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m0nkeym0j030

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  1. Keep in mind I'm only twelve, and since my story is love based, it might not be as good as other more experienced people. Define Love. Its the greatest feeling in the world once you find it. But its also capable of being the deadliest disease if you cant hold on to it. A Criminal Called Love is a novel about two mens struggle through loves toughest obstacles. They must fight through jealousy, pain, and endure countless, gut wrenching hardships. That is whats going on the back of the book, when I finish it. Intro: Love is an amazing thing. It can be your best friend, or your mortal nemesis. James and Luis are both young boys, but love came to them. Luis, a young mexican boy, naive to love, going after every girl he sees. Little did he know that the girl of his dreams would come by. That girl was occupied by one of his best friends, an asian named Darius. Once they started talking, they immediately became best friends, and Luis would eventually fall for her. Worried that she didn't feel the same way, he did not show Megan his true colors. That part is what I wrote about my friend, he's going to add more since I don't know alot about his love life. James, more experienced than Luis with love, has endured many painful bumps in the road. He found a girl that he thought was his everything. Her name was Emma. He was so happy with her, but was always too shy to say "I love you." So he would write giant myspace messages to her explaining how much he loved her. A huge bump was about to come along the way. James logged onto AIM. His good friend Jerry invited him to a chatroom. He met people he saw at school, but never talked to due to his shyness. A girl named Lexi entered the room. After talking to her for at least 7 hours over AIM, he knew that he loved her. Lexi was Emma's best friend. Lexi brought out a side of James noone else knew. he was no longer shy, he was never afraid to show who he really is, and what has been dying to get out. Lexi made him want to be a better man. Lexi taught him what love is. After a harsh break up with Emma, Lexi and James became friends with "benefits." He was always so shy to kiss her, but on a sunny school day on March 27, he finally leaned in to kiss her, by the front gate at school, he had the guts to lean in, and as their lips locked, a sense of magic erupted between the two. James blushed, as did Lexi. She left to go home, and James had the biggest smile on his face, he was TRULY happy. Since this is based on a true story, the reason this part is longer is cause It's about me. Not completely finished, as you can tell. Just started today. I'm new to this whole story-writing thng, so give me critiques and tips please.
  2. Punched by Chuck Norris. Or like in a commercial I saw, You have had extreme pain for months, so you go to an acupuncurist. The operation takes place in a room 50 stories high. He inserts 75-100 needles in you. Turns out, theres a fire, the acupuncurist jumps out the window. He dies. The only way out is to jump out and land on a trampoline sort of thing that firemen use to save people. Ouch.
  3. Update: This is what I look like when I wear a beanie. Does it look nice? [hide=][/hide]
  4. I wanna hear what the tip.it community says, just in case these hairstyles are "out of whack." :P
  5. Aye, I'm James. Going into 8th grade. I kinda want a "skater" type of hair so, got any reccomendations? Here is my current hair. [hide=][/hide] Hairstyles that I like. [hide=][/hide] [hide=][/hide] Preferably nothing that shows my forehead. Too many pimples. :l Thanks in advanced . <3
  6. Don't you think Mayweather is past his prime? Whilst Pacquiao is in his golden years? Pacquiao > Mayweather. Pacquiaos record : 48 wins, 3 draws, two losses. 36 KO's (Two losses came when he was new to boxing) Mayweather : 39 wins, 0 draws, 0 losses. 25 kos. (Keep in mind Mayweather fights the overrated people, so he can beat them easily and get money.) Pacquiao wins. Period.
  7. Boxing. Not kickboxing, not some show, not wrestling, nor baseball, or any other sport. Boxing. <3
  8. I personally think this will be a pretty close fight. Mayweather is a defensive GURU. Pacquiao will come in, Mayweather will just sneak out of the way and throw counters. Although Mayweathers defense is amazing, i was watching the De La Hoya vs Mayweather video today, and I saw points where Pac-man could easily throw some blistering fists into Mayweather. I personally think that Pacquiao will prevail in the end, because Mayweather has never faced anyone similar to Pac-man, and Mayweather usually just fights people that he knows he can beat. It's going to be a unique fight. Speed vs speed + Offence vs defence. Who do you think will win? Pacquiao? Mayweather? Or will it not happen? :o
  9. Nope. I'm too cool. But I do wear a helmet in dodgeball... PE teacher makes us lololololololgasm.
  10. Why would I not? How else can I get him to stop touching her? I've tried talking.. But it doesn't work.
  11. 1 week ago. These days, hes all up touching her booty and chest and stuff.. She's resisting.. She apologized for what happened. I'm still going out with her. I still want to kick his [wagon] though.
  12. Listen to Over and Over by Three Days Grace... Thats how i feel Dx
  13. I turn 13 in august (x Farthest I've gone with this girl is uhh.. second base. Closest ive gone to hitting this guy? PE, playing baseball. Hit him really hard. "Oops."
  14. (before wildy taken away and trade limit) I put limestone in a furnace. lost 3m. :wall: :wall: :wall: :wall:
  15. My names James. Welcome to my crisis. I'm twelve years old. Dating a girl named Lexi. I REALLY like her, and I hope its gonna turn out to be love. But this 8th grader, (im in 7th) was all over her, kissed her, and she kissed back. Now, whenever I see this guy, my fists get clenched so tight that my knuckles turn white. I'm scared that whenever I see him outside of school, I'm going to jump him. (Chances are I will destroy his butt, 2 years of boxing and brown belt in karate ftw). But if I do, what if Lexi doesnt like me anymore? I REALLY want to do some damage to this guy. How can I without her knowing?
  16. 12 years old, 105 pounds. I bench 80 ._____. I squat 120.. Weak? ._.
  17. I think my problem in math is that I easily get distracted. Also, I SUCK at organazation, I do all my homework, but they get lost in my bag. And homework is 50% of my grade, and I've only turned in 25% of it due to my messy backpack. I get F's on my tests because of my easily distracted-ness lol, and i lose my notes so i cant study.
  18. Mine is 8:36 - 3:10 o_o on Wendsdays its 8:36 - 12:36.
  19. 104% because I play football for my school, and my teacher loves me and I get A+'s on all my Physical Fitness Testing (Not bragging ._.) 103% in tech well, because its the easiest class we've only had 1 assignment which was worth 65 points and i got extra credit cus mine was so good. (it was a music video)
  20. Lol, I used to be smart.. My grades in science and math for the last three semesters were; 1st semester: Math = 79% Science : 81% 2nd: Math 74% Science: 73 3rd: Math 71% Science 69. So what's responsible for the grade dip? I found a game called Maplestory. I just deleted it today. From now on I'm going to do my work And finish the year as strong as possible(x Edit: Im pretty sure ill get my Science grade up to at least a 65.
  21. Lol, I used to be smart.. My grades in science and math for the last three semesters were; 1st semester: Math = 79% Science : 81% 2nd: Math 74% Science: 73 3rd: Math 71% Science 69.
  22. ... So. Im in 7th grade.. My grades are; History : C+ (77%) Math: F (36.54) English: B- (82%) PE: A+ (104.21%) Tech: A+ (103%) Science: F (58%) Im scared. ._. Will i be held back?
  23. Okay so, whenever i move my cursor to the side of the screen, like, near the scroll bar, the display slides over and i see a black screen? It doesnt take up the whole screen, just about 1/8 of it. For example, as i am typing this, the smilies are to the left, when i put my cursor to the right and i see theblack screen, i only see this face \ , and the one below it, and the ones to the right of it. Help? :x
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