Merry

COuld someone write something for me? Like do something so my character won't be included for a while, I might not write and i don't want my character dying on me without my knowledge or anything...

I'm not much into "Rap" because like you said most are full of stuff about being the biggest ganster and doing the most stuff and I really don't relate. I liked yours because it had a message to it. :D I do like some Christian Rap as those have meanings to them and I can sometimes relate. Though not all are that good. Ever Heard of T-bone? He came from a very bad background and he accually used to do a lot of stuff but he's a christian now and he's writing songs that change lives. If you like That type of stuff,he's okay. He can spit them out pretty fast sometimes. :D So yeh...

(seems to me you guys have my character covered for me! LOL! Doing stuff without my knowledge...Oh well!) Benevolent Benevolent, Falcon and Fuuin entered the gates. Benevolent surveyed the area; she then spotted someone who looked familiarÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæShe thought to herself ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬Åis that? No it couldnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t possibly beÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

hehe :lol: I like it. Its got some noob power! lol. Nice bit of humor as well. I enjoyed reading it. And like that you accually rhymed stuff. I'm big for rhyming because then I think it flows nicer. :D Good Job! :wink:

Ok,thanks for your honest advice.

My dear friend I pray you would Embrace your life. I think you should Do your best Be proud of yourself And all your success this is my plea don't hurt yourself because you've lost all your glea YouÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢re my friend If you need me you can depend on me to help you out because I care so just give me a shout people love you people care about what you do So don't you fear

(last poem for now, please give me more comments.) This poem I wrote for my friend a few years back who was extremely depressed... My dear friend I pray you would Embrace your life. I think you should Do your best Be proud of yourself And all your success this is my plea don't hurt yourself because you've lost all your glea YouÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢re my friend If you need me you can depend on me to help you out because I care so just give me a shout people love you people care about what you do So don't you fear

Heres some more, I'll post two in the same post. I feel a presence of someone Someone unlike no other person I canÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t see them I canÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t even touch them But I know theyÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢re there Because the bible says their everywhere And then another... Wild flowers, In a field, Swaying towers, In the breeze, Wild Flowers, Everywhere, Spring showers, Refreshing flowers, BeeÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s a buzzing. Carrying pollen, To and fro, In the field, Happy days, In the field, Different ways, n having fun, All made by God, My heavenly father, Shining brightly, Like golden rod

(heres once again, Another.) A true friend Is hard to find Today right now In this world What is a true friend Is it a friend Whom you can ALWAYS depend A true friend Is hard to find Today right now In this world What is a true friend Is it a friend WhoÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ll always care Who will always comforts you When thereÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s no one else anywhere A true friend Is hard to find Today right now In this world When you give up When you despair. Remember this heÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s everywhere

Thanks for commenting. Also If you'd like I'd suguest clicking the links on the one post. it will direct you to two other poems. I was just to lazy to re-post it. The two linked are two of my favorites.

Benevolent Benevolent lay there asleep oblivious to what was going on around her. Suddenly she awoke with blazing flames surrounding her. With rapid speed she searched the now scorched cradle for her little brother. The only remains of where he had been were a scorched blanket. Where was he? She began to panic, and then she noticed the little girl in the corner on the bed with the baby in her arms, weeping uncontrollably with fear. Benevolent was relieved to see both of them well. She crawled towards the bed and whispered her thanks to the little girl for saving her brothers life and she grasped them both within her arms. Just then a Strong Tall man came rushing through the flames from the direction of the doorway. He lifted up the little girl and held her in his arms. Then he guided all three out the door. When they finally came out of the house they all fell to the ground limp with exhaustion. The man then told Benevolent ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅNo worries girl, I am taking this child to her father. Be at rest for no more harm shall befall her.ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

Hmm... will no one comment about my poetry? :? I would be grateful to anyone who would give me any insight. Thank You! :D

Benevolent Benevolent was seated on a small worn out stool with a wee baby in her arms. The baby was crying uncontrollably as she sat there trying to sooth the baby and quiet it. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅHush little brother, donÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t you cry, Sisters gonna sing you a lullabyÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

Ok, heres one I just did last night. I used paint and Photoshop. Its just a silly one... :lol: Not that good...but hey it was fun to make! :D It accually really sucks quality wise, but I think its funny and was a great Idea...but I'll let you guys determine that for yourselves. :?

