Nadril Posted September 21, 2007 Share Posted September 21, 2007 updated Just working on more of these (abstract/photomanips) and came up with this. Trying to work on my composition a bit, hopefully you'll like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted September 21, 2007 Share Posted September 21, 2007 I love it! but then, i love all your work! it seems, there can be something done though, maybe lighten it a bit? its a tad to dark, i think nice job on the font 9.9/10 just a tad to dark for me! cant wait to see more nadril! 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted September 21, 2007 Author Share Posted September 21, 2007 Thanks. I wasn't sure what to really do about the lighting issue. I didn't want the middle (light water) part to be too light and to take away the focus so I darkened it a bit. I may mess around with it a bit more later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted September 21, 2007 Share Posted September 21, 2007 Thanks. I wasn't sure what to really do about the lighting issue. I didn't want the middle (light water) part to be too light and to take away the focus so I darkened it a bit. I may mess around with it a bit more later. Alright, lookin forward to it! i was thinking, maybe, select the leaves and play around with the colour, so you dont mess it up, but play around with it before you do that, cause i dont know if it would wokr 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted September 21, 2007 Author Share Posted September 21, 2007 So you think that the leaves (the green abstract) should be brightened and the water is fine? I was actually thinking the same thing while working on it, but my roomate wanted to get in some leveling on lineage II so I stopped there. I'll try and see what I can do, the abstract is on its own layer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted September 21, 2007 Share Posted September 21, 2007 So you think that the leaves (the green abstract) should be brightened and the water is fine? I was actually thinking the same thing while working on it, but my roomate wanted to get in some leveling on lineage II so I stopped there. I'll try and see what I can do, the abstract is on its own layer. here, ill show you what i think should be brightend, gimme a sec :P 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted September 21, 2007 Author Share Posted September 21, 2007 Ah I see. A bit of green could actually help that dark splotch a good bit. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted September 21, 2007 Share Posted September 21, 2007 Ah I see. A bit of green could actually help that dark splotch a good bit. :D hehe yeah 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted September 21, 2007 Author Share Posted September 21, 2007 new old improvement? :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted September 21, 2007 Share Posted September 21, 2007 new old improvement? :) Yes and no, try, maybe keeping that white line in, and removing/ dimming down the like, green glow on the water lol, other than that yeah EDIT: leave the green, but put the white line back in, the corner there, i like the glow now that i look at it :P 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted September 21, 2007 Author Share Posted September 21, 2007 new old improvement? :) Yes and no, try, maybe keeping that white line in, and removing/ dimming down the like, green glow on the water lol, other than that yeah I'm not too sure about the white line, I never really intended for it to be there lol. I'll get the green a bit back. Problem is the dark spot was a shadow on the wtaer, not a leaf. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted September 21, 2007 Share Posted September 21, 2007 new old improvement? :) Yes and no, try, maybe keeping that white line in, and removing/ dimming down the like, green glow on the water lol, other than that yeah I'm not too sure about the white line, I never really intended for it to be there lol. I'll get the green a bit back. Problem is the dark spot was a shadow on the wtaer, not a leaf. :) oh umm, try, selecting the darker spot, and playing with brightness and contrast, and if not, play with like the colors, try and match the blue you know what i mean? just select it with like, the lasso tool or something 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted September 21, 2007 Author Share Posted September 21, 2007 I think I like this version a bit better. I really can't do anything with the dark splotch, but I like this the best probably. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted September 21, 2007 Share Posted September 21, 2007 I think I like this version a bit better. I really can't do anything with the dark splotch, but I like this the best probably. doesnt work 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted September 21, 2007 Author Share Posted September 21, 2007 Whoops I'm an idiot, heres the correct link. ps: going to bed now. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted September 21, 2007 Share Posted September 21, 2007 Whoops I'm an idiot, heres the correct link. ps: going to bed now. :) yeah im about to go to bed too, Yeah, i think your done, because that part wont get any better, the green "glow" looks alot better too! it looks great! if this is, the final one looks good, id say your done neways \ :thumbsup: =D> glad i could be of some help too :) 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted September 21, 2007 Share Posted September 21, 2007 Latest version looks great, no C/C on that one. I would love to see more work of you soon. : pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted September 21, 2007 Author Share Posted September 21, 2007 Thanks. So does anyone think its better than my current sig? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted September 21, 2007 Share Posted September 21, 2007 Thanks. So does anyone think its better than my current sig? i wouldnt say that, but its good, your current sig, amazing :P 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainy_Day Posted September 21, 2007 Share Posted September 21, 2007 Looks good, lacks vibrant colours though. 7/10 :) ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)RIP Michaelangelopolous Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThruItAll Posted September 21, 2007 Share Posted September 21, 2007 Undercontrasted IMO. Definately not your best. The 'leaves' look like c4ds. :P Good job on them, but just undercontrasted and a bit boring. (Not much going on.) 8.5/10. Not your best. But I'm in love with your current. danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted September 21, 2007 Author Share Posted September 21, 2007 Undercontrasted IMO. Definately not your best. The 'leaves' look like c4ds. :P Good job on them, but just undercontrasted and a bit boring. (Not much going on.) 8.5/10. Not your best. But I'm in love with your current. The 'leaves' are 3D renders. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThruItAll Posted September 21, 2007 Share Posted September 21, 2007 Undercontrasted IMO. Definately not your best. The 'leaves' look like c4ds. :P Good job on them, but just undercontrasted and a bit boring. (Not much going on.) 8.5/10. Not your best. But I'm in love with your current. The 'leaves' are 3D renders. :D Oh yeah, you like to call them 3D Renders. P.S, can you check out my gallery, started doing stuff serious now. Its a few topics down, or check the gallery index. danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sct_snake Posted September 21, 2007 Share Posted September 21, 2007 Undercontrasted IMO. Definately not your best. The 'leaves' look like c4ds. :P Good job on them, but just undercontrasted and a bit boring. (Not much going on.) 8.5/10. Not your best. But I'm in love with your current. The 'leaves' are 3D renders. :D Oh yeah, you like to call them 3D Renders. P.S, can you check out my gallery, started doing stuff serious now. Its a few topics down, or check the gallery index. Or click the link in your sig. Oops :oops: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThruItAll Posted September 21, 2007 Share Posted September 21, 2007 Wrong topic. :P danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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