LeeLee

I love that. It should be written on a tomb stone somewhere. Hope you know what i mean. :XD:

Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head She giggles, she groans She whines, and moans! But soon she falls, asleep on your shoulder As the fire in the grate, begins to smoulder. flames flicker and ashes fall your eyes wonder from ceiling to wall its coming to the end of a very long day you close your eyes, goodnight I say Dreams flicker, reality stays You're watching, you're waiting, counting the days A moment, a second, could change your life, It just takes time to keep your dreams at bay happy king, smiling queen remnents of a long lost dream a hope that fades like a flame in a fire as your imagination begins to tire As you feel, soon the dream will end. As your creativity is about to bend, With a lot of luck, and pixie dust. If one doesnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t work the other must Where dreams, are reality And reality, a dream Where all you need is vitality Just you, any your team Laughing face crying eye Waving hand as we say goodbye With fire in my blood and a song in my heart The dreamers, we're off, for a clean new start. This fantasy realm, of elves and dwarves Take away your breath, making a small pause. This is the way you see my lad, To keep your heart away from the bad. The elves they float on enchanted ground Graceful and beautiful - it's magic they've found Cunning and deceitful though they know what is right, Golden blonde hair, it shines in the light. the dwarves they are short, they are stout, they are bauld. well kept caves, away from the cold. sharp battle axes, and tempers short a trusty friend, and one very well tought. The unicorns, the nympths, of shimmering thought, The knights, the fights, of the royal court, A merchant's bargain sold at last resort, Every colour, every shape,our imagination sought. But, as adults we all know, its only our thoughts keeping them their, whilst our dear children, stop and then stare. They are to be children, in this humble land. What is better, they get to play in the sand. The waves rise. Like the sun. Across the horizen. The fiend stares across. Humbug. His eyes despisen. Bah. No one notices. This time for enjoyment, will not wilt. As they play. The way childern do. You pull up the quilt. He starts to hunger, forever more. his bin, with only an apple core. His stomach growls, as he waits for his pray and he pokes at his fireplace, made of clay. A snap. A crack. An animal in the traps. Soon eaten. Tied in wraps. all the while, innocents play on the beach. whilst the daemon prepares his leech. he plans and schemes to murder the all, yet, he is near his downfall. a battle begins on a blanket of snow purity, virtue and innocence go to fight for the freedom of a long lost soul whilst the winds of change take their tole As time moves on. So must we all. Death glance upon. Like statues, tall. We get closer to it. Each passing breath. Advancing until. There is nothing left. death, something we can't attempt to deny death, something we'll never defy somehow closer to our hearts than life oh how human minds are consumed by strife Life of pure. Life of dark. Life of a kind, found in a park. Love keeps it warm. Hate keeps it torn. So when your mum wants a hug When your baby sister's scared of the bugs, Or even when your tore your dad's favourite rug I hope you can only find... love. That love of bold. The hate of cold. Spread the love. Like a fire doth. 'I love you,' are words we hear Alot, and to my heart is near, The warmth when you hold me tight in your arms, I'm safe, I'm glad, I'm away from all harm Then again, you pull away. As our live, does being to fray. A shout here. A shout there. And suddenly our love lies thread-bare. but deep down, we still care, and when we see them, we stop and stare. they have moved on, breaking your heart. leaving you in despair You opened your heart. To love and care. Chilled winds whip. Though this once safe lair. Like a sword. It dashes you to pieces. While he runs free. Free to keep its leases. Yet you still walk on. In this world of hate Brittle Piece of Bone. All alone. Trying to Find. Never Know Love drives you on. Hollow though And it continues on. Worse than any blow I live this heart of hearts. I pull the cart of carts. For I am in love. I'l give hate the shove. Ben and Jerry's Perferably cherry Fully mending my heart would be a dream Since i'm patching it up with cherry ice cream