First Sig W/O using a render

[Coandca5]

Rate it, and CC please :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[Ozzy_Patrick]

Not bad, a few things which I think could be better are:

 

 

 

- The text positioning (shouldn't be touching the boarder in my opinion).

 

 

 

- The text itself (just don't think it fits with the rest of the sig).

 

 

 

- I think the colour on the left is too saturated.

 

 

 

- There's not enough happening on the right side of the sig

 

 

 

- The mixture of grey and green doesn't really go very well in my opinion.

[Coandca5]

The problem with the nothing happening is that when I brush it, the main part is not on that side because the brush is 1024 pixels

[Coandca5]

But I agree with theres not enough happening, but I like how the left contrasts with the right, and how it blends into a darker color

[Coandca5]

anyone else? I made a second one-

 

 

 

[katakid1]

I like the second one, still a little bright to the left, try adding another shading layer, nice brushwork, try for the border a 2 pixel white, and on top of it a 1 pixel black, and try repositioning your text.

[runemetsa]

Both of them have potential, but few things to concentrate on:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- text, choose a font which has something to do with your signature. also work on the color choice. I recommend using white and clipping masks.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- colors, try to use colors that are same kind. specially on the second, there are orange and green?? also you could make the contrast bit more darker. Also low the brightness.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Border, always use black on borders. otherway you could try movieborder

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Not bad, you could work on them to get more positive feedback. And read some tutorials.

[LeonardMart]

that pics hurt my eyes! use a lower saturation next time, and make your text a bit more readable