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Don't remind him <_<

The Death of You and Me - Noel Gallagher

I'd love to, but my alarm clock wasn't working, so I had to use the alarm clock on my telephone. Airplane mode works well.

Second hand smoke. Oh, and it smells disgusting. Don't get me wrong, I don't complain about it openly and obnoxiously. But it is rather annoying to walk through someone's smoke. And the damage it causes to them. I know people who have died from smoking related illnesses without evening smoking one [bleep].

Until it sleeps - Metallica.

It's like when you hide something using hide tags. A line will appear in replace of their post which gives you the option to open it up or not. The thread appears but just the opening post is hidden.

All My Own Stunts - Arctic Monkeys.

Gap in the fence - Enter Shikari

i do this We should be friends. And make a thread far far away. W-Wh-Whatever happened to... I forgot to do that, thanks for reminding me.

Inventive aren't you. I place a bet on #1. 1) I weight 134 pounds 2) Been a member here since January. 3) Multicoloured eyes.

i do this We should be friends. And make a thread far far away.

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No because is mahvel baybee. Now Daigo full parry that with your BIONIC ARM at EVO. Where yo curleh mustache at, Mango Sentinel? Girls People on Facebook that post meaningless things or quotes said by someone else. Yes, back to things that annoy the hell out of you on facebook we go.

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Slang words which make me resort to urban dictionary to have any understanding of what's going on. Can people not merely stick too the proper words <_<

Roccodog, post below, I was merely expressing an opinion, one which I was willing to change as "Friday" to be fair wasn't an exactly good place to start with a music career. However, it's awful so I'll happily leave her be. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AyRDDOpKaLM Brilliant.

Endgame - Rise Against

Finally.

Rebecca Blacks new song. Can she not crawl back under a rock and leave everybody in peace? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2OxWD85Ngz4 For all of those who haven't had the delight of hearing it.

My thoughts on the matter. I only covered the first 3 chapters as I began to feel that the same problems were cropping up. Overall: It's not a bad story but could be far better. You need to try and break the monotonous mode of story telling you adopt. It will quickly become a bore for the reader. Try to vary sentence structure. You seem to stick to basic sentences and don’t expand any further. Your writing and vocabulary is basic at best; whether this is due to your age or lack of literary experience I’m not sure but try to expand it. Put the commas down and leave them alone for a bit. You seem to have an addiction to them and thus has led me to give up seeing whether you used them correctly every time. Chapter 1: Tim ‘moved’ over not ‘started’ “Screamed” – “Bellowed”/”Roar”/ “Yell” or something of that effect. Screamed suggests fear rather than power. “The woman in the door” – The women standing in the door frame. You don’t stand in a door. Chapter 2: Commas before an and. Doesn’t really make sense Chapter 3: “Incident” – Change to nightmare, incident it was not. Do you know any words for speech apart from said? It’s starting to bore me seeing said everywhere. E.g. exclaimed, pronounced, stated, ask and questioned all work perfectly well, just change sentence structure up to fit them in correctly. “commor. then teleport” remove full stop

NJ Legion Iced Tea - ADTR

And how efficiency is the "pro" way to play RS.

Some of the people, all of the time - All That Remains

What kind of OT'er are you? Kidding of course, fellow OT'ers. If I wanted a pointless argument the general discussion board has plenty on offer.

Numb - Linkin Park