April 27, 200719 yr I saw the pics from a guy of the Hogwarts founders, and it inspired me to make a pixel Slytherin :D note that this one has nothing to do with the inspiring one, it was just the idea. Updated version! You will notice that he̢̮â¬Å¡Ãâôs holding 2 of his known relics, his locket (made more or less like the one on the cover of deathly hallows adult edition) and his ring, which would later cause big trouble to Dumbledore :? CC is especially needed for them and most importantly, comment on anatomy and texture, i really had problems making the robes look cloth-like, so comments on how to make it more cloth-like will be a gift. If you think the pixel is crap, ask Nadril to tell me, he has always had style saying how bad people are mehehe Click my main sig to see my fakes :D Proud to be Mexican, yay!
April 27, 200719 yr robe and anatomy are wrong. robe looks FAR too big for someone with his anatomy (id be thinking along the lines of an anarexic IMO due to the arms) the thumb is horrible. doesnt look realistic, and it doesnt look like hes holding the wand, it looks like its falling out his hands. shoulders dont work - the ro be is hard to make out due to the fact its a pure black BG - makes it look like 2 random holes around his neck. the hood is good, but the face isnt. My photobucket
April 27, 200719 yr Author so i make stronger arms, fix the shoulders, make a better thumb and a better face? now, i need to know whats exactly wrong with the face, need help Click my main sig to see my fakes :D Proud to be Mexican, yay!
April 28, 200719 yr His shoulders are weird, and whenever I think of the Hogwarts founders I think of somebody older then what you created, it doesn't really look like someone who would "find" a school, more like a student. His sleeves are too big, and I think it would be better if the glow of his wand was bigger (the glow at the end of the wand).
April 28, 200719 yr ..........If you think the pixel is crap, ask Nadril to tell me, he has always had style saying how bad people are mehehe lol :D anyway it is really goood one of the best pixels i have seen :thumbsup: The anatomy is great aswell! .::>Atza<::..::My sig shopSatans Assasins::.
April 28, 200719 yr the shading makes the piece look like a chunk of cardboard, its good th shade around the object, and the best practice is to look at REAL cloth bending around your arm (power of a mirror) as you draw. another thing is i find the 86 colors you use to be in much excess, i could see that piece done in 12, and even then that is a little much, dithering is used to lower the amount of colors in the piece. and a bit of AA wouldnt hurt either if you need any advice id be free to help Sigs made by Runemetsa, Nuzza, Dark_Shadow, Kuroi and Me.liquid blobs attacking eachother American Anime... YAY!
April 28, 200719 yr With the right arms thumb, maybe make the bottom of it look more distant, because it kinda looks like it's meant to all be part of the thumb where as I think anyway it's meant to be just the fatter bit at the bottom. As for what was said the black needs to be changed if your using a black background, it's way too hard to tell between the two which is taking away from the person's shoulders. Give some more grip to the wand probably wouldn't hurt either. Also making the guy look a little older, I'm not sure how you'd accomplish this, it seems hard but yeah that would make it look pretty good. I like the contrasting and the detail so far, just those things would make it great. 99 / 99 Mining 89 / 99 Smithing 87 / 90 Strength SKILL TOTAL: 1836 / 2000
April 28, 200719 yr make the BG a diff colour and it should look much better. maybe a grey? My photobucket
April 28, 200719 yr Author Updated version! With stronger arms, a bit better face, fixed hand and another few fixes. Removed the cape as it didn̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t really fit, and changed the BG from black to a very dark grey For those who think that he looks too young, I will make an extra version with beard. He actually had one, his statue in the Chamber of secrets is descibed as having a beard that touched the ground (I̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢m not going a beard THAT long!) Bit I like him look young lol the shading makes the piece look like a chunk of cardboardA chunk of cardboard? Lol. Well if you showed me how to make it better id be grateful. another thing is i find the 86 colors you use to be in much excessCorrection: It has 89 colors hehe. BTW why is it so bad that it uses many colors? I personally like using many colorsa bit of AA wouldnt hurt eitherAnd where would you use AA? (aside from the text!) Click my main sig to see my fakes :D Proud to be Mexican, yay!
April 28, 200719 yr Pretty good but make the hood a little thicker and maybe like green fire coming out of his left hand (the empty one) Your name is "bet you fail", and you're starting a business with your mom? I'm not even going to touch that.....
April 28, 200719 yr Author make maybe like green fire coming out of his left hand (the empty one) Exactly that did I consider too, but somehow i don't feel like it :P Click my main sig to see my fakes :D Proud to be Mexican, yay!
April 28, 200719 yr the shading makes the piece look like a chunk of cardboardA chunk of cardboard? Lol. Well if you showed me how to make it better id be grateful. another thing is i find the 86 colors you use to be in much excessCorrection: It has 89 colors hehe. BTW why is it so bad that it uses many colors? I personally like using many colorsa bit of AA wouldnt hurt eitherAnd where would you use AA? (aside from the text!) 1. increase the contrast and lower the amount of colors 2. the point of pixel art was to be used with minimal colors, you dont have to, but it sais MUCH more about your skill if you dont need many colors, contrast is key, as you have many colors, but they all look the same to me, leading to the flat feel 3. the arms, the outside of the character, the hands, t Sigs made by Runemetsa, Nuzza, Dark_Shadow, Kuroi and Me.liquid blobs attacking eachother American Anime... YAY!
April 29, 200719 yr Author well i think ill get into it. anyone got advice on how to make decent hair? Click my main sig to see my fakes :D Proud to be Mexican, yay!
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