Shiny & Julius Collab, C/C please?

Finally got along doing it.

Shiny's Base:

Really good base, had no idea what to work on when I got it as it's nearly b&w.

My effects:

First time using 1 effect C4D so don't be harsh.

C/C would be really nice, specially for me as I haven't done similar effect works at all. Didn't post it in the sticky for the same reason.

I quite like it, not a lot of variation in the effects but that's not a major problem. Not a big fan of the colours though, the pink is a bit boring and I don't think it goes too well with the render's colours. And me no likes text. :(

Other than that, looks good.

The base had a slight brown colour but I thought it would be too boring using that one, I also had a problem when selecting a new colour as the render is pretty much B&W, tried a pink colour and thought it looked good but that's just my personal opinion. Also I suck at text.

Thanks for the comment Jopie :).

Pink is <3

Too noisy again. Can't really see the c4d though.

The slight redish spattered thingys. I'm making a new style now as I can't figure out how to fix the noisy problem. Thank you thru.

Nice, seems a bit noisy in places though.