You'll never feel alone. Again. Mate. Yeah. Never alone. With the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment. You're trying to find, it's gone forever. Now you've taken the short cut. You may be dying inside. But it's a chance. To unwind... And now. Under the stars. I sleep. Whilst the dying moon, does weep. My phone credit. it's running low. So to top it up, I go! A knock on the door. Followed by a creak. Its your little sister. Come for a peek. Invite her in. To your soft, warm bed. Then tuck the covers. Round the sleepy head. She giggles. She groans. She whines. And she moans! But soon she falls. Asleep on your shoulder. As the fire in the grate. Begins to smoulder. Flames flicker. Ashes fall. Your eyes wonder. From ceiling to wall. Its coming to the end. Of a very long day. You close your eyes. Goodnight. I say. You drift off now. A boat turned free. To drift on. This yellow-green sea. A castle awaits. A charming prince. Lean forwards. As his crown glints. With a horse. The prince does ride. As of this. The evil does hide. A charming place. It's light gleam. But. Now you know. It's a fantasy. Dream. And so your tears tingle with sweet lies. You take a chance. Open your eyes. Just for a glance. Dreams flicker. Reality stays. You're watching. You're waiting. Counting the days. A moment. A second. Could change your life. It just takes time. To keep your dreams. At bay. A hawk. Sores overhead. An eye. In the sky. Watching over the bed. A mole. In the ground. Like love. And dreams. Flows down. happy king, smiling queen remnents of a long lost dream a hope that fades like a flame in a fire as your imagination begins to tire As you feel, soon the dream will end. As your creativity is about to bend, With a lot of luck, and pixie dust. If one doesnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t work the other must In me you must trust. Before you do thrust. Your head back down. Into this sleepy town. Where dreams, are reality And reality, a dream Where all you need is vitality Just you, any your team Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
issy2 Posted February 7, 2007 Author Share Posted February 7, 2007 Archimage can you re-read the rules please. And for the record you need to have a little personal grammar check. No-one's gonna think any better of your IQ if all you can do is put a full stop after every two words - it's not gonna get you anywhere. If you're gonna be stupid at all at least do it properly. Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head She giggles, she groans She whines, and moans! But soon she falls, asleep on your shoulder As the fire in the grate, begins to smoulder. flames flicker and ashes fall your eyes wonder from ceiling to wall its coming to the end of a very long day you close your eyes, goodnight I say Dreams flicker, reality stays You're watching, you're waiting, counting the days A moment, a second, could change your life, It just takes time to keep your dreams at bay happy king, smiling queen remnents of a long lost dream a hope that fades like a flame in a fire as your imagination begins to tire As you feel, soon the dream will end. As your creativity is about to bend, With a lot of luck, and pixie dust. If one doesnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t work the other must Where dreams, are reality And reality, a dream Where all you need is vitality Just you, any your team Laughing face crying eye Waving hand as we say goodbye With fire in my blood and a song in my heart The dreamers, we're off, for a clean new start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andufusthebronze Posted February 7, 2007 Share Posted February 7, 2007 Archimage can you re-read the rules please. And for the record you need to have a little personal grammar check. No-one's gonna think any better of your IQ if all you can do is put a full stop after every two words - it's not gonna get you anywhere. If you're gonna be stupid at all at least do it properly. +1 Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head She giggles, she groans She whines, and moans! But soon she falls, asleep on your shoulder As the fire in the grate, begins to smoulder. flames flicker and ashes fall your eyes wonder from ceiling to wall its coming to the end of a very long day you close your eyes, goodnight I say Dreams flicker, reality stays You're watching, you're waiting, counting the days A moment, a second, could change your life, It just takes time to keep your dreams at bay happy king, smiling queen remnents of a long lost dream a hope that fades like a flame in a fire as your imagination begins to tire As you feel, soon the dream will end. As your creativity is about to bend, With a lot of luck, and pixie dust. If one doesnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t work the other must Where dreams, are reality And reality, a dream Where all you need is vitality Just you, any your team Laughing face crying eye Waving hand as we say goodbye With fire in my blood and a song in my heart The dreamers, we're off, for a clean new start. This fantasy realm, of elves and dwarves Take away your breath, making a small pause. This is the way you see my lad, To keep your heart away from the bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