haagen daz is my pleasure ben&jerry's is my poison but thats just my view I won't force it on you Ben and Jerry's fill my tum And hear me whisper yummy yum The bowl is empty, the spoon is heaped And towards my mouth it leaps...YUM! But for each a time. And a time a place. Like this rhyme. We dive and chase. And while we search we find some fun A childish play, our happiness done. Chattering about icecream, how did we get there? When once we wept for fantasy and dreams. Like the mighty river. We start as clouds, we dither. When we start our journy, we change each passing second. Till eventually we are here. We have written and we have trekkened i hope this doesn't mean what i think it does the memorable ending of something that was are we nearing the end of this long-winded poem all i can say is "Noooooooooooooooooooooooo". There are some things, Lee, that shall never end, However much our verses can distort and bend, We shall continue, we shall fight, Fight for our words, fight for what is right! But when you gun is spent. When you cannot go on. You can alway be lent. A rhyme this long. Words, flow, Words, go, Verses form, Wisdom knows. Words flow, like our dreams, Children play, by the streams, in this land, our fairy tale! Where the story will never fail! Love flows, like our hearts, Kisses shared, we shall never part In this land, our very our land, We shall go strolling, hand in hand I remember those innocent days too, all those times I laughed at the word poo, but now, those days are forever lost, But, I still find Issy & Lee at my side Dripping blood anguished cry Tears splashing as we say goodbye One last time I'm in your arms, But you're slipping away. You're the price I have to pay. but I'll always remember the good times we shared, and I'll always know how much you cared. If I could go back, I sure as hell would, But we now, are truely alone. The darkness creeps all around, all I want is your voice, your sound, for now I know the sorrow of the daemon, all I need, is to see you again You push up the daisys. That I lay. Now everyone. Is left to pay. Like a great wave. Time comes for you. My friends. With the love of earth shattering. Now your all I have to depend. Memories fade, slowly to dust, I always loved you, with a hint of lust, But now as I lie here, thinking of you, I wonder why, god split us apart Torn from peace like a rose from the ground, I had thought we were one, we were none, we were bound, Into the sea, into the ocean, Into oblivion where our quiet love drowned. and as I lie on this beachy dune, I wait for the beautiful moon, I sit here and think, my thoughts wonder to you, and silent tears stream down my face But for only when the end is near. Do we see what we feel is truely dear. Like a rose before a storm. Will we survive till tommrows dawn? My thoughts, they drift, they drift to you My thoughts, they drift, to all that you do I can't help thinking how nice it would be If you'd come, and sit here, for a while, with me. But, alas, I know you can't, as it was fate, that we be seperated, on that very date, but yet in my heart, I still find love for you, even though, I know, I will never find you when love is drained to its river bed who are left, but the friends, responsible for what i've read so Issy, Andufus and Archimage too I'd like to take this moment to say thankyou! So, once again I try to enter the fantasy realm, To find the entrance barred, Tears pour down off of my face, knowing I can never see you again. thorns, [bleep]ed with remorse, [puncture]le your delicate hand whilst there appear to be man traps all over the land why is the once open door to imagination locked the entrance into a moment blocked Now I realise, my innocence has gone, and now, reality is no longer a con, I have to put up with the real world, but the worst part is, I have to do it without you can ever a moment like this be so fragile disappearing as quickly as a fleeting smile as the feeling inside is once again numb to pain and sorrow once again i must succumb But alas not all is lost For sunlight, for moonlight, there is no cost The golden rays, the silvery streams, Eternity of love and light of dreams. _____________________________________ I particularly like that last verse. Here's my contribution __________________________________________________ a sunset painted in primrose pink a sea of silky blues in which you can sink the gold i added to frame my portrait of you and the green in your whimsical landscape too

Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head She giggles, she groans She whines, and moans! But soon she falls, asleep on your shoulder As the fire in the grate, begins to smoulder. flames flicker and ashes fall your eyes wonder from ceiling to wall its coming to the end of a very long day you close your eyes, goodnight I say Dreams flicker, reality stays You're watching, you're waiting, counting the days A moment, a second, could change your life, It just takes time to keep your dreams at bay happy king, smiling queen remnents of a long lost dream a hope that fades like a flame in a fire as your imagination begins to tire As you feel, soon the dream will end. As your creativity is about to bend, With a lot of luck, and pixie dust. If one doesnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t work the other must Where dreams, are reality And reality, a dream Where all you need is vitality Just you, any your team Laughing face crying eye Waving hand as we say goodbye With fire in my blood and a song in my heart The dreamers, we're off, for a clean new start. This fantasy realm, of elves and dwarves Take away your breath, making a small pause. This is the way you see my lad, To keep your heart away from the bad. The elves they float on enchanted ground Graceful and beautiful - it's magic they've found Cunning and deceitful though they know what is right, Golden blonde hair, it shines in the light. the dwarves they are short, they are stout, they are bauld. well kept caves, away from the cold. sharp battle axes, and tempers short a trusty friend, and one very well tought. The unicorns, the nympths, of shimmering thought, The knights, the fights, of the royal court, A merchant's bargain sold at last resort, Every colour, every shape,our imagination sought. But, as adults we all know, its only our thoughts keeping them their, whilst our dear children, stop and then stare. They are to be children, in this humble land. What is better, they get to play in the sand. The waves rise. Like the sun. Across the horizen. The fiend stares across. Humbug. His eyes despisen. Bah. No one notices. This time for enjoyment, will not wilt. As they play. The way childern do. You pull up the quilt. He starts to hunger, forever more. his bin, with only an apple core. His stomach growls, as he waits for his pray and he pokes at his fireplace, made of clay. A snap. A crack. An animal in the traps. Soon eaten. Tied in wraps. all the while, innocents play on the beach. whilst the daemon prepares his leech. he plans and schemes to murder the all, yet, he is near his downfall. a battle begins on a blanket of snow purity, virtue and innocence go to fight for the freedom of a long lost soul whilst the winds of change take their tole As time moves on. So must we all. Death glance upon. Like statues, tall. We get closer to it. Each passing breath. Advancing until. There is nothing left. death, something we can't attempt to deny death, something we'll never defy somehow closer to our hearts than life oh how human minds are consumed by strife Life of pure. Life of dark. Life of a kind, found in a park. Love keeps it warm. Hate keeps it torn. So when your mum wants a hug When your baby sister's scared of the bugs, Or even when your tore your dad's favourite rug I hope you can only find... love. That love of bold. The hate of cold. Spread the love. Like a fire doth. 'I love you,' are words we hear Alot, and to my heart is near, The warmth when you hold me tight in your arms, I'm safe, I'm glad, I'm away from all harm Then again, you pull away. As our live, does being to fray. A shout here. A shout there. And suddenly our love lies thread-bare. but deep down, we still care, and when we see them, we stop and stare. they have moved on, breaking your heart. leaving you in despair You opened your heart. To love and care. Chilled winds whip. Though this once safe lair. Like a sword. It dashes you to pieces. While he runs free. Free to keep its leases. Yet you still walk on. In this world of hate Brittle Piece of Bone. All alone. Trying to Find. Never Know Love drives you on. Hollow though And it continues on. Worse than any blow I live this heart of hearts. I pull the cart of carts. For I am in love. I'l give hate the shove. Ben and Jerry's Perferably cherry Fully mending my heart would be a dream Since i'm patching it up with cherry ice cream haagen daz is my pleasure ben&jerry's is my poison but thats just my view I won't force it on you Ben and Jerry's fill my tum And hear me whisper yummy yum The bowl is empty, the spoon is heaped And towards my mouth it leaps...YUM! But for each a time. And a time a place. Like this rhyme. We dive and chase. And while we search we find some fun A childish play, our happiness done. Chattering about icecream, how did we get there? When once we wept for fantasy and dreams. Like the mighty river. We start as clouds, we dither. When we start our journy, we change each passing second. Till eventually we are here. We have written and we have trekkened i hope this doesn't mean what i think it does the memorable ending of something that was are we nearing the end of this long-winded poem all i can say is "Noooooooooooooooooooooooo". There are some things, Lee, that shall never end, However much our verses can distort and bend, We shall continue, we shall fight, Fight for our words, fight for what is right! But when you gun is spent. When you cannot go on. You can alway be lent. A rhyme this long. Words, flow, Words, go, Verses form, Wisdom knows. Words flow, like our dreams, Children play, by the streams, in this land, our fairy tale! Where the story will never fail! Love flows, like our hearts, Kisses shared, we shall never part In this land, our very our land, We shall go strolling, hand in hand I remember those innocent days too, all those times I laughed at the word poo, but now, those days are forever lost, But, I still find Issy & Lee at my side Dripping blood anguished cry Tears splashing as we say goodbye One last time I'm in your arms, But you're slipping away. You're the price I have to pay. but I'll always remember the good times we shared, and I'll always know how much you cared. If I could go back, I sure as hell would, But we now, are truely alone. The darkness creeps all around, all I want is your voice, your sound, for now I know the sorrow of the daemon, all I need, is to see you again You push up the daisys. That I lay. Now everyone. Is left to pay. Like a great wave. Time comes for you. My friends. With the love of earth shattering. Now your all I have to depend. Memories fade, slowly to dust, I always loved you, with a hint of lust, But now as I lie here, thinking of you, I wonder why, god split us apart Torn from peace like a rose from the ground, I had thought we were one, we were none, we were bound, Into the sea, into the ocean, Into oblivion where our quiet love drowned. and as I lie on this beachy dune, I wait for the beautiful moon, I sit here and think, my thoughts wonder to you, and silent tears stream down my face But for only when the end is near. Do we see what we feel is truely dear. Like a rose before a storm. Will we survive till tommrows dawn? My thoughts, they drift, they drift to you My thoughts, they drift, to all that you do I can't help thinking how nice it would be If you'd come, and sit here, for a while, with me. But, alas, I know you can't, as it was fate, that we be seperated, on that very date, but yet in my heart, I still find love for you, even though, I know, I will never find you when love is drained to its river bed who are left, but the friends, responsible for what i've read so Issy, Andufus and Archimage too I'd like to take this moment to say thankyou! So, once again I try to enter the fantasy realm, To find the entrance barred, Tears pour down off of my face, knowing I can never see you again. thorns, [bleep]ed with remorse, [puncture]le your delicate hand whilst there appear to be man traps all over the land why is the once open door to imagination locked the entrance into a moment blocked Now I realise, my innocence has gone, and now, reality is no longer a con, I have to put up with the real world, but the worst part is, I have to do it without you can ever a moment like this be so fragile disappearing as quickly as a fleeting smile as the feeling inside is once again numb to pain and sorrow once again i must succumb

