you left a bit of white space empty, unless that is intentional, hard to tell tbh and the guy on the right you need to keep the inside of his hood all black, thats second shade makes it looks like there is no head in there rather than a shadow cast over his face. and if you want to spend a fair bit of time to make it look better the dark part of the cloak should be at the front (closer to you) or there would be no shadow on his face at all, or at least nowhere near that dark :P but I still like it, It looks nice, gj :D