The last one was not my creation, but a friend of mine made it for me. Though the general Idea was mine. But thanks for pointing that out. Oh well, It doesn't matter. lol

You could pretend that your good but in accuality be bad and like basically be a spy and tell the bad guys all the secrets and stuff...so make everybody happy by being on the evil team but acting like your good. lol

I'm too lazy to read all the replys as its also getting late...but I just wanted to say... Alot of adults think that just because one teen is bad it means that all teens are. which is just not true. I mean there are teen out there who really do alot of good. I know this one family who has 12 kids and half of them are teenagers. their like the model teenagers. their really nice, and smart, and can do alot of stuff. They clean and cook in the house without complaint. Plus when they had farm animals they'd get up early in the morning to milk and feed and take care of them, without complaining! They don't drink, or take drugs. their a tight knit family. Also these teens are nice to everyone! And I mean everyone! Their so excepting. I do admit there are also teens out there that aren't so good and they do do bad stuff. But what I'm trying to say is i hate it when people naturally assume you take drugs or drink alchohal, just because of what they see and hear on tv or whatever. Also it seems alot of the time it is what your enviroment is. what kind of people your around., that make you tend to do one thing or another.

were you talking about My post or your own? lol. I enjoy Roleplay. Its Fun fun! Also, I think PJB21 is right, we don't need so many people. I'd say we had our 5 good we just need a few evil. :D That way we can start right away.

I hope you enjoy the sig smallboy! :D

Name: Benevolent Gender: Female Age: 17 Side: Good Skills: She May not be fast with a sword but can be quick footed and is good at avoiding blows, she is seldom seen and knows many hiding places, she remains in the darkness beyond human sight. She is kind hearted and showers love to all who need love. Background: Benevolent prefers solitude. She trys to avoid conflict,but when forced can strike an opponent with much force especially to protect those she loves. She is fast footed. Ever since she was child she has been able to outrun any thing and avoid any obstacle. As a young child her father used to be quite ruthless to her and her mother. He would get drunk in the taverns each night and come home and beat her and her mother. she got good at running and hiding from him.One night he came home he drew a sword and striked her mother on the head, He then went to her little brothers basinet and was about to stab him when she reached for her brother, the knife slicing across her arm,she pulled her brother out of her fathers reach and ran. her father was enraged, he began to chase after her, and she ran, ran with all her might. She found a secluded cabin in the woods and there she lived to raise her little brother has her own. She has promised herself to protect her brother from all evil and harm. and to fight for all whom evil men try to hurt. She takes in all and takes care of them. But she has never stopped running from the past, and the thought of this wretched man who took her mothers life. if you are in need and she is able to help you in some way, be sure that she will kindly aid you. However if you are unkind towards others be sure she will fight for those who cannot themselves.

Though I would first like to say...Wrong Location for this type of topic... Second I know this... See them ducks? Them are not ducks! Oh yes they are, See them wings? Well I be, Them are ducks. (takes one to know(understand) one... :wink: )

Sure you can have it. I have the code below it. Go ahead and take it. but please make sure say its by me if you use it as a signature. And I'll see about the border thing. Thanks for your comments. :D

It should say... Oh Bunnys! lol! Hey atleast thats not perverted. or maybe... Oh...My very first Credit card! Time to Max it out! lol... No, but seriously...whatever, it doesn't matter... though I'd suguest refraining from any provocative material.

Ok, heres some sigs I made...Their not very good as their my first few attempts :oops: . I just started on using Photoshop last week and this is all mostly from last week...Alot of them I probably wouldn't be able to do again...LOL. As you can tell I like using "Liquify" :lol: My first one... [url=http://www.imageshack.us][img=http://img201.exs.cx/img201/5023/summerbreezecopy5te.jpg][/url] This is so it can be seen better... This is b/c black is really cool...lol This is my most recent...I've been pretty busy this past week and with spring break coming, I'll be uber busy... :lol: So here's another... Well thats all of them... :roll: If you want one I'd be glad to change the name to whatever you'd like. But really these we're my first ones :oops: ...Maybe with more practice I'll get better. :D

I just wanted to say I think that Xpure4eva and Martinsek55's Poems are really nice. They Accually rhyme which makes it flow better in my opinion. With so many good poets here, I doubt I'll recieve the award money... :oops: Oh well writing the poetry was fun at anyrate... :D Thank you for the competition! :P :twisted: whether or not I win, My peom was still cool! :twisted: [Edit] I thought I'd share this poem/song, if you like it your welcome to take parts from it, I also took out certain parts that seemed not to apply. In the twilight of each day when my heart seems turned away from these daily tasks I do as I try not to cry over you ____________________ (chorus) Your absence is felt as I daily remember of the joys that we shared for my love will last forever ____________________ In the darkness of the night while the moon glistens bright My thoughts would turn towards you and the things we use to do (Chorus) I miss You, I do as I continue through all my days reminders of you in different ways hoping one day to see you once again to show you my love, dear friend...