issy2 Posted February 7, 2007 Author Share Posted February 7, 2007 Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head She giggles, she groans She whines, and moans! But soon she falls, asleep on your shoulder As the fire in the grate, begins to smoulder. flames flicker and ashes fall your eyes wonder from ceiling to wall its coming to the end of a very long day you close your eyes, goodnight I say Dreams flicker, reality stays You're watching, you're waiting, counting the days A moment, a second, could change your life, It just takes time to keep your dreams at bay happy king, smiling queen remnents of a long lost dream a hope that fades like a flame in a fire as your imagination begins to tire As you feel, soon the dream will end. As your creativity is about to bend, With a lot of luck, and pixie dust. If one doesnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t work the other must Where dreams, are reality And reality, a dream Where all you need is vitality Just you, any your team Laughing face crying eye Waving hand as we say goodbye With fire in my blood and a song in my heart The dreamers, we're off, for a clean new start. This fantasy realm, of elves and dwarves Take away your breath, making a small pause. This is the way you see my lad, To keep your heart away from the bad. The elves they float on enchanted ground Graceful and beautiful - it's magic they've found Cunning and deceitful though they know what is right, Golden blonde hair, it shines in the light. (Andufus, I was thinking you could now do a verse about the dwarves? It's just an idea so don't if you don't want to, obviously it's your choice, but it might read pretty well as you mentioned them in your last :wink: ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andufusthebronze Posted February 7, 2007 Share Posted February 7, 2007 Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head She giggles, she groans She whines, and moans! But soon she falls, asleep on your shoulder As the fire in the grate, begins to smoulder. flames flicker and ashes fall your eyes wonder from ceiling to wall its coming to the end of a very long day you close your eyes, goodnight I say Dreams flicker, reality stays You're watching, you're waiting, counting the days A moment, a second, could change your life, It just takes time to keep your dreams at bay happy king, smiling queen remnents of a long lost dream a hope that fades like a flame in a fire as your imagination begins to tire As you feel, soon the dream will end. As your creativity is about to bend, With a lot of luck, and pixie dust. If one doesnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t work the other must Where dreams, are reality And reality, a dream Where all you need is vitality Just you, any your team Laughing face crying eye Waving hand as we say goodbye With fire in my blood and a song in my heart The dreamers, we're off, for a clean new start. This fantasy realm, of elves and dwarves Take away your breath, making a small pause. This is the way you see my lad, To keep your heart away from the bad. The elves they float on enchanted ground Graceful and beautiful - it's magic they've found Cunning and deceitful though they know what is right, Golden blonde hair, it shines in the light the dwarves they are short, they are stout, they are bauld. well kept caves, away from the cold. sharp battle axes, and tempers short a trusty friend, and one very well tought. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
issy2 Posted February 7, 2007 Author Share Posted February 7, 2007 Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head She giggles, she groans She whines, and moans! But soon she falls, asleep on your shoulder As the fire in the grate, begins to smoulder. flames flicker and ashes fall your eyes wonder from ceiling to wall its coming to the end of a very long day you close your eyes, goodnight I say Dreams flicker, reality stays You're watching, you're waiting, counting the days A moment, a second, could change your life, It just takes time to keep your dreams at bay happy king, smiling queen remnents of a long lost dream a hope that fades like a flame in a fire as your imagination begins to tire As you feel, soon the dream will end. As your creativity is about to bend, With a lot of luck, and pixie dust. If one doesnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t work the other must Where dreams, are reality And reality, a dream Where all you need is vitality Just you, any your team Laughing face crying eye Waving hand as we say goodbye With fire in my blood and a song in my heart The dreamers, we're off, for a clean new start. This fantasy realm, of elves and dwarves Take away your breath, making a small pause. This is the way you see my lad, To keep your heart away from the bad. The elves they float on enchanted ground Graceful and beautiful - it's magic they've found Cunning and deceitful though they know what is right, Golden blonde hair, it shines in the light the dwarves they are short, they are stout, they are bauld. well kept caves, away from the cold. sharp battle axes, and tempers short a trusty friend, and one very well taught. The unicorns, the nympths, of shimmering thought, The knights, the fights, of the royal court, A merchant's bargain sold at last resort, Every colour, every shape,our imagination sought. