my first ms paint drawing

[opuim123]

i just registered here awhile ago, so i dont really know how this works this is my first mspaint drawing, i antialiased it so theres no thick lines. rate if you want =)

 

 

 

[Hugger_88]

His right hand fingers are small, but overall nice job! 8/10

[destro3979]

looks great for a first :thumbsup:

 

 

 

but you need some more shading, detail, and texturing :)

[pryomancer]

Nice angle on the character, go for some more detailed shading.

[terley]

its been jpeg'ed and or resized. you've lost the quality.

[Jdprs]

Great job for a First, i really like what you've done here

 

 

 

I'm a little confused though, did you resize it, because its lost some quality

 

 

 

 

 

A few tips:

 

Take a look at some pixeling tutorials and learn better shading

 

The arm on the left is too short and too short, its not natural looking, and the hand isn't right

 

The end of the staff thing (i forget what they are called, haven't played RS in years) is a little misshapen as well

 

 

 

 

^More natural looking arm

[opuim123]

i appreciate the reviews, im aware the arm wasnt exactly good, my human anatomy skills are absolutely horrible, and it has been compressed, because im aware of how bad the lines were up close. Its also compressed so less chance of it being stolen and edited.

 

 

 

as for the dhally part, i honestly didnt pay attention to it lol, but i knew it needed work. I dont take tutorials, i normally do drawings by rough sketch or painting.

 

 

 

As for the shading i honestly have never used mspaint for drawing, and its rare to find me doing human drawings such as this, but i really didnt know what style of shading to use so i made it basic. im more of a concept drawer, so i prefer drawing single objects as u can tell.

 

 

 

ill definetly make some corrections to it once i buy a new mouse