Looks good. I'm realy liking the colors in this one, and the abstract is nice like usual :D

its really good :D i like pretty much everything about it, i see hidden faces!

its really good :D i like pretty much everything about it, i see hidden faces!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Umm... you do? Might wanna get that checked buddy...

you seriousely didnt put any hidden faces in there? aww man ive gone crazy.. :shock: :?

you seriousely didnt put any hidden faces in there? aww man ive gone crazy.. :shock: :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I sure didn't lol. Circle where you see the faces, and I'll check it out in the morning lol. :lol:

you seriousely didnt put any hidden faces in there? aww man ive gone crazy.. :shock: :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Nah man, that's just a sign of genious.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~Cal

Wow that looks sweet. In the middle of the purple part I can distinctly make out a bird lookin face. Looks kool! :P

Wow that looks sweet. In the middle of the purple part I can distinctly make out a bird lookin face. Looks kool! :P

 

 

 

No one is crazy here..lol :lol: , I can see the head of a bird (an eagle..I DK :shock: ), but is a pretty good work :D

i can see faces!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

its well good man, keep it up!

Nice abstract :) A bigger size would look great, and some subtle airbrushing or something else in the background would finish it up nicely.

a render with no real texure and a random name does not make art. add textures and dont just create random render actually aim for something.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

nice colour though

I like the colours and the abstract :D What did you make it in?

C4D, and ps7. As for Kane's post... I'm not sure how to take it. I don't frown upon heavy critisism.... but how exactly would I fix it more besides adding a better texture?

ye i dont mean to be heavy thats just how it comes out. Try maybe some glassy textures on ur original render because then the brush work will look better and dont do too many overlays.

ye i dont mean to be heavy thats just how it comes out. Try maybe some glassy textures on ur original render because then the brush work will look better and dont do too many overlays.

I'd say it's very over done. Oversaturated and overcontrastic. Try to make things look good without piling it up from things like that. :)

a render with no real texure and a random name does not make art. add textures and dont just create random render actually aim for something.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The name, textures and colours may not be great, but they can be fixed. They are just eye candy that will make the whole image appear slightly better... Any designer will be able to see through these minor flaws to find out if the artist has potential talent or not.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I think it's the composition and model that makes this piece feel 'pro'. And those are the things that can't be fixed, without recreating the whole thing. (but as I mentioned, the small size is a bummer, and that also can't be fixed)

I like the colors, strongest part of the piece. Good job on those.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The weakest is easily the title. I expected something that would fit...it didn't.