wow, hey that reminds me..................................... \

Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head She giggles, she groans She whines, and moans! But soon she falls, asleep on your shoulder As the fire in the grate, begins to smoulder. flames flicker and ashes fall your eyes wonder from ceiling to wall its coming to the end of a very long day you close your eyes, goodnight I say Dreams flicker, reality stays You're watching, you're waiting, counting the days A moment, a second, could change your life, It just takes time to keep your dreams at bay happy king, smiling queen remnents of a long lost dream a hope that fades like a flame in a fire as your imagination begins to tire As you feel, soon the dream will end. As your creativity is about to bend, With a lot of luck, and pixie dust. If one doesnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t work the other must Where dreams, are reality And reality, a dream Where all you need is vitality Just you, any your team Laughing face crying eye Waving hand as we say goodbye With fire in my blood and a song in my heart The dreamers, we're off, for a clean new start. This fantasy realm, of elves and dwarves Take away your breath, making a small pause. This is the way you see my lad, To keep your heart away from the bad. The elves they float on enchanted ground Graceful and beautiful - it's magic they've found Cunning and deceitful though they know what is right, Golden blonde hair, it shines in the light. the dwarves they are short, they are stout, they are bauld. well kept caves, away from the cold. sharp battle axes, and tempers short a trusty friend, and one very well tought. The unicorns, the nympths, of shimmering thought, The knights, the fights, of the royal court, A merchant's bargain sold at last resort, Every colour, every shape,our imagination sought. But, as adults we all know, its only our thoughts keeping them their, whilst our dear children, stop and then stare. They are to be children, in this humble land. What is better, they get to play in the sand. The waves rise. Like the sun. Across the horizen. The fiend stares across. Humbug. His eyes despisen. Bah. No one notices. This time for enjoyment, will not wilt. As they play. The way childern do. You pull up the quilt. He starts to hunger, forever more. his bin, with only an apple core. His stomach growls, as he waits for his pray and he pokes at his fireplace, made of clay. A snap. A crack. An animal in the traps. Soon eaten. Tied in wraps. all the while, innocents play on the beach. whilst the daemon prepares his leech. he plans and schemes to murder the all, yet, he is near his downfall. a battle begins on a blanket of snow purity, virtue and innocence go to fight for the freedom of a long lost soul whilst the winds of change take their tole As time moves on. So must we all. Death glance upon. Like statues, tall. We get closer to it. Each passing breath. Advancing until. There is nothing left. death, something we can't attempt to deny death, something we'll never defy somehow closer to our hearts than life oh how human minds are consumed by strife Life of pure. Life of dark. Life of a kind, found in a park. Love keeps it warm. Hate keeps it torn. So when your mum wants a hug When your baby sister's scared of the bugs, Or even when your tore your dad's favourite rug I hope you can only find... love. That love of bold. The hate of cold. Spread the love. Like a fire doth. 'I love you,' are words we hear Alot, and to my heart is near, The warmth when you hold me tight in your arms, I'm safe, I'm glad, I'm away from all harm Then again, you pull away. As our live, does being to fray. A shout here. A shout there. And suddenly our love lies thread-bare. but deep down, we still care, and when we see them, we stop and stare. they have moved on, breaking your heart. leaving you in despair You opened your heart. To love and care. Chilled winds whip. Though this once safe lair. Like a sword. It dashes you to pieces. While he runs free. Free to keep its leases. Yet you still walk on. In this world of hate Brittle Piece of Bone. All alone. Trying to Find. Never Know Love drives you on. Hollow though And it continues on. Worse than any blow I live this heart of hearts. I pull the cart of carts. For I am in love. I'l give hate the shove. Ben and Jerry's Perferably cherry Fully mending my heart would be a dream Since i'm patching it up with cherry ice cream haagen daz is my pleasure ben&jerry's is my poison but thats just my view I won't force it on you Ben and Jerry's fill my tum And hear me whisper yummy yum The bowl is empty, the spoon is heaped And towards my mouth it leaps...YUM! But for each a time. And a time a place. Like this rhyme. We dive and chase. And while we search we find some fun A childish play, our happiness done. Chattering about icecream, how did we get there? When once we wept for fantasy and dreams. Like the mighty river. We start as clouds, we dither. When we start our journy, we change each passing second. Till eventually we are here. We have written and we have trekkened i hope this doesn't mean what i think it does the memorable ending of something that was are we nearing the end of this long-winded poem all i can say is "Noooooooooooooooooooooooo". There are some things, Lee, that shall never end, However much our verses can distort and bend, We shall continue, we shall fight, Fight for our words, fight for what is right! But when you gun is spent. When you cannot go on. You can alway be lent. A rhyme this long. Words, flow, Words, go, Verses form, Wisdom knows. Words flow, like our dreams, Children play, by the streams, in this land, our fairy tale! Where the story will never fail! Love flows, like our hearts, Kisses shared, we shall never part In this land, our very our land, We shall go strolling, hand in hand I remember those innocent days too, all those times I laughed at the word poo, but now, those days are forever lost, But, I still find Issy & Lee at my side Dripping blood anguished cry Tears splashing as we say goodbye One last time I'm in your arms, But you're slipping away. You're the price I have to pay. but I'll always remember the good times we shared, and I'll always know how much you cared. If I could go back, I sure as hell would, But we now, are truely alone. The darkness creeps all around, all I want is your voice, your sound, for now I know the sorrow of the daemon, all I need, is to see you again You push up the daisys. That I lay. Now everyone. Is left to pay. Like a great wave. Time comes for you. My friends. With the love of earth shattering. Now your all I have to depend. Memories fade, slowly to dust, I always loved you, with a hint of lust, But now as I lie here, thinking of you, I wonder why, god split us apart Torn from peace like a rose from the ground, I had thought we were one, we were none, we were bound, Into the sea, into the ocean, Into oblivion where our quiet love drowned. and as I lie on this beachy dune, I wait for the beautiful moon, I sit here and think, my thoughts wonder to you, and silent tears stream down my face But for only when the end is near. Do we see what we feel is truely dear. Like a rose before a storm. Will we survive till tommrows dawn? My thoughts, they drift, they drift to you My thoughts, they drift, to all that you do I can't help thinking how nice it would be If you'd come, and sit here, for a while, with me. But, alas, I know you can't, as it was fate, that we be seperated, on that very date, but yet in my heart, I still find love for you, even though, I know, I will never find you when love is drained to its river bed who are left, but the friends, responsible for what i've read so Issy, Andufus and Archimage too I'd like to take this moment to say thankyou! So, once again I try to enter the fantasy realm, To find the entrance barred, Tears pour down off of my face, knowing I can never see you again. thorns, [bleep]ed with remorse, [puncture]le your delicate hand whilst there appear to be man traps all over the land why is the once open door to imagination locked the entrance into a moment blocked __________________________________________________ Come on Andufus another one. Whoooaaaaaa this poem is long :D

Very nice Andufus, I reckon, (this is just a guess) that your a very romantic person. I like the way the structure and words flow together with a very genuine sentiment which i think came straight out of your heart. Great going! :D

Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head She giggles, she groans She whines, and moans! But soon she falls, asleep on your shoulder As the fire in the grate, begins to smoulder. flames flicker and ashes fall your eyes wonder from ceiling to wall its coming to the end of a very long day you close your eyes, goodnight I say Dreams flicker, reality stays You're watching, you're waiting, counting the days A moment, a second, could change your life, It just takes time to keep your dreams at bay happy king, smiling queen remnents of a long lost dream a hope that fades like a flame in a fire as your imagination begins to tire As you feel, soon the dream will end. As your creativity is about to bend, With a lot of luck, and pixie dust. If one doesnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t work the other must Where dreams, are reality And reality, a dream Where all you need is vitality Just you, any your team Laughing face crying eye Waving hand as we say goodbye With fire in my blood and a song in my heart The dreamers, we're off, for a clean new start. This fantasy realm, of elves and dwarves Take away your breath, making a small pause. This is the way you see my lad, To keep your heart away from the bad. The elves they float on enchanted ground Graceful and beautiful - it's magic they've found Cunning and deceitful though they know what is right, Golden blonde hair, it shines in the light. the dwarves they are short, they are stout, they are bauld. well kept caves, away from the cold. sharp battle axes, and tempers short a trusty friend, and one very well tought. The unicorns, the nympths, of shimmering thought, The knights, the fights, of the royal court, A merchant's bargain sold at last resort, Every colour, every shape,our imagination sought. But, as adults we all know, its only our thoughts keeping them their, whilst our dear children, stop and then stare. They are to be children, in this humble land. What is better, they get to play in the sand. The waves rise. Like the sun. Across the horizen. The fiend stares across. Humbug. His eyes despisen. Bah. No one notices. This time for enjoyment, will not wilt. As they play. The way childern do. You pull up the quilt. He starts to hunger, forever more. his bin, with only an apple core. His stomach growls, as he waits for his pray and he pokes at his fireplace, made of clay. A snap. A crack. An animal in the traps. Soon eaten. Tied in wraps. all the while, innocents play on the beach. whilst the daemon prepares his leech. he plans and schemes to murder the all, yet, he is near his downfall. a battle begins on a blanket of snow purity, virtue and innocence go to fight for the freedom of a long lost soul whilst the winds of change take their tole As time moves on. So must we all. Death glance upon. Like statues, tall. We get closer to it. Each passing breath. Advancing until. There is nothing left. death, something we can't attempt to deny death, something we'll never defy somehow closer to our hearts than life oh how human minds are consumed by strife Life of pure. Life of dark. Life of a kind, found in a park. Love keeps it warm. Hate keeps it torn. So when your mum wants a hug When your baby sister's scared of the bugs, Or even when your tore your dad's favourite rug I hope you can only find... love. That love of bold. The hate of cold. Spread the love. Like a fire doth. 'I love you,' are words we hear Alot, and to my heart is near, The warmth when you hold me tight in your arms, I'm safe, I'm glad, I'm away from all harm Then again, you pull away. As our live, does being to fray. A shout here. A shout there. And suddenly our love lies thread-bare. but deep down, we still care, and when we see them, we stop and stare. they have moved on, breaking your heart. leaving you in despair You opened your heart. To love and care. Chilled winds whip. Though this once safe lair. Like a sword. It dashes you to pieces. While he runs free. Free to keep its leases. Yet you still walk on. In this world of hate Brittle Piece of Bone. All alone. Trying to Find. Never Know Love drives you on. Hollow though And it continues on. Worse than any blow I live this heart of hearts. I pull the cart of carts. For I am in love. I'l give hate the shove. Ben and Jerry's Perferably cherry Fully mending my heart would be a dream Since i'm patching it up with cherry ice cream haagen daz is my pleasure ben&jerry's is my poison but thats just my view I won't force it on you Ben and Jerry's fill my tum And hear me whisper yummy yum The bowl is empty, the spoon is heaped And towards my mouth it leaps...YUM! But for each a time. And a time a place. Like this rhyme. We dive and chase. And while we search we find some fun A childish play, our happiness done. Chattering about icecream, how did we get there? When once we wept for fantasy and dreams. Like the mighty river. We start as clouds, we dither. When we start our journy, we change each passing second. Till eventually we are here. We have written and we have trekkened i hope this doesn't mean what i think it does the memorable ending of something that was are we nearing the end of this long-winded poem all i can say is "Noooooooooooooooooooooooo". There are some things, Lee, that shall never end, However much our verses can distort and bend, We shall continue, we shall fight, Fight for our words, fight for what is right! But when you gun is spent. When you cannot go on. You can alway be lent. A rhyme this long. Words, flow, Words, go, Verses form, Wisdom knows. Words flow, like our dreams, Children play, by the streams, in this land, our fairy tale! Where the story will never fail! Love flows, like our hearts, Kisses shared, we shall never part In this land, our very our land, We shall go strolling, hand in hand I remember those innocent days too, all those times I laughed at the word poo, but now, those days are forever lost, But, I still find Issy & Lee at my side Dripping blood anguished cry Tears splashing as we say goodbye One last time I'm in your arms, But you're slipping away. You're the price I have to pay. but I'll always remember the good times we shared, and I'll always know how much you cared. If I could go back, I sure as hell would, But we now, are truely alone. The darkness creeps all around, all I want is your voice, your sound, for now I know the sorrow of the daemon, all I need, is to see you again You push up the daisys. That I lay. Now everyone. Is left to pay. Like a great wave. Time comes for you. My friends. With the love of earth shattering. Now your all I have to depend. Memories fade, slowly to dust, I always loved you, with a hint of lust, But now as I lie here, thinking of you, I wonder why, god split us apart Torn from peace like a rose from the ground, I had thought we were one, we were none, we were bound, Into the sea, into the ocean, Into oblivion where our quiet love drowned. and as I lie on this beachy dune, I wait for the beautiful moon, I sit here and think, my thoughts wonder to you, and silent tears stream down my face But for only when the end is near. Do we see what we feel is truely dear. Like a rose before a storm. Will we survive till tommrows dawn? My thoughts, they drift, they drift to you My thoughts, they drift, to all that you do I can't help thinking how nice it would be If you'd come, and sit here, for a while, with me. But, alas, I know you can't, as it was fate, that we be seperated, on that very date, but yet in my heart, I still find love for you, even though, I know, I will never find you when love is drained to its river bed who are left, but the friends, responsible for what i've read so Issy, Andufus and Archimage too I'd like to take this moment to say thankyou! ___________________________________________ Sorry i know we weren't supposed to rhyme about the rhyme, but i wnated to say that! : :D :mrgreen: :thumbsup:

