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[rik]

Ok so i'm worki ng on a new website design for a friend. He asked me to use orange/brown and 2 sprite's in it. So i just started and this are the 2 versions i came up with:

 

 

 

V2

 

 

 

 

V2.1 - border (first read edit)

 

 

 

 

V3

 

 

 

 

 

 

EDIT: Ok so since V1 was bad, V3 with border is terrible i have a v2.1 with border. I hope this version is a bit better :anxious:

 

 

 

Yes i know its a pretty easy to make banner but its what he asked :wink: Also that "the power" is what he wants in it.

 

 

 

C/C and comments :

[Nazgul740]

I would try and add some type of brushing or some such around each character... like a red aura on the lh side and a blue arua around the rh guy... maybe use a really small render in there too

[rik]

I would try and add some type of brushing or some such around each character... like a red aura on the lh side and a blue arua around the rh guy... maybe use a really small render in there too

 

ok i'll try the color idea. Thnx for the comment

[runemetsa]

v2 is definatly better. the overall banner is nice, but it could use a border.

 

 

 

and make the right side black as the left side.

[rik]

v2 is definatly better. the overall banner is nice, but it could use a border.

 

 

 

and make the right side black as the left side.

 

ok ill put these 2 in the new version :P Thanks for the comments :

[LeonardMart]

v2 is the best, maybe add a border like runemetsa said (yay wrote the name right!), and dont you think it looks a bit... empty?

 

also if its possible maybe make the sprites have a bit more the colors of the bg so it looks like theyre drawn on it

 

 

 

but nice! :thumbsup:

[rik]

v2 is the best, maybe add a border

 

 

 

There is a V3 with a border :wink: and its in there already 20-25 mins.. :P

[LeonardMart]

my bad, didnt notice that it says "with border", and as my forum background is black i cant see black borders... anyway i said maybe add a border to v2 and not v3 :P

[Exbaj]

Looks good, just two questions though, what sort of website is this for? and the Rik is there just so people know your making it for now right? like a "Sample" thing... Silly questions I know, just wondering

 

 

 

Anyways as for the banner, the v2 looks best imo so far, the 2 bottom ones seem too um smudged/blurred (I don't really make these sigs at all...struggle to work through all the buttons lol)

 

I guess and the blue definately shows that alot more.

 

 

 

Hope that helps, maybe try gives the sprites more of an "auro" around them, I think that's what your kinda going for, but yeah it's blurring the actual characters too much, it would be good with the quote "The Power".

 

 

 

PS: Mostly don't put effort into cc, just prefer to learn from others work, but you commented and helped me so what the hey :D Thanks again

[runemetsa]

i still like the v2 most. the colors of version 3 is bit off and the border is too big. try to do the movie border about 5 pixels.

[Zoidnerd]

weird size, its not eye popping and no border

[Nazgul740]

Ok rik that blue brushing is teh suck #-o

 

 

 

What i ment was more somthing like detailed in this tutorial with the lighting effects and such but of course on a smaller scale

 

 

 

http://www.dutchdesignz.com/forums/show ... hp?t=17044

 

 

 

You can cut out quite a few of those steps and still get a really nice outcome...

[Zeahessen]

V3 no joke.

[rik]

ok guys thanks for the comments, and i have a V2.1 since almost everyone thinks V2 was better.

[WeeBoab]

as far as i can see its clouds or grunge brushes with 2 sprites and minimal smudging to try and blend them in.

 

 

 

i would do more with it, i would make it like an epic battle between them - hard to explain, but id do it. also, the 1 with the border will ultimately look much better IMO - it gives it a sense of body, of being there (hard to explain again)

 

 

 

V3 is horrible btw - why blue around the guy? it does nothing for the sprite - hes black and purple not dark blue.

[rik]

as far as i can see its clouds or grunge brushes with 2 sprites and minimal smudging to try and blend them in.

 

 

 

i would do more with it, i would make it like an epic battle between them - hard to explain, but id do it. also, the 1 with the border will ultimately look much better IMO - it gives it a sense of body, of being there (hard to explain again)

 

 

 

V3 is horrible btw - why blue around the guy? it does nothing for the sprite - hes black and purple not dark blue.

 

yep first part is right, and i untherstand the battle thing. I also try'd some thing with a battle'ish look but it never looks better then now :anxious: If u have an idea how i possibly could make it look that way, please tell me :

[WeeBoab]

BG image. c4d. smudging. filters. just try and try again. consider it an LP of a sprite battle tag. and btw, its good, but its not great.