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sorry i havent been talking for a while. i am working on a new part for falcon. as for Eagle, well, you'll have to see.........

ok then. why may you not be posting for a while?

kool. i like it its good.

yer do scammers!

Eagle. Eagle was angry, Annoyed, frustrated. She stormed out the palace and glanced at her stone. In side was the picture of her brother with his friend he was fighting a man. She also noticed the girl wasnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t there. It didnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t matter to her. She hadnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t killed her parents or burned down her house. She teleported to them in a cast of fire ice. When she hit the pub the ice burned the ground and crazy flame like patterns crept up the wall in the ice. She looked around for her brother. Where was he? The pub was a mess and people were running, others had already fled. A smash was heard on her back, she didnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t feel anything. She turned around to see what happened. It was her brother and his friend. He was holding his usual weapon. The curved blade sliced at her in a vicious way. She defended with her staff. The short sword hit so hard she dropped her staff. She went to grab it while wondering why her brother was so strong. The handle of her brotherÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s weapon smashed into her head. She felt faint. Darkness crept on her but she teleported before she passed out. She awoke. She could taste vomit in her mouth. She could only see darkness to start with, then her eyes cleared. She looked around. Vomit poured out her mouth. She blacked out again. She woke up. The sun was high about mid-day. How did her brother become so strong? How did he beat her? For she had never passed out before. She tucked into some food and drink. After her meal she reached for her black stone to see where she could destroy her brother next. She reached in her bag. It was strange the stone was rough on both sides. A flashback passed through her mind. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¹ÃâCrack!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ no pain. Just a smash. The initial hit. Her stone in her bag. She stared at her stone it was cracked and useless. She felt weakened as if it was her power. She wept, she felt weak. ThatÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s why her brother was so strong. The darkness surrounded her. Shadows crept up on her. They took her silently to their master.

i supose it will do. but why does everyone want benevolent out the way? just wondering. yer and we missed about 6 months of plot...

nice and long ay? =P also can u change the topic title. we dont need them any more.

look. i already have two characters. i cant manage a third! lol. just read the story and rewright it, or say get lost and let sum1 else do the persons character and just work with your own.

man! read the other replies! in eagles one she attacked iron claw, while the others (benevolint, falcon, and funin) excaped! and iron claw and the others aren't friends, far from it! read the damn story!

no i have never read it and yes its rubbish. well done.

ok well you just messed that up! also try doing it in word then spell checking it. it makes it easier to read. use proper engilish eg. enough not enuf and use paragraphs and punctuation properly. just my opinion.

ok this will be short. Eagle. she had teleported after her brother and was in varok square. after a brife walk she was in the cold yet lively palace. she turned around the coridors at a hurried pace and entered the libary. there was her brother and his friend. but, wait a minuet! the guy she destroyed earlier, in full rune! wouldn't he die? she blasted him with the same ice blast she used on the theifs and that sent him flying across the room into a bookshelf. it fell over and books were scattered everywhere. she searched around for the other. where were they? ugh! they cad excaped and taken the book with them! she slowly ploded off trying to think of a way to kill them for good!

i like that its funny keep it up!

Cool, the stories really moving. I know it could be alot to ask but would people mind wrighting their stories in word or another word processor then paste then here to avoid spelling or grammar mistakes. thank you. any way my turn now... Eagle. The night grew around her. A terrifying breeze flowed around her cape and robe. If it was slightly less windy a fire could have been lit but whenever she made one the wind just blew it out. She was frustrated, not just about the fire but also her brother. If only she hadnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t dropped the maceÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ She went to sleep in a fresh coat of wolf fur. The only down side was the neck was burned and it has no head. The cold wind hushed her to sleep. She awoke tired. Her body was battered and some of her possessions were missing. She summoned a new staff exactly the same as the first and put it to the test on a summoned greater demon. She searched for her seeing stone. Thankfully the people hadnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t taken it. She starred in. she gazed at a picture of 3 young men dancing about holding that staff that she recognised. They also had some more of her things. The recognised the place and teleported there. They stood in front of her. Her staff was helm high above their heads, before it dropped. It hit the ground and the orb was slightly smashed, it wouldnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t work again. The men all drew swords two were mith the final was addy. The boys launched them selfÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s at her, now recovered from their original shock. Their swords hit air. They fell over with a bump. They looked around. She had gone. A huge detonation of ice slammed into their backs. Two went flying, the other was pinned to the ground, frozen to death. The ice had turned red in places. The blood splattering had been frozen and perfectly preserved. One of the men was unconscious. The other was rolling in the dirt and dusty mud. His back had been torn off him. His mussels could be viewed. Blood seeped from the injury. The bone was chipped, and ice was covering it in places. It had hit like shards of metal, they were ripped and mangled, still with shards wedged into their arms legs and backs. The one who was pinned had, what looked like, been hit in the neck by a sharp piece that had gone right through and his legs were minced. They could hardly be called legs. Eagle slowly glided down. He staff smashed into the one rolling about, he just gave up and died. She slid over to the unconscious one. A rain of fire turned him to ashes. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

