The horizontal lines are not straight. You see the road? It's not straight and that's not very good for the composition in my opinion, if it was unaviodable, leave it out. EDIT: What what was the film speed, I think I see a bit of grain in the second one? I like film grain though, it tends to add mood unlike digital noise. I used Kodak T-Max ISO 400 Speed, and as for the composition, probably the way I developed, because when I took the shot, my Tripod has a water level on it and it was sitting straight. Probably just recomposing it in the dark room would help.