A decent second attempt. Try to add more shading in the green, and make your trees brown not green. The wizard's hat is too pointy. Try to make it look more like a "real" wizard hat, like Jagex does. The staff doesn't look like a saradomin staff but instead a fork-type spear thingish.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Basically, put another hour or two into your signatures and work your best with shading and getting it all right... especially those clouds. I don't think you're in kindergarden.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Good job.

 

 

 

4/10.

Book is a bit too square...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Nice job for a second 5/10

Add more depth in the hills, and more shadow. Very good for a second attempt at pixeling though.

A decent second attempt. Try to add more shading in the green, and make your trees brown not green. The wizard's hat is too pointy. Try to make it look more like a "real" wizard hat, like Jagex does. The staff doesn't look like a saradomin staff but instead a fork-type spear thingish.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Basically, put another hour or two into your signatures and work your best with shading and getting it all right... especially those clouds. I don't think you're in kindergarden.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Good job.

 

 

 

4/10.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

yeah, i pretty much gave up on shading background. you pixel dudes have a lot of patience lol.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and the saradomin staff err.. yeah.. its supposed to be a fork-type spear thing. yeah thats it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thanks for ur comments, ill keep this in mind next time :)

Im loving the text :D