ha ha ha! i like it. more for the humor than the poem :?. well beware of the lv 50's! we have mini guns! muhahahahaha!

wow. you wright alot :o. how long does it take to wright a chapter? i would read but i dnt have enough time =(

but its not just saying its all about who can rap best its also about the discriminatio in the world that shouldnt be there, and that we should all just get along. (correct me if im wrong its just thats what i saw)

(ok this is only gonna be short...) Falcon. after the harsh incounter falcon had teleported to the safest place, the forest. he was walking along the cool rural area suranded by lush trees and bright green bushes. he passed three people. a man, a girl and a little boy. the man was standing and talking to the girl. Falcon started to eves-drop on them. "my quest is to destroy the black knights and avenge my village" the man started. " what has this got to do with me?" the girl replyed. "well, i was wondering if you could help me..." he answered. Falcon stepped out. "that sound like a worthy cause" he stated in his deep, mistic voice. he had oviously shoked them since they jumped and then looked at him as if he was from another planet. mind you, he was caked in dryed blood from the fight and bruses littered his body. "um, well, who are you?" the man asked. "my name is Falcon, thats all you need to know" Falcon replyed. this time the girl started up. "look i dont know who you are, but your scaring my brother." "i am sorry to startle you." Falcon lent over the little boy. the boy looked scared, then it laughed. the girl looked up to see what he was laughing at only to see Falcon pull a funny face. "well, i dont mind. will both of you join me?" the man inquired. "yes." Falcon answered. "um, im not sure." the girl said. "well my name's funnin" the man said. "im glad to have met you" Falcon said. "i did save you and your brother from a blazing fire." funnin said to the girl. "i supose i do owe you..." the girl was thinking. "ok, my name's benevolent." the girl said. "looks like a team" funnin joined in. "ok" both Falcon and benevolent said at the same time. and so an alliance was formed. one to last a long time...

kool. is it gonna be realllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllly long then? or a shorter one? or what?

yes. their minds expand so much they explode and everyone dies.

That was good. I like your character theyÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢re nice lol. Eagle. After several days waiting for her wolf to return with proof her bother was dead, she gave up on it. Either the wolf was dead or it had got lost, both was it had failed. She decided to track him down her self. After summoning two skeletons to help her when ever in need, she set off from the black castle to hunt him down. The fire glistened in her black eyes, with flames flickering to a deadly tune. She had settled down for the night and was cooking some beef for her dinner. The skeletons melted into the dust since they were not required. Once it was done she tucked in to the ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¹ÃâmealÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ and finished it off with a cup of fresh milk (from a so convenient nearby cow ;-) ) afterwards she fell asleep. She need not worry about any animals attacking her since she could control almost any of them. She still summoned a lesser demon to watch for any other threats. The morning passed quickly. The sun glinted off the lush green leaves of the brown forest. Eagle stormed along riding a black unicorn. With a peachy bone coloured single horn and black streamline sculpture it was, in her eyes, the most beautiful of all the animals. The beast twisted to a stop. A person wearing full runite armour had stepped out from the clearing. He swivelled round hearing the unicorn and bellowed in a deep voice, ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

ok. wow! alot of reading, uh, yer. i like it and its really good! whens the next chapter coming out :P just wondering, 1) are you mad?! 2) do you have alot of spare time? 3) are you sure your not mad? lol

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i like it and read it but its your choice. but theres no need to use up your effort just for me.