Here it is, I need to work on shading, because the shading i did on the Character you can barely notice. very slight Colour change

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Double post oops

Feel free to rate, or comment ;)

first of all :shock:

 

 

 

second of all :lol:

 

 

 

lastly, 10/10 *claps hand* :) :) :)

tyvm and :shock: and :lol: to you too ;)

gah!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

YOU RUINED THE TOFFEE!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

*sobs*

Looks like Varrock is going to stay lonly (H)

Btw, me and Alex are homies ;) Want some toffee? I only dropped half behind the censor! :lol:

oh, and i have yet to add the citizens of varrock all fainting XD

not very good...very little shading done at all. none it the sky.... no real scene... no shadows put in..and absolutely no perspective

Gee, thank you very much....I mentioned shading before, I used very little because it was a minor colour change. The scene is Varrock square, and I am working on making citizens. ( i will give them shadows, and my character a shadow) and last but not least, the perspective was from the beginning wrong, but as I fixed it, it became a 3rd person perspective infront of the nudist. In order to show the ground and fountain, i kind of had to change the ground "line" Thank you for the C/C this was not ment to be a flame, but i will change what you said, that i think was constructive.

sorry, im not good at wording stuff.. wasnt meant to be a flame.. let's see

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

There should be more shading.. it should be gradual and get darker according to light source (dont pillowshade i know you didnt this time but dont or else :twisted: ) try to make a more perspective look.. it should look as if you were looking at it from whatever abgle you put it out.. don't forget any details..although overlooked sometimes they make the sig tons better,, and err thats all i can think of as of now

You got very lazy on the shading from what i could tell. im not that big a fan of this one.

i'm working on it ;) i'm lazy again kind of...I used burn aroudn the fountain, but you'll see here in a sec what i mean.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I know the burn is VERY messy but i'll fix it laaater. I did box shading (or line shading, w/e) on the building, its not very obvious, but it's a detail :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edit: When i exported, it must not have read the other shades of grey on the building, i'll fix that later. Also, I can't upload sigs to my profile, its jacked up, so i have no idea why i did this XD

i give it 7/10... its not so funny... but good effort

You need to fill in the BG a little more... and maybe add some more shading. ;p

is that a man or a woman? i can't tell :shock:

Dude is she... naked? It sure looks like it and besides she's teh uglyyyy In other words... I hate it