somebody needs to check their spelling ahemm ahemmmm........Archimage. Don't take that to heart. Its just in the rules we were told to spell check. :mrgreen: Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head She giggles, she groans She whines, and moans! But soon she falls, asleep on your shoulder As the fire in the grate, begins to smoulder. flames flicker and ashes fall your eyes wonder from ceiling to wall its coming to the end of a very long day you close your eyes, goodnight I say Dreams flicker, reality stays You're watching, you're waiting, counting the days A moment, a second, could change your life, It just takes time to keep your dreams at bay happy king, smiling queen remnents of a long lost dream a hope that fades like a flame in a fire as your imagination begins to tire As you feel, soon the dream will end. As your creativity is about to bend, With a lot of luck, and pixie dust. If one doesnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t work the other must Where dreams, are reality And reality, a dream Where all you need is vitality Just you, any your team Laughing face crying eye Waving hand as we say goodbye With fire in my blood and a song in my heart The dreamers, we're off, for a clean new start. This fantasy realm, of elves and dwarves Take away your breath, making a small pause. This is the way you see my lad, To keep your heart away from the bad. The elves they float on enchanted ground Graceful and beautiful - it's magic they've found Cunning and deceitful though they know what is right, Golden blonde hair, it shines in the light. the dwarves they are short, they are stout, they are bauld. well kept caves, away from the cold. sharp battle axes, and tempers short a trusty friend, and one very well tought. The unicorns, the nympths, of shimmering thought, The knights, the fights, of the royal court, A merchant's bargain sold at last resort, Every colour, every shape,our imagination sought. But, as adults we all know, its only our thoughts keeping them their, whilst our dear children, stop and then stare. They are to be children, in this humble land. What is better, they get to play in the sand. The waves rise. Like the sun. Across the horizen. The fiend stares across. Humbug. His eyes despisen. Bah. No one notices. This time for enjoyment, will not wilt. As they play. The way childern do. You pull up the quilt. He starts to hunger, forever more. his bin, with only an apple core. His stomach growls, as he waits for his pray and he pokes at his fireplace, made of clay. A snap. A crack. An animal in the traps. Soon eaten. Tied in wraps. all the while, innocents play on the beach. whilst the daemon prepares his leech. he plans and schemes to murder the all, yet, he is near his downfall. a battle begins on a blanket of snow purity, virtue and innocence go to fight for the freedom of a long lost soul whilst the winds of change take their tole As time moves on. So must we all. Death glance upon. Like statues, tall. We get closer to it. Each passing breath. Advancing until. There is nothing left. death, something we can't attempt to deny death, something we'll never defy somehow closer to our hearts than life oh how human minds are consumed by strife Life of pure. Life of dark. Life of a kind, found in a park. Love keeps it warm. Hate keeps it torn. So when your mum wants a hug When your baby sister's scared of the bugs, Or even when your tore your dad's favourite rug I hope you can only find... love. That love of bold. The hate of cold. Spread the love. Like a fire doth. 'I love you,' are words we hear Alot, and to my heart is near, The warmth when you hold me tight in your arms, I'm safe, I'm glad, I'm away from all harm Then again, you pull away. As our live, does being to fray. A shout here. A shout there. And suddenly our love lies thread-bare. but deep down, we still care, and when we see them, we stop and stare. they have moved on, breaking your heart. leaving you in despair You opened your heart. To love and care. Chilled winds whip. Though this once safe lair. Like a sword. It dashes you to pieces. While he runs free. Free to keep its leases. Yet you still walk on. In this world of hate Brittle Piece of Bone. All alone. Trying to Find. Never Know Love drives you on. Hollow though And it continues on. Worse than any blow I live this heart of hearts. I pull the cart of carts. For I am in love. I'l give hate the shove. Ben and Jerry's Perferably cherry Fully mending my heart would be a dream Since i'm patching it up with cherry ice cream haagen daz is my pleasure ben&jerry's is my poison but thats just my view I won't force it on you Ben and Jerry's fill my tum And hear me whisper yummy yum The bowl is empty, the spoon is heaped And towards my mouth it leaps...YUM! But for each a time. And a time a place. Like this rhyme. We dive and chase. And while we search we find some fun A childish play, our happiness done. Chattering about icecream, how did we get there? When once we wept for fantasy and dreams. Like the mighty river. We start as clouds, we dither. When we start our journy, we change each passing second. Till eventually we are here. We have written and we have trekkened i hope this doesn't mean what i think it does the memorable ending of something that was are we nearing the end of this long-winded poem all i can say is "Noooooooooooooooooooooooo".

well despite the whole bracket thing and some places where the language could be better, i thought it was brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! in forms of plot and thought put into the structure its the best thing i've seen you write so far =D> . Keep going!!! \

Thankyou sooooooooo much, that means alot to me :D. I can't wait to read some more of your stuff!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! By the way in my last post i forgot to mention it, but i wanted to say it had a lovely old style feel. The way that in the "olden days" we didn't embelish stories with fancy words and description just good quality plot line. Not that i don't like embelishing, i just thought you made light of the latter in a really professional way. :mrgreen:

Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head She giggles, she groans She whines, and moans! But soon she falls, asleep on your shoulder As the fire in the grate, begins to smoulder. flames flicker and ashes fall your eyes wonder from ceiling to wall its coming to the end of a very long day you close your eyes, goodnight I say Dreams flicker, reality stays You're watching, you're waiting, counting the days A moment, a second, could change your life, It just takes time to keep your dreams at bay happy king, smiling queen remnents of a long lost dream a hope that fades like a flame in a fire as your imagination begins to tire As you feel, soon the dream will end. As your creativity is about to bend, With a lot of luck, and pixie dust. If one doesnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t work the other must Where dreams, are reality And reality, a dream Where all you need is vitality Just you, any your team Laughing face crying eye Waving hand as we say goodbye With fire in my blood and a song in my heart The dreamers, we're off, for a clean new start. This fantasy realm, of elves and dwarves Take away your breath, making a small pause. This is the way you see my lad, To keep your heart away from the bad. The elves they float on enchanted ground Graceful and beautiful - it's magic they've found Cunning and deceitful though they know what is right, Golden blonde hair, it shines in the light. the dwarves they are short, they are stout, they are bauld. well kept caves, away from the cold. sharp battle axes, and tempers short a trusty friend, and one very well tought. The unicorns, the nympths, of shimmering thought, The knights, the fights, of the royal court, A merchant's bargain sold at last resort, Every colour, every shape,our imagination sought. But, as adults we all know, its only our thoughts keeping them their, whilst our dear children, stop and then stare. They are to be children, in this humble land. What is better, they get to play in the sand. The waves rise. Like the sun. Across the horizen. The fiend stares across. Humbug. His eyes despisen. Bah. No one notices. This time for enjoyment, will not wilt. As they play. The way childern do. You pull up the quilt. He starts to hunger, forever more. his bin, with only an apple core. His stomach growls, as he waits for his pray and he pokes at his fireplace, made of clay. A snap. A crack. An animal in the traps. Soon eaten. Tied in wraps. all the while, innocents play on the beach. whilst the daemon prepares his leech. he plans and schemes to murder the all, yet, he is near his downfall. a battle begins on a blanket of snow purity, virtue and innocence go to fight for the freedom of a long lost soul whilst the winds of change take their tole As time moves on. So must we all. Death glance upon. Like statues, tall. We get closer to it. Each passing breath. Advancing until. There is nothing left. death, something we can't attempt to deny death, something we'll never defy somehow closer to our hearts than life oh how human minds are consumed by strife Life of pure. Life of dark. Life of a kind, found in a park. Love keeps it warm. Hate keeps it torn. So when your mum wants a hug When your baby sister's scared of the bugs, Or even when your tore your dad's favourite rug I hope you can only find... love. That love of bold. The hate of cold. Spread the love. Like a fire doth. 'I love you,' are words we hear Alot, and to my heart is near, The warmth when you hold me tight in your arms, I'm safe, I'm glad, I'm away from all harm Then again, you pull away. As our live, does being to fray. A shout here. A shout there. And suddenly our love lies thread-bare. but deep down, we still care, and when we see them, we stop and stare. they have moved on, breaking your heart. leaving you in despair You opened your heart. To love and care. Chilled winds whip. Though this once safe lair. Like a sword. It dashes you to pieces. While he runs free. Free to keep its leases. Yet you still walk on. In this world of hate Brittle Piece of Bone. All alone. Trying to Find. Never Know Love drives you on. Hollow though And it continues on. Worse than any blow I live this heart of hearts. I pull the cart of carts. For I am in love. I'l give hate the shove. Ben and Jerry's Perferably cherry Fully mending my heart would be a dream Since i'm patching it up with cherry ice cream haagen daz is my pleasure ben&jerry's is my poison but thats just my view I won't force it on you ______________________ sorry i just read through the last verse and it sounds somewhat as though its aimed at someone specific. Its not i just thought it all went kinda well together. :mrgreen:

tee hee heee Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head She giggles, she groans She whines, and moans! But soon she falls, asleep on your shoulder As the fire in the grate, begins to smoulder. flames flicker and ashes fall your eyes wonder from ceiling to wall its coming to the end of a very long day you close your eyes, goodnight I say Dreams flicker, reality stays You're watching, you're waiting, counting the days A moment, a second, could change your life, It just takes time to keep your dreams at bay happy king, smiling queen remnents of a long lost dream a hope that fades like a flame in a fire as your imagination begins to tire As you feel, soon the dream will end. As your creativity is about to bend, With a lot of luck, and pixie dust. If one doesnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t work the other must Where dreams, are reality And reality, a dream Where all you need is vitality Just you, any your team Laughing face crying eye Waving hand as we say goodbye With fire in my blood and a song in my heart The dreamers, we're off, for a clean new start. This fantasy realm, of elves and dwarves Take away your breath, making a small pause. This is the way you see my lad, To keep your heart away from the bad. The elves they float on enchanted ground Graceful and beautiful - it's magic they've found Cunning and deceitful though they know what is right, Golden blonde hair, it shines in the light. the dwarves they are short, they are stout, they are bauld. well kept caves, away from the cold. sharp battle axes, and tempers short a trusty friend, and one very well tought. The unicorns, the nympths, of shimmering thought, The knights, the fights, of the royal court, A merchant's bargain sold at last resort, Every colour, every shape,our imagination sought. But, as adults we all know, its only our thoughts keeping them their, whilst our dear children, stop and then stare. They are to be children, in this humble land. What is better, they get to play in the sand. The waves rise. Like the sun. Across the horizen. The fiend stares across. Humbug. His eyes despisen. Bah. No one notices. This time for enjoyment, will not wilt. As they play. The way childern do. You pull up the quilt. He starts to hunger, forever more. his bin, with only an apple core. His stomach growls, as he waits for his pray and he pokes at his fireplace, made of clay. A snap. A crack. An animal in the traps. Soon eaten. Tied in wraps. all the while, innocents play on the beach. whilst the daemon prepares his leech. he plans and schemes to murder the all, yet, he is near his downfall. a battle begins on a blanket of snow purity, virtue and innocence go to fight for the freedom of a long lost soul whilst the winds of change take their tole As time moves on. So must we all. Death glance upon. Like statues, tall. We get closer to it. Each passing breath. Advancing until. There is nothign left. death, something we can't attempt to deny death, something we'll never defy somehow closer to our hearts than life oh how human minds are consumed by strife

It was good, nicely told in a way appropriate to the era it's set in. Very nice. Perhaps little more description if you were writing it in a romantic way. But since it was told by a drunk man perhaps not ?? #-o :D :D :D do some moooore!!!!!!