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andufusthebronze Posted February 8, 2007 Share Posted February 8, 2007 Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head She giggles, she groans She whines, and moans! But soon she falls, asleep on your shoulder As the fire in the grate, begins to smoulder. flames flicker and ashes fall your eyes wonder from ceiling to wall its coming to the end of a very long day you close your eyes, goodnight I say Dreams flicker, reality stays You're watching, you're waiting, counting the days A moment, a second, could change your life, It just takes time to keep your dreams at bay happy king, smiling queen remnents of a long lost dream a hope that fades like a flame in a fire as your imagination begins to tire As you feel, soon the dream will end. As your creativity is about to bend, With a lot of luck, and pixie dust. If one doesnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t work the other must Where dreams, are reality And reality, a dream Where all you need is vitality Just you, any your team Laughing face crying eye Waving hand as we say goodbye With fire in my blood and a song in my heart The dreamers, we're off, for a clean new start. This fantasy realm, of elves and dwarves Take away your breath, making a small pause. This is the way you see my lad, To keep your heart away from the bad. The elves they float on enchanted ground Graceful and beautiful - it's magic they've found Cunning and deceitful though they know what is right, Golden blonde hair, it shines in the light the dwarves they are short, they are stout, they are bauld. well kept caves, away from the cold. sharp battle axes, and tempers short a trusty friend, and one very well taught. The unicorns, the nympths, of shimmering thought, The knights, the fights, of the royal court, A merchant's bargain sold at last resort, Every colour, every shape,our imagination sought. But, as adults we all know, its only our thoughts keeping them their, whilst our dear children, stop and then stare. They are to be children, in this humble land. What is better, they get to play in the sand. A bit random, I know. But I based it on people taking their kids to the dream land for the first time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andufusthebronze Posted February 8, 2007 Share Posted February 8, 2007 Issy, archimage, just ignore each other, if you keep flaming here (although I have taken a side) I will no longer contribute to this poem. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head She giggles, she groans She whines, and moans! But soon she falls, asleep on your shoulder As the fire in the grate, begins to smoulder. flames flicker and ashes fall your eyes wonder from ceiling to wall its coming to the end of a very long day you close your eyes, goodnight I say Dreams flicker, reality stays You're watching, you're waiting, counting the days A moment, a second, could change your life, It just takes time to keep your dreams at bay happy king, smiling queen remnents of a long lost dream a hope that fades like a flame in a fire as your imagination begins to tire As you feel, soon the dream will end. As your creativity is about to bend, With a lot of luck, and pixie dust. If one doesnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t work the other must Where dreams, are reality And reality, a dream Where all you need is vitality Just you, any your team Laughing face crying eye Waving hand as we say goodbye With fire in my blood and a song in my heart The dreamers, we're off, for a clean new start. This fantasy realm, of elves and dwarves Take away your breath, making a small pause. This is the way you see my lad, To keep your heart away from the bad. The elves they float on enchanted ground Graceful and beautiful - it's magic they've found Cunning and deceitful though they know what is right, Golden blonde hair, it shines in the light. the dwarves they are short, they are stout, they are bauld. well kept caves, away from the cold. sharp battle axes, and tempers short a trusty friend, and one very well tought. The unicorns, the nympths, of shimmering thought, The knights, the fights, of the royal court, A merchant's bargain sold at last resort, Every colour, every shape,our imagination sought. But, as adults we all know, its only our thoughts keeping them their, whilst our dear children, stop and then stare. They are to be children, in this humble land. What is better, they get to play in the sand. The waves rise. Like the sun. Across the horizen. The fiend stares across. Humbug. His eyes despisen. Bah. No one notices. This time for enjoyment, will not wilt. As they play. The way childern do. You pull up the quilt. He starts to hunger, forever more. his bin, with only an apple core. His stomach growls, as he waits for his pray and he pokes at his fireplace, made of clay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andufusthebronze Posted February 8, 2007 Share Posted February 8, 2007 thank you archimage. p.s Daemon is the japanese spelling for demon. ----------------------------------------------------- Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head She giggles, she groans She whines, and moans! But soon she falls, asleep on your shoulder As the fire in the grate, begins to smoulder. flames flicker and ashes fall your eyes wonder from ceiling to wall its coming to the end of a very long day you close your eyes, goodnight I say Dreams flicker, reality stays You're watching, you're waiting, counting the days A moment, a second, could change your life, It just takes time to keep your dreams at bay happy king, smiling queen remnents of a long lost dream a hope that fades like a flame in a fire as your imagination begins to tire As you feel, soon the dream will end. As your creativity is about to bend, With a lot of luck, and pixie dust. If one doesnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t work the other must Where dreams, are reality And reality, a dream Where all you need is vitality Just you, any your team Laughing face crying eye Waving hand as we say