started it about 1 hour and a half ago line work to half an hour to get it perfect im gonna update this demon every body part i do im doing the colours then the details heres it so far on my pixel by pixel work

 

 

 

 

 

 

left arms shaded

 

 

 

 

 

 

right arm

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

abit more

 

 

 

nice shading smelly cant wait to see finished product!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Neanderslave

wow!

left arms done i gotta go for an hour still details like eyes to do after all the shading

pretty nice, only 2 suggestions:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

tail looks a tiny bit thick near the begging

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

linework for wings looks funny but idk shouldn't suggest about it till i see final

looks pretty good to me i'll like to see the finished product 8)

its nice.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Wheres the light coming from? all apart from the face is from head on but the face looks as though its coming from the right

im shading from outside to inside so its coming from the bottom right i think

right arm complete

The shading is well done but it's inacurate. The light source on the head is not the same as the light source on the arms and body, which creates some confusion. My suggestion is picking a light source, then making the lightest shade not at the top or the bottom of the arm for example, but a bit towards the middle and have it shade darker down and up, but having the lighter side a bit higher not actually reaching the top to have that cylindrical look.

im gonna finish him in a couple days

The shading is well done but it's inacurate. The light source on the head is not the same as the light source on the arms and body, which creates some confusion. My suggestion is picking a light source, then making the lightest shade not at the top or the bottom of the arm for example, but a bit towards the middle and have it shade darker down and up, but having the lighter side a bit higher not actually reaching the top to have that cylindrical look.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

just what I thought lol :roll: didnt know how to explain it.

The shading is well done but it's inacurate. The light source on the head is not the same as the light source on the arms and body, which creates some confusion. My suggestion is picking a light source, then making the lightest shade not at the top or the bottom of the arm for example, but a bit towards the middle and have it shade darker down and up, but having the lighter side a bit higher not actually reaching the top to have that cylindrical look.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

yea.... thay may improve it.....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

its looking good tho

abit more done

The wings don't look right. They should look more like this dragons wings.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Other thanthat it looks great

The wings don't look right. They should look more like this dragons wings.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Other thanthat it looks great

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Its his demon. He can draw it as he likes :wink:

why didnt u add my shaded gd? :s

 

The wings don't look right. They should look more like this dragons wings.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Other thanthat it looks great

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Its his demon. He can draw it as he likes :wink:

 

 

 

I'm giving my opinion I think the wings look messed up. The only reason he posted this was to get comments about it

That shading looks like it took a long time to do; but you took the long, long way into doing it, and you also chaded some parts wrongly. ^^

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Instead of "pillow" shading (taking a dark tone of the base color and gradually getting light and lighter as you get into the middle) you should select a proper light source, and remeber to stick to it! Making a gradient into the middle is great and makes it look smoother, but not if you have it all around like you have on the body. If the light source was ideed bottom right, the bottom of the head wouldn't be shaded like that.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The shading is the main flaw, but there are a few problems with proportions and all that jazz. Although it seems ot me you've gone for a "cute" look,, it still seems out of place in some parts. The tail looks way to chubby for the body, like it would weight the small demon down a whole lot. xD Also, the feet and hands aren't the same size as eachother; for the hands, the left (our left, not the demon's) hand is bigger; for the feet, the right foot is bigger. Make them around the same size so it looks more real.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

With the shading done like that, it looks like the frontal part of his body is totally flat. He would have some muscle definition tleast, and so you ened to add shading to the chest ares etc to make sure people can see that.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Other then that, the red part of the wings seem to be a bit deformed. But, otehr then what I have mentioned above, it's pretty good. =P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Keep it up!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

tenshi-chan