I'll drink to that, even though i know who i'd agree with.... Anyways now for literature! Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head She giggles, she groans She whines, and moans! But soon she falls, asleep on your shoulder As the fire in the grate, begins to smoulder. flames flicker and ashes fall your eyes wonder from ceiling to wall its coming to the end of a very long day you close your eyes, goodnight I say Dreams flicker, reality stays You're watching, you're waiting, counting the days A moment, a second, could change your life, It just takes time to keep your dreams at bay happy king, smiling queen remnents of a long lost dream a hope that fades like a flame in a fire as your imagination begins to tire As you feel, soon the dream will end. As your creativity is about to bend, With a lot of luck, and pixie dust. If one doesnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t work the other must Where dreams, are reality And reality, a dream Where all you need is vitality Just you, any your team Laughing face crying eye Waving hand as we say goodbye With fire in my blood and a song in my heart The dreamers, we're off, for a clean new start. This fantasy realm, of elves and dwarves Take away your breath, making a small pause. This is the way you see my lad, To keep your heart away from the bad. The elves they float on enchanted ground Graceful and beautiful - it's magic they've found Cunning and deceitful though they know what is right, Golden blonde hair, it shines in the light. the dwarves they are short, they are stout, they are bauld. well kept caves, away from the cold. sharp battle axes, and tempers short a trusty friend, and one very well tought. The unicorns, the nympths, of shimmering thought, The knights, the fights, of the royal court, A merchant's bargain sold at last resort, Every colour, every shape,our imagination sought. But, as adults we all know, its only our thoughts keeping them their, whilst our dear children, stop and then stare. They are to be children, in this humble land. What is better, they get to play in the sand. The waves rise. Like the sun. Across the horizen. The fiend stares across. Humbug. His eyes despisen. Bah. No one notices. This time for enjoyment, will not wilt. As they play. The way childern do. You pull up the quilt. He starts to hunger, forever more. his bin, with only an apple core. His stomach growls, as he waits for his pray and he pokes at his fireplace, made of clay. A snap. A crack. An animal in the traps. Soon eaten. Tied in wraps. all the while, innocents play on the beach. whilst the daemon prepares his leech. he plans and schemes to murder the all, yet, he is near his downfall. a battle begins on a blanket of snow purity, virtue and innocence go to fight for the freedom of a long lost soul whilst the winds of change take their tole bit random i know but hey :

again beautiful. There are alot of people who are great at good verse =D> ie: rhyming and rythm and description on this site. I never seem to be able to teal the two together.

Smiling kid, fluttering tree. Waving flower, buzzing bee. Delight in nature. All around. Doesn't take much. To be able. To see. Crashing waterfall. Soaring bird. Floating lily. Magic word. Powerful feeling. Connect us two. What emotions, are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain. Sitting here. Watching the gentle moon wane. Sitting here. Watching the sun say goodnight. Sitting here. Watching the world without light. Take out the packet. The happiness. In twisted plastic. Credit card forward. do the cutting. I'm spastic. Desperate escape. That hyper manic state. Tube up the note. And take the bait. Why bother? With the long wait. You'll never feel alone. Again. Mate. Yeah. Never alone. With the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment. You're trying to find, it's gone forever. Now you've taken the short cut. You may be dying inside. But it's a chance. To unwind... And now. Under the stars. I sleep. Whilst the dying moon, does weep. My phone credit. it's running low. So to top it up, I go! A knock on the door. Followed by a creak. Its your little sister. Come for a peek. Invite her in. To your soft, warm bed. Then tuck the covers. Round the sleepy head. She giggles. She groans. She whines. And she moans! But soon she falls. Asleep on your shoulder. As the fire in the grate. Begins to smoulder. Flames flicker. Ashes fall. Your eyes wonder. From ceiling to wall. Its coming to the end. Of a very long day. You close your eyes. Goodnight. I say. You drift off now. A boat turned free. To drift on. This yellow-green sea. A castle awaits. A charming prince. Lean forwards. As his crown glints. With a horse. The prince does ride. As of this. The evil does hide. A charming place. It's light gleam. But. Now you know. It's a fantasy. Dream. And so your tears tingle with sweet lies. You take a chance. Open your eyes. Just for a glance. Dreams flicker. Reality stays. You're watching. You're waiting. Counting the days. A moment. A second. Could change your life. It just takes time. To keep your dreams. At bay. A hawk. Sores overhead. An eye. In the sky. Watching over the bed. A mole. In the ground. Like love. And dreams. Flows down. happy king, smiling queen remnents of a long lost dream a hope that fades like a flame in a fire as your imagination begins to tire

OMG :mrgreen: :mrgreen: i don't know wheither to burst into tears or do a very long and embarrasing aaww, but thats not appropriate because these are to mood enhancingly romantic and intensely felt. soooooooooo beautiful, SOOOOOOOOOOO beautiful. :D

Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature, all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head She giggles, she groans She whines, and moans! But soon she falls, asleep on your shoulder As the fire in the grate, begins to smoulder. flames flicker and ashes fall your eyes wonder from ceiling to wall its coming to the end of a very long day you close your eyes, goodnight I say

i thought that was greatt it needs editing in some places but other than that i loved it. 8-) It made me laugh. :D

really great sooooooooo far. I hope i can match up to the mastership of the previous poets. Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature, all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head as you should instead of turning her away!!!!!!!!!!!! sorry my contribution is a little strange.

this is soooo beautiful what verse train?

Byeee!

the mothers day bit is lovely i will make a point to mention that. Also lambs i think

nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I like it !!!!!!!!!![/size] :