Hawks Posted July 23, 2008 Share Posted July 23, 2008 Okay my attempt at random poetry. I was encouraged to try because of dragoonson's cool poem. Why does the world go on When I can't I know it's not right For me to want But now my time is ended And I feel I should No! What point is there In wasting time, Waiting for the end I've lived a good life Nothing to be ashamed of But those fifteen years Just seem so short now I will miss you Sitting with you on a summer's night Waiting as you finished your chores Now why do I have to leave It saddens me This is our last night together The next time you'll see me You'll not remember Never, only Me, my agonizing memories To comfort through the nothingness ** Another short one... kind of bugs me, it doesn't seem done. Off in the distance, A battle-horn cries. The fight has begun, But I am not there. No, I have been left behind, A useless piece of junk, A boring old man. In my time, You fought if you knew how. None of this crazy stuff they have nowadays. I can still fight! You should have seen it, A horse-mounted warrior, Armor gleaming in the sun, I held a long sword in my gloved hand. And yet I am left behind. Sir Aldric is no more. *** Anything decent? My master writes Day and night, Night and day. He says it's for a book But I've never seen such a thing. I think his writing Is really... No, I can't tell. I swore to never tell But... Oh well No one's going to read this anyway. What I really think Is that he's in love... With the girl from the mill. Yes, or else the herbalist. Yes, my master The baliff of Archenspire. sig by Soa.....tip.it times.....art & mediadeviantart/flickr/last.fm/steam/twitter/tumblr/youtube Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluejayfan94 Posted July 24, 2008 Share Posted July 24, 2008 Wow, Very nice. Good job for your first Poetry. HomerSPC's Lets Plays : : Minecraft, Portal, Halo and more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoonson Posted July 24, 2008 Share Posted July 24, 2008 Okay my attempt at random poetry. I was encouraged to try because of dragoonson's cool poem. \ Buejay is right,its way better than mine,for sure. so i herd u liek devarts?If you look at me and feel offended by my 666-ism,think.I could be just as offended by your "cross".[hide=This's why I'm hot]The Eleventh Commandment:Thou Shalst only say "Amen,brother".Amen, brother :lol:Amen, brudda (referring to the 10th commandment)amen Bruder! (german ftw)I'm invulnerable to everything, except Lenin and Dragoonson.That's impossible. I love people.[/hide] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hawks Posted July 24, 2008 Author Share Posted July 24, 2008 Wow. Thank you. :D Now I shall have to go write more, I was thinking of a battle from different points of view... It sounds interesting at least. sig by Soa.....tip.it times.....art & mediadeviantart/flickr/last.fm/steam/twitter/tumblr/youtube Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluejayfan94 Posted July 24, 2008 Share Posted July 24, 2008 Sounds interesting... Can't wait to see it HomerSPC's Lets Plays : : Minecraft, Portal, Halo and more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hawks Posted July 26, 2008 Author Share Posted July 26, 2008 WIP The Battle-Poem Yah! We charge into battle Swords raised, Bows at hand, Axes ready to destroy. We thirst for blood Blood of our enemies. We will win today By the might of our King. *** The orcs rush toward Our assembled army. They don't know it But this is not all Of the Elves. I draw my bow Three more arrows in the dirt "Aim and fire," the commander says I pick my target and shoot. The orc falls dead My arrow through his shoulder A gap in his armor. *** Nearby I see the orcs approach our elven allies. I want to help But my conscience says to wait. And so I wait Sword drawn, in hand Itching to fight. TO BE CONTINUED... sig by Soa.....tip.it times.....art & mediadeviantart/flickr/last.fm/steam/twitter/tumblr/youtube Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluejayfan94 Posted July 26, 2008 Share Posted July 26, 2008 Reminds me of the battles in World of Warcraft between the Orcs and Night Elves (did you base it off that?) HomerSPC's Lets Plays : : Minecraft, Portal, Halo and more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hawks Posted July 26, 2008 Author Share Posted July 26, 2008 Lol no... I was just randomly thinking about orcs being evil and elves being cool. The verse with 'alliance with the elves' is meant to be the humans... possibly the dwarves. Maybe it was in my subconscience at the time... :o sig by Soa.....tip.it times.....art & mediadeviantart/flickr/last.fm/steam/twitter/tumblr/youtube Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoonson Posted July 27, 2008 Share Posted July 27, 2008 Reminds me of the battles in World of Warcraft between the Orcs and Night Elves (did you base it off that?) Orcs are always in battle with Elves.Story is,that Orcs were once the beautiful ones,favored by the Gods.But then the Elves with their magic and all impressed the Gods,making the favor shift to them,and the Orcs haven't forgiven them since...Damn that would make a good poem =P so i herd u liek devarts?If you look at me and feel offended by my 666-ism,think.I could be just as offended by your "cross".[hide=This's why I'm hot]The Eleventh Commandment:Thou Shalst only say "Amen,brother".Amen, brother :lol:Amen, brudda (referring to the 10th commandment)amen Bruder! (german ftw)I'm invulnerable to everything, except Lenin and Dragoonson.That's impossible. I love people.[/hide] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluejayfan94 Posted July 27, 2008 Share Posted July 27, 2008 Reminds me of the battles in World of Warcraft between the Orcs and Night Elves (did you base it off that?) Orcs are always in battle with Elves.Story is,that Orcs were once the beautiful ones,favored by the Gods.But then the Elves with their magic and all impressed the Gods,making the favor shift to them,and the Orcs haven't forgiven them since...Damn that would make a good poem =P Haha. write it and see how we like it. HomerSPC's Lets Plays : : Minecraft, Portal, Halo and more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoonson Posted July 27, 2008 Share Posted July 27, 2008 I'm going out,though so it'll be up probably in 12 hours lol.That would be midnight here... so i herd u liek devarts?If you look at me and feel offended by my 666-ism,think.I could be just as offended by your "cross".