Made with: Paint

 

 

 

Made for: Blueish5

 

 

 

Made in: Holland

 

 

 

Made : Yes

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

C/C please, rate if you want.

placement of the moon in my opinion = terrible, theres to much going on, on that side of the image, put it much further to the right.

The guys shadow just looks like a single colored block. Try to add some shading to it and continue the patern of the ground underneath it jsut darker. But ya like LP said, move the moon and possibly move it a bit lower too, to cast longer shadows which I feel would fit the piece better.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ther background kinda needs work too. The mountains seem to pop up and disapear quikly, maybe make it build up to them. Also the [bleep]e thing in the background is just wierd and I don't think it fits.

Not much to add to what's already been said (moon's position is too crowded, shadow too plain, mountains appear and disappear too suddenly).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The glow effect on the character is quite nice, although I reckon you could've added another shade between the glow-shade and the shadow proper, especially when it comes to the arms, torso and staff. It seems too sudden, and the choppy pixel edges really stand out, especially when it's a darkish sig like this one.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

He seems to be missing his hands too. :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Cracks on the stalagmites (stalagtites? Ugh, can never get them right. ><) don't feel very crack-like and more like really dark lines on a not-quite-so-dark surface. Try choosing a lighter shade, maybe?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Looks like your attention sort of wavered in the background, as Elmo said, especially on the ground. Looks too plain, and again as Elmo stated, the mountain appearance and that random tower thing seem far too sudden. You could have dithered the sky a little too, to make the shade change a little smoother instead of gradient-ising it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Not bad, I like the glowish tone to it and the general monochromatic feel to it, but the lightest tones on the blue side of the scale just seem too sudden.

Thanks everyone, Ive always been terrible at Rocky atmosphere's. I needed some crits.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ill try it out on my next rock involved sig. Thanks loads :thumbsup:

can i still say something? if so here are some comments:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Don't use that light and dark lines on the rocks, u have used 1 to light colors for the edge and 1 to dark color for the darker area's on the rock. I would say use 3 or 4 colors to AA the lines so they wil look smoother and give more depth.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(Sorry for my bad english)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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