Mwr Posted November 28, 2004 Share Posted November 28, 2004 my 3rd pixel.. this one is a sig :o i have no idea if i have improved btw the shading is rubbish in this.. :oops: i tryed doing shades... didnt go out to well i think. but i still want cc on them :) feel free to flame and say: "Wow you suck and i owned badly when i began" :lol: anywayz, steal it flame it tourcher it edit it whatever :P EDIT:neck changed + border. btw for progress refrence here are my other "Works" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Templar Posted November 28, 2004 Share Posted November 28, 2004 It's pretty good and the shading is good! Still i think you need to work on the character some more and maybe add some details inside or im not sure! Your doing really well for the third pixel! 7 1/2 /10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pureleader18 Posted November 28, 2004 Share Posted November 28, 2004 its really nice. keep up the good work :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toad Posted November 28, 2004 Share Posted November 28, 2004 getting better the dots on the snow would look better grey though :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mwr Posted November 28, 2004 Author Share Posted November 28, 2004 its really nice. keep up the good work :lol: were u being sarcastic? if not thx ^_^ and o.k... gray dots gotcha :) post it soon.. just drawing a sword =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord-Gabriel Posted November 28, 2004 Share Posted November 28, 2004 nice these are pretyy good..especially for firsts. PS: dont freely say "steal it" dont let people take your sigs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pureleader18 Posted November 28, 2004 Share Posted November 28, 2004 its really nice. keep up the good work :lol: were u being sarcastic? if not thx ^_^ and o.k... gray dots gotcha :) post it soon.. just drawing a sword =] no i wasnt being sacastic, i do like them :o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J_Rod_The_Ti Posted November 28, 2004 Share Posted November 28, 2004 Nice your gettin way better! I like this one alot. Just a tip though try to proportion your characters better because the dudes hips are HUGE. Other than that I love it. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mwr Posted November 28, 2004 Author Share Posted November 28, 2004 nice these are pretyy good..especially for firsts. PS: dont freely say "steal it" dont let people take your sigs when they get better ill start caring about them =] thanks for the comment anyway heres the "Fixed" version drag ammy added.. i tryed to make it face to the position the char is, i hope it worked and those grey dots... done ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mwr Posted November 28, 2004 Author Share Posted November 28, 2004 its really nice. keep up the good work :lol: were u being sarcastic? if not thx ^_^ and o.k... gray dots gotcha :) post it soon.. just drawing a sword =] no i wasnt being sacastic, i do like them :o cool 8) im still waiting for somebody to say a bad comment about the screwd up shades =\ all good comments so far ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord-Gabriel Posted November 28, 2004 Share Posted November 28, 2004 the ammy makes his body look all "twisted" in the new version...fix the ammy or remove it. Nice on the snow. Do you mind if I take this and try to add some texture to the snow? I will post it here and take no credit for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mwr Posted November 28, 2004 Author Share Posted November 28, 2004 the ammy makes his body look all "twisted" in the new version...fix the ammy or remove it. Nice on the snow. Do you mind if I take this and try to add some texture to the snow? I will post it here and take no credit for it. sure dude if you want you can fix the ammy you way you think it should be to ^_^ ive been waiting for somebody to want to touch it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neanderslave Posted November 28, 2004 Share Posted November 28, 2004 dude you have got way better as you saw on my post im a pixel sigger aswell but i have a completley different style but i prefer yours 8/10 nice shading on the armour aswell!! Neanderslave Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dark_ice Posted November 28, 2004 Share Posted November 28, 2004 the guy is shaded ok...everything else is cruddy...the head on the stick shouldnt be so round....make your guy more proportioned.....make the clouds more..cloudy..and try to fill up the sig more...maybe some rocks and some grass coming out through the snow...maybe a wolf sneakin up behind the guy..etc...not bad tho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mwr Posted November 28, 2004 Author Share Posted November 28, 2004 dude you have got way better as you saw on my post im a pixel sigger aswell but i have a completley different style but i prefer yours 8/10 nice shading on the armour aswell!! Neanderslave thx m8 and your style is nice to and i can see your improving quickly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N4K Posted November 28, 2004 Share Posted November 28, 2004 I love the guy, Make the clouds in different shades of grey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mwr Posted November 28, 2004 Author Share Posted November 28, 2004 the guy is shaded ok...everything else is cruddy...the head on the stick shouldnt be so round....make your guy more proportioned.....make the clouds more..cloudy..and try to fill up the sig more...maybe some rocks and some grass coming out through the snow...maybe a wolf sneakin up behind the guy..etc...not bad tho ill try and apply some of these things, thanks mate and as in "make the clouds more..cloudy" would like putting round circles in them and gray lines around those circles do? ill show u in a sec what i mean Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Traxion Posted November 28, 2004 Share Posted November 28, 2004 not bad, good shading technique. does transfer in as well as the best peeps but very good. you just need to work on the detailing of the chars and you'd be good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord-Gabriel Posted November 28, 2004 Share Posted November 28, 2004 Here: I didn't do anything to the sky cause I got lazy. Tell me what you think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mwr Posted November 28, 2004 Author Share Posted November 28, 2004 Here: I didn't do anything to the sky cause I got lazy. Tell me what you think. omg dude thats amazing... better put sample on it ^^ now its worth like 1k gp without ur work 100 gp... ^^ thx mate.. ill add the things i was told to now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mwr Posted November 28, 2004 Author Share Posted November 28, 2004 changed the helm on stick shape... made a final resting place for the warriors son (the helm was ment to be the sons when he gets to the age of 13 :cry: ). i tryed doing a wolf... i didnt like it then i tryed changing it and it became a rabbit and a wolf hybrid, a wabbit ^^ (if anybody remembers elmer fud and his weird accent) i think im goona open a free pixy shop for the practice =] i doubt anybody would want me to make them but we'll see =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jabraulter Posted November 28, 2004 Share Posted November 28, 2004 i think the shading is descent. but on your next one, try making the shading follow the flow of the armor. dont make it straight up and down. make it wavy lines that curve at the bottom edgfes of the armor. but besides that, its very good for your 3rd sig. especially the armor, whic can be very difficult to draw beginning....for me at least Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mwr Posted November 28, 2004 Author Share Posted November 28, 2004 i think the shading is descent. but on your next one, try making the shading follow the flow of the armor. dont make it straight up and down. make it wavy lines that curve at the bottom edgfes of the armor. but besides that, its very good for your 3rd sig. especially the armor, whic can be very difficult to draw beginning....for me at least thx and btw part of the char is shaded like that.. go into paint and check it out :D but i usually do that wave shading only if its in a diagnal position.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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