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New WIP [UPDATED MARCH 8]


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It was Mac's work, but he gave me permission to work on it. The basic lines are his, but I did all the coloring and added the cape as well as fixed up the match.

 

 

 

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You don't like the pants. Okay. What part of the pants don't you like? How can I improve on them?

 

 

 

ok the short version: The colors, rare shape of shading around the knee's and lower parts of the leg.

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is it just me or is the tree smaller than the people, the one in the bottom right

 

 

 

I haven't edited that part, yet, but I want to keep it mostly the same, kind of in respect to Mac. And, besides, some trees are smaller than people, I mean, it could be a shrub or bush, y'know.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I haven't checked Pixellation since this morning, red, but I'll get to work on it. Yeah, I'm not the best at choosing colors, but hopefully I'll get better.

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ok a few things to work on:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

* The smoke coming of the left tree is just a dither party... never dither smoke all the way, just make it like the top of ur right tree.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

* The tree's are to easy shaded, shade them a little more, i Think that would look better :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Like ronnie said now only the sky and the grass and a bit of little chances later but for now this is it ::'

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how about in the background have a wall, because with the 2 trees it reminds

 

 

 

me on the yew trees in edgvill, so pretend like the camara is facing west and

 

 

 

draw that wall into the background, just a sugestion.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

it should also cut down on the amour of grass and sky in the sig that i think

 

 

 

will make it better also.

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Just two things:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Both left pant legs look pillow shaded

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The right guy's pointing arm looks a little long, maybe that's just me

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I love your style and shading! Cant wait till its done! \'

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