Metroid Prime Signature (Updated V2)

[hardwick246]

I just got a Wii and got Metroid Prime 3: Corruption with it. Well I got addicted which is why I have nott been on so much. Well I got bored and decided to put hours of work into this piece of work.

 

 

 

I believe it is my best signature I have made my whole "career."

 

I love how I used all sorts of explosive colors, blended the render, and the font suited it. Lighting the focus points and using curves.

 

 

 

Please post any C/C. There is nothing I can think of to change. I tryed to avoid putting too many C4D's and fill the signature.

 

 

 

Render:

 

 

 

1st Try then I restarted:

 

 

 

 

 

 

V1:

 

 

 

 

V2:

 

(Change cannon's lens flare, brightened up left side, added better border, and moved/darkened red C4D to the right of Samus's head)

 

 

 

[yaff2]

very nice hardwicks. it sucks not seeing you around, i look up to you man!

 

 

 

9/10 on that

 

 

 

the only thing is, the font, maybe take the glow and lower it, that area is to bright for my taste

[hardwick246]

I made the hand/arm the focal point and the weapon a little light. I meant for it to be bright. It's all taste though. :wink:

[yaff2]

I made the hand/arm the focal point and the weapon a little light. I meant for it to be bright. It's all taste though. :wink:

 

 

 

oh yeah, no doubt

 

 

 

still looks awesome, just to bright IMO but, if you like it, whys my opinion matter :P :P

[ThruItAll]

Stick a lens flare in her cannon, spark it up. Or do a radial gradient. C4d at the back doesn't appeal too me, maybe cover it up a bit, but so you can still see it. My rating is 8/10.

[rik]

i agree with ThruItAll, but i would also say that the border could use some more work, because this border make the sig look to plain and empty somehow.

 

 

 

keep up the good work :

[Rainy_Day]

Not bad. :)

 

 

 

The left side looks a little dull in my opinion, follow ThruItAll's advise and add a Lens Flare on the cannon.

 

 

 

8/10, keep it up. ^_^

[ThruItAll]

i agree with panda, but i would also say that the border could use some more work, because this border make the sig look to plain and empty somehow.

 

 

 

keep up the good work :

 

 

 

Am I panda?

 

Hehe.

[yaff2]

i agree with panda, but i would also say that the border could use some more work, because this border make the sig look to plain and empty somehow.

 

 

 

keep up the good work :

 

 

 

Am I panda?

 

Hehe.

 

 

 

hes going by your avy lol, i got confused when he said that too

[rik]

i agree with panda, but i would also say that the border could use some more work, because this border make the sig look to plain and empty somehow.

 

 

 

keep up the good work :

 

 

 

Am I panda?

 

Hehe.

 

 

 

hes going by your avy lol, i got confused when he said that too

 

oops :oops: yes.. i think i got a bit confused by the avvy yeah :oops: :P

[hardwick246]

I can look forward into those. Mind giving me some opinions on the different types of borders? :?:

 

 

 

I'll stick the original render in there and you can see the different in the cannon. I did put a light source there, but I guess it isn't bright enough. :-k

 

 

 

The back of samus is boring because of the light effect from her arm. I could try to brighten it up a big, but the point is to use the focus point.

 

 

 

By the C4D in the back do you mean the red one to the right of samus's head?

[hardwick246]

Updated

[yaff2]

v2 better nice border

[hardwick246]

Thanks. I also made some other small adjustments. :-w

[navyplaya]

V2 is very nice. Most deffinately better.