[hide=This's why I'm hot]The Eleventh Commandment:Thou Shalst only say "Amen,brother".Amen, brother :lol:Amen, brudda (referring to the 10th commandment)amen Bruder! (german ftw)I'm invulnerable to everything, except Lenin and Dragoonson.That's impossible. I love people.[/hide] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluejayfan94 Posted July 27, 2008 Share Posted July 27, 2008 I'm going out,though so it'll be up probably in 12 hours lol.That would be midnight here... That would be 10 AM here :P HomerSPC's Lets Plays : : Minecraft, Portal, Halo and more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hawks Posted July 27, 2008 Author Share Posted July 27, 2008 I'm going out,though so it'll be up probably in 12 hours lol.That would be midnight here... Lol when you posted it was midnight here... in Michigan. sig by Soa.....tip.it times.....art & mediadeviantart/flickr/last.fm/steam/twitter/tumblr/youtube Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoonson Posted July 27, 2008 Share Posted July 27, 2008 You do realise I live on the other side of the world,then?Go read my lyrics ^.^ Its not a lyric,though...The next song in the series is very similar to Metallica's style so i herd u liek devarts?If you look at me and feel offended by my 666-ism,think.I could be just as offended by your "cross".[hide=This's why I'm hot]The Eleventh Commandment:Thou Shalst only say "Amen,brother".Amen, brother :lol:Amen, brudda (referring to the 10th commandment)amen Bruder! (german ftw)I'm invulnerable to everything, except Lenin and Dragoonson.That's impossible. I love people.[/hide] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluejayfan94 Posted July 27, 2008 Share Posted July 27, 2008 Yea, I see the location below your name: "Singapore, the hellhole where I keep my stuff." HomerSPC's Lets Plays : : Minecraft, Portal, Halo and more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hawks Posted August 7, 2008 Author Share Posted August 7, 2008 They say Lightning never strikes twice In the same place. They were wrong. After it happened... Then when I saw you. I knew it then. Life doesn't live by rules. Sure you have to breathe... But that's not always true. Sure you're confused. But I don't care. All I need is you. I know you're the same way. I'll wait for you. As long as it takes. ~~~ All hyped up. A natural high. I stand near the boards. Waiting for the moment. The coaches yell. The door is opened. I follow into the rink. Sure it's heavy, Sure it's hard, But I love it. I skate As fast as I can. Five laps. Up, down. I reach my goal. I stretch. When I'm done, My team stands ready. I nod at the first. She shoots; I block it With a butterfly. The routine contiunes some twenty times. The ref blows the whistle; They head to the bench. Time for the face off. They line up. I stand ready; Waiting. Soon a breakaway Comes to me. I stand; challenging, and block the shot. I throw it back quickly, The refs call it anyway. I grumble and prepare... For next to me The face off begins. But my team gets it. She carries it down the ice. Away from me... She fakes left... GOAL!! sig by Soa.....tip.it times.....art & mediadeviantart/flickr/last.fm/steam/twitter/tumblr/youtube Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluejayfan94 Posted August 7, 2008 Share Posted August 7, 2008 Lol @ Hockey Poem. Very good, getting better every time. HomerSPC's Lets Plays : : Minecraft, Portal, Halo and more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hawks Posted August 7, 2008 Author Share Posted August 7, 2008 lol. :) The other one was inspired by the Twilight Saga... Mostly Breaking Dawn (the 4th book). sig by Soa.....tip.it times.....art & mediadeviantart/flickr/last.fm/steam/twitter/tumblr/youtube Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluejayfan94 Posted August 8, 2008 Share Posted August 8, 2008 lol. :) The other one was inspired by the Twilight Saga... Mostly Breaking Dawn (the 4th book). Haha, get your inspiration for something else now... Off-topic... This is probably a post that my Varrock Library friends would read so I'd like to say that I'm going on Vacation for 2 weeks. Later Ya'll HomerSPC's Lets Plays : : Minecraft, Portal, Halo and more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chey Posted September 15, 2008 Share Posted September 15, 2008 Very Very nice poems :P Lol I havent had a chance to read Breaking Dawn yet. Or New Moon for that matter. Should probably go to the library today to pick that up. Anyways, like I said, very good writing. You seem to have a natural talent for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hawks Posted September 15, 2008 Author Share Posted September 15, 2008 Thankies. Really, though Breaking Dawn is freaking awesome. You should also read The Host, Stephanie Meyer wrote that to. Both really good. I can't wait for Midnight sun to actually come out. OH AND THE MOVIE COMES OUT IN LIKE A MONTH! NOVEMBER 21! TWILIGHT THE MOVIE! W00T! sig by Soa.....tip.it times.....art & mediadeviantart/flickr/last.fm/steam/twitter/tumblr/youtube Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluejayfan94 Posted September 15, 2008 Share Posted September 15, 2008 Wow chey, that was a really big bump. I think I lost some respect for you. HomerSPC's Lets Plays : : Minecraft, Portal, Halo and more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
homegirl911911999 Posted September 16, 2008 Share Posted September 16, 2008 I like the second one the best but they're all good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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