goodbye With fire in my blood and a song in my heart The dreamers, we're off, for a clean new start. This fantasy realm, of elves and dwarves Take away your breath, making a small pause. This is the way you see my lad, To keep your heart away from the bad. The elves they float on enchanted ground Graceful and beautiful - it's magic they've found Cunning and deceitful though they know what is right, Golden blonde hair, it shines in the light. the dwarves they are short, they are stout, they are bauld. well kept caves, away from the cold. sharp battle axes, and tempers short a trusty friend, and one very well tought. The unicorns, the nympths, of shimmering thought, The knights, the fights, of the royal court, A merchant's bargain sold at last resort, Every colour, every shape,our imagination sought. But, as adults we all know, its only our thoughts keeping them their, whilst our dear children, stop and then stare. They are to be children, in this humble land. What is better, they get to play in the sand. The waves rise. Like the sun. Across the horizen. The fiend stares across. Humbug. His eyes despisen. Bah. No one notices. This time for enjoyment, will not wilt. As they play. The way childern do. You pull up the quilt. He starts to hunger, forever more. his bin, with only an apple core. His stomach growls, as he waits for his pray and he pokes at his fireplace, made of clay. A snap. A crack. An animal in the traps. Soon eaten. Tied in wraps. all the while, innocents play on the beach. whilst the daemon prepares his leech. he plans and schemes to murder the all, yet, he is near his downfall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeeLee Posted February 8, 2007 Share Posted February 8, 2007 Issy, archimage, just ignore each other, if you keep flaming here (although I have taken a side) I will no longer contribute to this poem. I'll drink to that, even though i know who i'd agree with.... Anyways now for literature! Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head She giggles, she groans She whines, and moans! But soon she falls, asleep on your shoulder As the fire in the grate, begins to smoulder. flames flicker and ashes fall your eyes wonder from ceiling to wall its coming to the end of a very long day you close your eyes, goodnight I say Dreams flicker, reality stays You're watching, you're waiting, counting the days A moment, a second, could change your life, It just takes time to keep your dreams at bay happy king, smiling queen remnents of a long lost dream a hope that fades like a flame in a fire as your imagination begins to tire As you feel, soon the dream will end. As your creativity is about to bend, With a lot of luck, and pixie dust. If one doesnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t work the other must Where dreams, are reality And reality, a dream Where all you need is vitality Just you, any your team Laughing face crying eye Waving hand as we say goodbye With fire in my blood and a song in my heart The dreamers, we're off, for a clean new start. This fantasy realm, of elves and dwarves Take away your breath, making a small pause. This is the way you see my lad, To keep your heart away from the bad. The elves they float on enchanted ground Graceful and beautiful - it's magic they've found Cunning and deceitful though they know what is right, Golden blonde hair, it shines in the light. the dwarves they are short, they are stout, they are bauld. well kept caves, away from the cold. sharp battle axes, and tempers short a trusty friend, and one very well tought. The unicorns, the nympths, of shimmering thought, The knights, the fights, of the royal court, A merchant's bargain sold at last resort, Every colour, every shape,our imagination sought. But, as adults we all know, its only our thoughts keeping them their, whilst our dear children, stop and then stare. They are to be children, in this humble land. What is better, they get to play in the sand. The waves rise. Like the sun. Across the horizen. The fiend stares across. Humbug. His eyes despisen. Bah. No one notices. This time for enjoyment, will not wilt. As they play. The way childern do. You pull up the quilt. He starts to hunger, forever more. his bin, with only an apple core. His stomach growls, as he waits for his pray and he pokes at his fireplace, made of clay. A snap. A crack. An animal in the traps. Soon eaten. Tied in wraps. all the while, innocents play on the beach. whilst the daemon prepares his leech. he plans and schemes to murder the all, yet, he is near his downfall. a battle begins on a blanket of snow purity, virtue and innocence go to fight for the freedom of a long lost soul whilst the winds of change take their tole bit random i know but hey : Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archimage_a Posted February 8, 2007 Share Posted February 8, 2007 Fine be differcult...Ok but I am not changing my posts that I have already done. ___________ Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head She giggles, she groans She whines, and moans! But soon she falls, asleep on your shoulder As the fire in the grate, begins to smoulder. flames flicker and ashes fall your eyes wonder from ceiling to wall its coming to the end of a very long day you close your eyes, goodnight I say Dreams flicker, reality stays You're watching, you're waiting, counting the days A moment, a second, could change your life, It just takes time to keep your dreams at bay happy king, smiling queen remnents of a long lost dream a hope that fades like a flame in a fire as your imagination begins