Merry

I really Liked this Poem especially. it flows when spoken by the tounge in melodious tones that I could not help but appreciate it. And Hope is a wonderful Subject. Often Used in poetry but not often portrayed significantly. I enjoyed both poems and I look forward to future creative writings by you. :D

Thank You again for liking my work. Especially this one as it has tender memorys to me.

This Poem/Song is in memory of my Grandmother. She lived with us for 2-3 years and I was the one who was expected to take care of her. She was my best friend and we did everything together. last fall my aunt came and took her away from us(against her will). I was so sad, and I had to find some way of venue for my heartbrokeness. I am not one to talk but rather to write so no one knew exacly how I felt for the longest time. A few weeks ago we received news of my grandmothers death. It was a shock because when she went away she was healthy(I won't get into that...) I was able to then Share with my mom what had been on my heart through those months...This Poem/Song was written shortly after my Aunt took her away from us... In the twilight of each day when my heart seems turned away from these daily tasks I do as I try not to cry over you ____________________ (chorus) Your absence is felt as I daily remember of the joys that we shared for my love will last forever ____________________ In the darkness of the night while the moon glistens bright My thoughts would turn towards you and the things we use to do (Chorus) The dawning of each day reminds me of the way you would rise early every day and start to reading right away (Chorus) I miss You, I do as I continue through all my days reminders of you in different ways hoping one day to see you once again to show you my love, dear friend...

I don't quite detest it, I can stand it...If I am forced at gunpoint to listen to it! But I prefer Rock. I Think it would be nice to see one. So when your laziness subsides know that atleast one person would appreciate a glimpse of your creative writing.

I appreciate your appreciation for my poetry. I did not try to make it sound like a rap song. it just seemed to come out that way I guess(even though I don't even listen to rap, I prefer rock). Thank you for saying its different. I like being different and I wouldn't change it for anything.Sometimes Poeple's Poetry seems so *for lack of better word* Generic. Most of the time my poetry or writing in general Just comes out without much thought of where it's headed. haha! This was I think the most fun I had with a poem.

I'm not the kind of girl who walks around in malls wearing trendy clothes like those manikin dolls I'm not a flirt I don't play that game don't wear a mini skirt (I think that's lame!) I'm not that kind of girl and their "trendy" clothes make me want to hurl I'm not the type that goes blah blah blah On a cell phone or who spends money at a spa Their so ditzy, their minds been blown I'm not in their Clique I'm all my own I'm not that kind of chick I like my way its all my own I'd never change it any day let them laugh at the way I dress I'd rather be laughed at then get into that mess!