to tire As you feel, soon the dream will end. As your creativity is about to bend, With a lot of luck, and pixie dust. If one doesnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t work the other must Where dreams, are reality And reality, a dream Where all you need is vitality Just you, any your team Laughing face crying eye Waving hand as we say goodbye With fire in my blood and a song in my heart The dreamers, we're off, for a clean new start. This fantasy realm, of elves and dwarves Take away your breath, making a small pause. This is the way you see my lad, To keep your heart away from the bad. The elves they float on enchanted ground Graceful and beautiful - it's magic they've found Cunning and deceitful though they know what is right, Golden blonde hair, it shines in the light. the dwarves they are short, they are stout, they are bauld. well kept caves, away from the cold. sharp battle axes, and tempers short a trusty friend, and one very well tought. The unicorns, the nympths, of shimmering thought, The knights, the fights, of the royal court, A merchant's bargain sold at last resort, Every colour, every shape,our imagination sought. But, as adults we all know, its only our thoughts keeping them their, whilst our dear children, stop and then stare. They are to be children, in this humble land. What is better, they get to play in the sand. The waves rise. Like the sun. Across the horizen. The fiend stares across. Humbug. His eyes despisen. Bah. No one notices. This time for enjoyment, will not wilt. As they play. The way childern do. You pull up the quilt. He starts to hunger, forever more. his bin, with only an apple core. His stomach growls, as he waits for his pray and he pokes at his fireplace, made of clay. A snap. A crack. An animal in the traps. Soon eaten. Tied in wraps. all the while, innocents play on the beach. whilst the daemon prepares his leech. he plans and schemes to murder the all, yet, he is near his downfall. a battle begins on a blanket of snow purity, virtue and innocence go to fight for the freedom of a long lost soul whilst the winds of change take their tole As time moves on. So must we all. Death glance upon. Like statues, tall. We get closer to it. Each passing breath. Advancing until. There is nothign left. http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeeLee Posted February 8, 2007 Share Posted February 8, 2007 tee hee heee Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head She giggles, she groans She whines, and moans! But soon she falls, asleep on your shoulder As the fire in the grate, begins to smoulder. flames flicker and ashes fall your eyes wonder from ceiling to wall its coming to the end of a very long day you close your eyes, goodnight I say Dreams flicker, reality stays You're watching, you're waiting, counting the days A moment, a second, could change your life, It just takes time to keep your dreams at bay happy king, smiling queen remnents of a long lost dream a hope that fades like a flame in a fire as your imagination begins to tire As you feel, soon the dream will end. As your creativity is about to bend, With a lot of luck, and pixie dust. If one doesnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t work the other must Where dreams, are reality And reality, a dream Where all you need is vitality Just you, any your team Laughing face crying eye Waving hand as we say goodbye With fire in my blood and a song in my heart The dreamers, we're off, for a clean new start. This fantasy realm, of elves and dwarves Take away your breath, making a small pause. This is the way you see my lad, To keep your heart away from the bad. The elves they float on enchanted ground Graceful and beautiful - it's magic they've found Cunning and deceitful though they know what is right, Golden blonde hair, it shines in the light. the dwarves they are short, they are stout, they are bauld. well kept caves, away from the cold. sharp battle axes, and tempers short a trusty friend, and one very well tought. The unicorns, the nympths, of shimmering thought, The knights, the fights, of the royal court, A merchant's bargain sold at last resort, Every colour, every shape,our imagination sought. But, as adults we all know, its only our thoughts keeping them their, whilst our dear children, stop and then stare. They are to be children, in this humble land. What is better, they get to play in the sand. The waves rise. Like the sun. Across the horizen. The fiend stares across. Humbug. His eyes despisen. Bah. No one notices. This time for enjoyment, will not wilt. As they play. The way childern do. You pull up the quilt. He starts to hunger, forever more. his bin, with only an apple core. His stomach growls, as he waits for his pray and he pokes at his fireplace, made of clay. A snap. A crack. An animal in the traps. Soon eaten. Tied in wraps. all the while, innocents play on the beach. whilst the daemon prepares his leech. he plans and schemes to murder the all, yet, he is near his downfall. a battle begins on a blanket of snow purity, virtue and innocence go to fight for the freedom of a long lost soul whilst the winds of change take their tole As time moves on. So must we all. Death glance upon. Like statues, tall. We get closer to it. Each passing breath. Advancing until. There is nothign left. death, something we can't attempt to deny death, something we'll never defy somehow closer to our hearts than life oh how human minds are consumed by strife Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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